Spider-Man Justice Live

After reading a few chapters, I don't know what kind of books the author usually reads. The perspective is a bit cut in and out. I don't have enough writing skills to do this. If you like to write in the first person, I might as well change it. I'll write a few third parts first. When writing a book, the writing style is learned from the books you usually read, the style of writing is cultivated, the plot is based on personal imagination or you can just copy it, and the logic of the world view must be clear. The most serious problem is that the pig's feet have not established an image at all. Don't say that you were emotionally castrated by the emotional severance technique in 2100, and later caused an anti-snake meeting because of your sister. You can go directly to the enemy, fight, and show off. At least write it down, don't say how you set it up, just say a few sentences. Pigfoot is an extraordinary detective, eager to dig out the secret of the organization that made him. DSB is still the secret of tsb. He feels betrayed by his teammates, but still longs for friendship and trusts his teammates. The most important thing about the first person is psychological activities and emotional interaction. No one can write about a machine in the first person. Later on, if you turn into Spider-Man to save teammates or fight villains, you can write for a long time. In the third chapter, you grab your teammates by the neck and lift them up without anyone shooting. Later, they come out of the shadows to applaud and praise you. It is more unrealistic than a light novel, and the plot is not exciting 🙂

The writing is quite novel, please keep updating. It has been collected and supported. If you have time, please support each other. ~

Call me, come on, it's so good, it would be weird not to sign the contract.

Too strong. Have you seen Tun Hui?

The writing is okay, but the plot is not familiar. It looks interesting. Come on, try not to stop updating, I believe the results will come up after signing the contract. Um, I'm saving it, it's best to update it as soon as possible. By the way, remember to pay attention to each other. Go and collect my books too. Favoring and encouraging each other is not

There are also first-person novels these days, Farewell

Tbs? That organization in Aotumanli?