Fragrance in Her Hands

The author must have read a lot of *Dream of the Red Chamber*, because the recurring phrase about burnt scrolls is rather odd.

She was easily fooled by Cui Hao's casual remarks, giving him everything he said and did, which didn't seem like adult behavior at all. Furthermore, all the children in the show were almost supernaturally intelligent, while the female lead acted like a normal seven-year-old. Was it because Cui Hao was the male lead? Was she treated differently and needed to appear foolish towards him?

I really can't imagine how a four-year-old girl could dance so gracefully and have such delicate hands. Did the author skip kindergarten? Doesn't she know what a young child looks like?

Honestly, this book has a lot of fresh and interesting elements. It's just that the characters' speech is a bit strange, and it's very didactic, especially the female lead who's transmigrated into a child. Goodness, she's always worrying about everything, and she forces herself to reason with everyone she says. It's a bit unbearable. Was this written by an older woman? Hahaha.

The author seems to have made a mistake with the couplet. "Flowers and leaves" and "lush green and red" don't match "Nine Heavens and Nine Earths," do they? Aren't couplets supposed to have the same number of characters? Please revise.

The Arab world is ancient Arabian, right? It should be speaking Old Persian.

Addressing someone usually involves adding a definite "er" (or "er"), like "Yu Ge'er" (玉哥儿). Simply saying "Yu Ge" (玉哥) feels really strange.

It's well written, I'll vote for it and keep it up!

The writing style still needs improvement. Some ornate language should not be piled up arbitrarily. As long as the historical background of the novel is not seriously wrong, it is acceptable. However, the character descriptions must be realistic. There are too many great authors of ancient romance novels, which makes readers have high standards. The author of this novel did indeed do some research, but the details are still lacking. Otherwise, the results should have been better.

What makes this book truly special is that it doesn't hate women; it genuinely aims to save kind-hearted people.