Cold Pillow

The opening chapter was estimated to be 10,000 words, which made Master Shan confused, but it doesn't matter, it's not incomprehensible. Here is a reminder to the author, it is recommended that the number of words in each chapter should not be too many in the future. Now let's talk about this book. In my opinion, the title and introduction of this book are more direct to the subject than the content. In other words, this writing style is too slow to be used in male videos, and it is easy for readers to miss the key point, that is, what is the main plot? If you look at the title, you know it's the unlucky guy. Well, someone is unlucky. The beginning is like a wedge. If possible, the rhythm and theme need to be clearer. Of course, if the author is unwilling, just pretend that the author has not said anything. Two teenagers riding women's motorcycles are driving on the road. One has a flat head and the other has a bullet head. They have a sense of déjà vu as a non-mainstream middle school boy. The dialogue between the characters is not awkward. The mention of a box called a shoe box is suspected to be foreshadowing... Maybe the subsequent story will revolve around that box. It is just a guess. There is also mention of ascended ones later. Well, when I took a look at the classification, it turned out that they were urban powers under the large category of cities. So this ascension probably does not mean what it means in traditional fantasy. You can read it in the book to find out what it is specifically. It can be seen that the author put a lot of effort into writing the book, and also had the idea of ​​adding humorous elements to the text, but the character creation needs to be strengthened. In any case, since you have put in the effort and worked hard, it will definitely get better and better in the future. I hope the author will continue to work hard. No more eunuchs, give readers a complete story. Looking forward to~

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Uh, I saw it. Evaluation: It's okay, but the male protagonist is obviously inflated, and the female contractor is written in the same way as the female CEO, with less swear words. Thank you.

Du Niang looked for your book and looked up the introduction. It turned out that the name was the same. Yours was not there, so I had to type it by hand. 😰

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Dear author, I wanted to ask where this cover was made, and I found it is the same as another book I am following 😂