Fragrance in Her Hands

I guess the author has read Dream of Red Mansions a lot, and the phrase "burnt papers" always comes up, which is weird.

Being fooled by Cui Hao and giving away everything he said casually didn't feel like an adult at all. Moreover, all the children here are so smart that they are almost demonic, but the female protagonist is just like a normal seven-year-old child. Is it because Cui Hao is the male protagonist? Do you need to act silly to treat him differently?

I really can't imagine how a four-year-old girl can dance so beautifully and have delicate hands. Did the author skip kindergarten? Don't know what a child looks like?

Really, this book has quite a lot of spices, it's very fresh and quite beautiful. Even the characters' speeches are weird and full of preaching, especially the heroine dressed as a child. Oh my God, I can't stop worrying about it. I can't stand it when I say something and force myself to make sense. Was it written by an old aunt? Hahaha

Was the author wrong about the pair? Flowers and leaves. How come Cuicuihonghong is of the ninth level of heaven and the ninth level of earth? Aren't the pairs all the same number of words? Change

Isn't Dashi ancient Arabia? It should speak ancient Persian.

Titles are usually given with a prefix, such as Brother Yu. It feels weird to just say Brother Yu directly.

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The writing is pretty good. Please vote for it. Come on.

The writing style still needs to be refined, and some gorgeous words cannot be piled up randomly. The dynastic background of the novel should not make any big mistakes, but the character description must be realistic. There are too many great masters in ancient Chinese, which makes readers have high standards. The author of this novel did check the information, but the details are still insufficient, otherwise the results should be better.