Invincible Skills

The feel of the book is okay. The content is very novel. I have only read a dozen or so pictures. But I feel that the characters have no distinctive features and the characters are very bland and unattractive. The first ten pictures I have read feel very confusing and the logic is always stuck. I always have to go back to the previous ones to compare. I don't know if there will be any changes later, so I don't dare to BB

There are over 200 chapters and only 19 posts, so few

If the writing is better, this should be a masterpiece. However, I was too tired to read it and couldn't complain, so I decided to abandon the book.

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is terrible.

185-182=20🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓

What I wrote before is pretty good. It's just that the writing of the battle scenes was too confusing.

How should I put it, the subject matter is okay, but the writing style is a bit poor. Needs to be improved. The dialogue between the characters is too secondary, and the whole story is like a running account.

Chapter 1 The protagonist wakes up and gets up to eat Go out. When we arrive at the platform, maybe there are not many people because of the time! Morning? Noon Afternoon? Arrived in the countryside? It's a deserted mountain and old forest The villagers looked at the protagonist strangely, "What are you doing here so late?" It's been almost a day? The protagonist was knocked unconscious in the early hours of the morning and I was curious as to what time he slept. Chapter 2 It took about ten minutes to go up the mountain Seeing the monster hammered to death Not enough time, only tens of seconds left Using the help of a building to leap home? Are there buildings on the road from the village to the town? Or is the protagonist able to fly? Maybe I'm in the country? I really haven't seen it. The above protagonist doesn't know what time it is in the evening. "Suppose the Armor Transformation starts at 5 pm" Chapter 3 The protagonist sleeps until noon and eats and looks at his phone for a while At 4 o'clock, the "Armor Transformation" cools down and starts again Chapter 4 The next day, the protagonist uses Armor Transformation again: 4 pm The sky turns red and the protagonist goes to fight monsters Seeing the death of soldiers, the protagonist actually transforms again? What is the cooling time? No cooldown time?

Your first novel in life, I hope to read the second one

The plot is a bit confusing 😵

Xiaobai's novel looks like a novel from ten years ago, and the setting is quite interesting.

If you don't even have chapter names, and you don't take your work seriously, how can others read it?

La la la, let me check in. Cheers to the author! 😁

It's not rigorous enough. There are problems in the first chapter. How can I read the rest?

Chapter 1: The son who is 1.6 Meters tall has become 1.8 Meters tall. His mother actually recognizes him at a glance and has no fluctuation in her heart.

Xiaobai's writing is not good, and there are a lot of, and then, poisonous points in the article, vomiting blood. . .

This book is good for the time being

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is a bit poor.

It was jumping too fast. A few days ago, I was just beating little monsters, and then suddenly an evil god came.

The writing process is still like writing a diary. I am very tired of reading it. The main character in the book has the brain of an otaku, and everything he writes is the fantasy of an otaku.

Second grade novel, I have read too many Aotuman.

Does anyone know what anime that armor transformation is from?

This author is a great person. If he can write a million words like this, he will become a great person in the future.

In the chapter "Water Numbers", read the system panel several times. It is suitable for beginners. Book readers who are more than a year old must not click on it. 🙏

Just watched it! Since there is no age, then the problem arises! The emergence of talents can turn fat people into men, can they turn old people into young people?

My writing is a bit poor, I could use more practice. It feels like a junior high school student is writing it. The idea is good and the concept is okay.