Sand Ninja

First of all, your character setting is not good enough. I can tell you a few specific details on how to write them, but I'm too lazy to write them. In terms of plot, there are not many ups and downs at the beginning, it is really boring, there is no goal in sight at all, and it does not give readers a sense of expectation. The writing style and light novel writing style are okay, but some details are superfluous. Two words: "refined", don't write nonsense in the first few chapters, the word count has not reached the limit yet. I don't know if you have an outline. If not, try to write one, both in outline and in detail. I can also tell you a few details on how to write an outline, but I am too lazy to write it because you may not actually write it. In addition, your cover is very nice, but the introduction is too artistic and confusing, and you can't see the selling point, so it won't attract people. Currently, it is recommended that you don't read too soon. It's better to publish new books with fewer words, wait for recommendations, revise the novel, read it a few times, remove anything you think is bad, and compare it with other popular books. Finally, I would like to emphasize one point, don't talk about eunuchs lightly. The first book must be written to more than 800,000 words no matter what. Only in this way can you have a certain probability of understanding the rules of online writing. Because I am also writing a Naruto fanfic, so I like your Naruto book with a nice cover (I draw the wind control), and I saw you commenting for comments, so I would like to say a few words. — Well, in the end, I am just speaking from my own point of view and do not mean to force you. In other words, if you believe it, just believe it. If you don't believe it, just laugh it off. — Don't refute or slander me. I'm a stupid person and I can't slander anyone. I don't agree, the above few sentences are just my convulsions and self-righteousness. Be sure not to spray me. Figure it out for yourself. Only you can solve your problem yourself. I just point out that I am not a bad person and will not help you solve it.

It's hard to understand at first. It's impossible for a ninja to join a team of elites and jounin just to save a civilian cannon fodder.

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