Alchemy's True Life

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Author, let me share my personal suggestions. 1. The early stage was too bland. The protagonist Golden Finger was not shown and no conflicts were established. Just introduce the background blindly, implying how miraculous and complicated the protagonist's life experience is. To be honest, in my opinion, the protagonist is not awesome at all. His teachers are dead. If he is not dead, he can still be considered a gold finger and pretend to be a b. 2. Personally, I think the most important thing is for newcomers to think about it and feel comfortable. Maybe most novices have a dream of becoming a great god, so they will work hard on the protagonist's life experience or other insignificant things. I even thought in my heart, "I want to write a legendary story, and I have to start slowly in the early stages to develop the story." This is the most meaningless. Maybe the author himself thinks that the story will be exciting later, not to mention whether it is exciting or not. Even if it is exciting, the early stage is boring and boring, and no one will read it. 3. There were too many character names in the first few chapters. I didn't find out who the protagonist was until Chapter 4. If you were impatient, you would probably give up after a chapter or two. 4. The writing style of the protagonist is actually pretty good, better than most of the brainless writers. The language and action descriptions are okay, but the scenes alternate a bit too quickly. But the fact is that mindless face-slapping posts will be more popular than you. 5. In short, novices don't need to think about an epic story with twists and turns and bizarre legendary protagonists. The most important reason why a great god is a great god is that his books can make readers laugh or cry, that is, feel happy, laugh, or cry. The grand world view and the twists and turns of life are just for coloring, and they are just for readers to remember after reading (just the icing on the cake), so don't abandon the original and focus on the last. 6. I suggest the author to read Shuangwen and learn how to make it cool. With your writing style, as long as you know how to make it cool, regardless of being a master, v5 still has a chance.

The writing is good, support by collecting 😜😜

It's over one million words, come on!

The boy came to visit with his new book "Mourning". I hope you will be greatly appreciated! And congratulations on writing books that are getting better and better!

0.0 The last two characters of the title of my newly opened book are the same as yours. 😰 What a coincidence~

The paragraph is a bit long, and the reading experience on mobile phones is not very good. If it were still the era of PC, the data might not be so miserable.

Xuanxuan-chan, would you like to ask if there will be a female protagonist in this book? (｡･∀･)ﾉﾞヾ(･ω･.)

Is the cover of Stressful Machinery City 🤐🤐

... After reading nine chapters, it's not attractive at all, even with your subject matter...

Please ask the author not to add some fantasy elements and Chinese culture into it.