The Legend of Saiwen

First, you must persevere. Don't give up midway, get stuck, or end up unfinished. It's normal to not update as expected, but don't give up. Second, don't be afraid of poor writing. For writing fan fiction, as long as the cause and effect of the matter are clearly described, the person who writes it is not a professional writer after all. Real professional writers probably can't write fan fiction either. Third, the plot of the original story can be briefly described, but cannot be omitted. For the original plot that is considered unimportant, it must be briefly described without omitting the past. What you want to write is a complete story, not a diary. At the very least, people who have never seen the original work should be able to roughly understand what happened in the middle. Fourth, try to reduce the creation of irrelevant plots, and modify or extend the original story plot. Most readers who read fan fiction will not read plots that the authors have painstakingly created themselves. When seeing such an unfamiliar chapter, most people will choose to skip it. It's okay to change the original plot, but don't write some completely unrelated chapters that are similar to extra chapters. For example, when writing about Naruto, try not to write about mission plots that are not included in the original work. When encountering such a story, many people choose to skip it. Fifth, in addition to the protagonist and supporting characters, reduce the number of fictional characters created by the author. If there are many characters in a certain work that are not in the original story, it will be difficult for readers to accept it and they will not be able to figure out the relationship between the characters. Necessary characters can be fictional, but try to keep them to single digits. New fictional characters should have prototypes as much as possible so that readers can adapt to them as quickly as possible. Sixth, be able to withstand abuse and stick to principles. The psychological quality must be good. No matter how you write, you will be criticized, insulted, intimidated, ridiculed... The work is your own, and you must insist on your own creation. Let those who curse die. Seventh, don't wear random clothes. In a work, try not to mix characters from other works. You can learn from the plots, skills, character prototypes, etc. Of other works. Eighth, the settings should be clear. For some unique settings, explain them in the story instead of writing them in related documents. Many readers don't look at the relevant settings. Ninth, YY is the kingly way, don't be afraid of criticism. Without YY, there would be no point in writing fan fiction. It is precisely because of YY that it attracts attention. Tenth, don't go back. Unless there is a flaw, don't go back and make changes. It is advisable to continue writing, and do not follow the advice of some readers and go back to drastically change the plot. Eleventh, what you like is the most important thing. If you create or adapt stories and characters that you don't like, fan fiction will lose its vitality. Twelfth, don't be afraid to overturn the original settings and release packages. Many novels and animations constantly overturn their own settings, and a story without flaws is incomplete. Thirteenth, the chapters should be clear, and avoid no titles or chapters. The number of words in the title should be between 4 and 15 words. If the chapter is not clear, many readers will forget where they last saw it after the author updates it. 14. The number of words in each chapter should be controlled at around 2,000-5,000 words. Too short or too long will affect the reading effect.

Good looking... Come on

In fact, to be honest, the character of this protagonist is a bit strange... Sero's daughter? Are you sure it's not Severn? If it's Zero's younger sister, I'd still like to watch it. I can see that it's a daughter, and I feel heartbroken Because Zero's character is originally a 17-year-old boy who will never change, handsome, domineering, cold and humorous. These are the characteristics of a teenager, and in a certain way, this is what most people think of. Whether it is the original work or a fanfic, Zero will always be just a sunny boy, strong, a little rebellious, considerate, and like a domineering president. Suddenly seeing such a "cute" young Ultraman having a daughter, most Austrian fans would not accept it, which indirectly led to a decrease in the number of readers. This is a problem in terms of character design. I originally just wanted to make a suggestion, but I saw that the author has updated more than forty chapters, and I can't change it even if I want to. So I can only express my opinion here. If you don't like it, you can ignore it. Maybe my words are a bit critical, but I never mean it (that's what I say... And I am a proper Siro fan٩(๑> ₃ <)۶, so it may be some personal bias) Finally, cheers

I think it's still readable, but the first-person perspective is a bitch, especially when the protagonist is a female, and it's hard for readers to feel involved. After all, this is a male video, and there are mostly male readers.

It is recommended to write in the third person. There will be many bugs in the first person. For example, how do you know other people's psychological activities in the first person? It is not rigorous.

Nexus: Krypton gold is nothing, I want you to know what krypton life is

Am I the only one reading this book? If so, please reply

It feels okay, but why is it in the first person?

Isn't Severn's daughter Saka?