Desperate Detachment

When I first read the first few chapters, I felt that the characters' emotions when facing various crises were particularly real. But since adding wisdom, the protagonist seems to have distorted his intelligence, acting pretentious and chattering, and making anti-social remarks. Um? ? ? ? Where is my intellectual protagonist? The most important thing is that whenever he sees the protagonist showing off, the author will ask the narrator to praise the protagonist for his intelligence. Well, there are a lot of clever things, but forget about the wise man character, it's written crookedly. The protagonist is not an idol and what kind of character is he going to debut with? Well, the story and the game are quite interesting, but the character design for the protagonist who is crazy and pretentious is too poisonous. I feel like the first three chapters and the following were not written by the same person at all.

I just saw today that I don't want this pen name anymore, and Old Tang is over. It's really sad. To be honest, I really like this article. Old Tang is a very fulfilling character, and he is also my favorite character. But it's too late to say this now. I don't know if the author will see this, but I still want to say: What you wrote is really good, I really didn't lie to you If you want to continue writing, please keep your original intention of writing. Although it is difficult to walk as an author, and there are many unfriendly voices, you have to believe that there are still people who like the articles you write, the characters you describe, and the stories you tell. Come on! Also I'm late, sorry

Come on, author＾0＾~＾0＾~

It's rare to see a novel in the God Space genre that's well written. I'd like to vote for a monthly vote to improve it 😃

**After reading this, I vomited the following part. It was so poisonous that it forcibly lowered the character of the protagonist and lowered the quality of the article.

The early stage can be said to be great. The possible catch is the sudden change of character, but the author handled it very well. In general, although the male protagonist will remind the woman next door how to get out of trouble at the beginning, he decisively runs away to avoid the danger when he is really in danger. Without the Virgin, he will not be able to walk when he sees a woman crying and has to go up to save others and put himself in danger (it is not a novel that needs to be written further. This kind of person can't survive more than three chapters The reading experience is excellent (it is not a loss to recommend the author Then it starts to collapse in the middle (character development begins) Collapse The main world put itself in danger in order to save Du Chang. There is no benefit (nothing was promised Secondly, Du Chang likes your teammates, and your teammates have not yet joined, and you started to resist the pot?? The previous image of being calm and self-centered but still having a bottom line has completely collapsed. The chapters before the main world are still highly recommended to read. After the main world, benevolent people have different views on benevolence and wisdom.

This book is okay. Except for San Zha and Fei Gua, I don't see many people writing this kind of novels well. Come on, the recommendation vote for San Zha is gone. They are all yours.

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I haven't finished it yet, but I couldn't stand the Kung Fu chapter. The plot is blunt and the characters are strange and inferior.

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Not so good! The first puzzle world feels pretty good and quite attractive. It all started with kung fu and I didn't know what I was doing. The first is the mission release. You just follow the plot, you can finish it in a while, and there are no events that interfere with the normal progress of the mission. If the protagonist hadn't committed suicide on his own, there wouldn't be anything to add, which would be equivalent to watching the whole show! That's not to say that the protagonist can't act, but you obviously followed the mission throughout and didn't hide the plot. The funniest thing is that you tricked yourself into dying. You knew that the doctor was unusual but you didn't think about exploring the hidden mission. Four summary: Very painful! In the end, he was targeted and ran home. I really don't know whether he forgot about it or whether he was more concerned about the emptiness in his heart. I feel that the author failed in shaping the protagonist's image. He wanted to create a vicious and cunning lone wolf, but instead turned into a self-righteous husky. I suggest you watch "Reincarnation Paradise" (personal opinion, accept criticism, please do not attack personally, thank you!)

I'm too lazy to type too many words, I'll just say a few points The author really wants to lay out a grand worldview? But overall, the most important thing for readers is that the concentration of cool points is very low. The first dungeon, Liushan Villa, amazes me, but the second dungeon, the Ghost Hospital, the main world, and then Anzhiju in the back, overall I just can't stand it. The protagonist's personality fusion, maybe the author wants to let the protagonist cheat and change the protagonist's sex. The character is designed to increase his survival rate in the dungeon world, and to reasonably change the character of the protagonist into a kind of nonsensical rant. This way, the text of the work can conform to the style of this series of works, which is nonsensical rants, plus horror, plus unlimited dungeons. However, this kind of personality fusion is a big poison point for readers. Since the protagonist's occupation is ghost walking and psychic, why not go to some orthodox supernatural world? It is planned to introduce this kind of combat and bloodline settings, so it is not purely like a hell apartment, pure supernatural reasoning, but with a combat system. Then your copy has always been a copy of the supernatural mystery series, which makes the whole work feel very inconsistent. And the next few copies. Repeatedly. Limits the protagonist's combat skills and storage space. It makes people feel that this combat system has almost no effect, and it relies purely on the protagonist's reasoning ability and cheating to survive. The problem is huge. The setting of that paradise. Did you know? It is really a big poisonous point to have the protagonist always exist in a situation where he is controlled by others and in the whirlpool of conspiracy, and also to always exist in a dangerous situation. After personality fusion. Main character. Always that clever setup. But it cannot be reflected well. On the contrary, it always makes people feel that he is cheating, and relying on some forced explanations by the author is a setting that reflects the protagonist's intelligence. Too poisonous. Of course there are other problems, too lazy to type, so let's leave it at that Of course the author's efforts cannot be denied. Many parts of this book include plot settings. Of course, I am referring to the plot settings of the dungeon world. There is also an element of resourcefulness. All are pretty good. It can also be seen that the author wants to lay out a grand world. But overall. This is not a very good online novel. The biggest problem is that the concentration of cool points is very low. Make it difficult for readers to watch. The author seems to be as smart as the protagonist, but also self-righteous. This self-righteousness is reflected in every aspect of the work. I read that the ghost hospital is the ghost hospital in the free chapter. Can't read anymore. But I'm still looking forward to the author's second work. I also hope that these opinions I have expressed can provide some inspiration to the author.

100,000 Words, 50,000 recommendations, five fans, 48 ​​investments, 16 posts, fellow author, your book is not a myth, you are the myth.

It's not easy to get 250,000 recommendations. I feel like I've finished the book.

There are too many private goods, I can only say that the third-rate author talks about the three views The three views are not correct

I have just read more than ninety chapters, and I am afraid that I will get sick if I don't say some things. The protagonist has added intelligence, so why would he go home even though he knew someone was investigating him? The problem is that after someone messed with you on the high-speed train, you first didn't kill them, secondly you didn't follow them to find out, and thirdly you just went home without thinking. Originally, the messages were deleted so that the family would not be affected. After embarking on this path, isn't it best to keep each other safe?

The new chapter is quite painful. The main character relies on his IQ for a living. He knows he is being targeted, but he goes back so arrogantly that there is no sense of reading experience at all.

I have joined the book club, and I was surprised to see the eunuch. I am very sorry and sad. I am afraid that we can't change anything now. I am even more regretful that the author chose to give up this name. In the barren years, will we never see him again? I don't know what to say, I just hope... That there will be a chance to start over. Brother.

Alas, are you already a eunuch? Although the kung fu part is a little bit toxic, the twist is still very interesting, and the writing style has also come back. I started reading this book from QQ Reading. I heard that many authors don't often come to QQ reading to read comments. I started reading it again. The early stage of this book was very successful. Kung Fu movies are poisonous and surprising, the twist is very interesting, and the settings are also perfect. Alas, that's all. Maybe it's because no one supports it. After the couple story ended, it started to get messed up. The dungeon setting is not like before. It has become messed up. I used to read it every day, but now I rarely read it. After reading it for half a year, I found that the author is a eunuch. Although I don't want the author to be a eunuch, I also understand the author's difficulties. It's really,,,, well, I don't want to mention how uncomfortable it is. I rarely have such a favorite novel. . . . Well. Remember to call us when the author opens a new pit.

Forget it, it slipped away, no wonder no one discusses it, the author is too serious for self-pleasure

Anzhiju looks pretty good in the front, but I can't understand it after that.

The writing is good. Apart from being a bit stiff in the early stage, the plot and plot rhythm in the later stage are well grasped. It gave me the same excitement and tension as when I watched The God of Death. If I change places or come back to continue writing, I will definitely read it 😁

I can't stand it anymore after seeing the main world. I was absolutely selfish and sane before. Now I'm fighting to the death for a young lady I haven't known for a long time. I'm numb. The author takes the lead ooc

Are you giving up just like that? Very well written...(><)

Oh my God! 😆 Author, such an interesting book was abandoned halfway. The sudden arrival of the eunuch caught me off guard; such a beautiful plot came to an abrupt end, which made me feel so depressed! Don't pay too much attention to what those trolls say, the book you wrote is quite nice! But you abandoned us readers. Well! It's too late to say anything 😢, everything is a foregone conclusion. But my dear, you should never say that you want to give up your pen name? Are you so heartless and give up all the results of your hard work? Can I see the books you wrote again in the future? 😭😭😭

Hey, he looked so comfortable and said that he suddenly entered the palace. I hope the author will have the opportunity to write again in the future. Hero Prison is waiting for me. The story must be completed, with a beginning and an end.

I have to say that a person who dares to face another world will eventually die, and the same is true for "The Supreme God of Killing". After all, we can't change anything... No matter how much we say, it's useless. If you can't see it, you don't care anymore.

A good book but a pity

It's a very good book. I have to teach people to play with split personality. Isn't it bad for normal people? I just added a bunch of settings that seemed to enhance the character of the protagonist, but in fact they were already boring and boring, and all the good ideas in the early stage were wasted.

It's quite a pity. The plot and characters are well created. It's really a pity that the eunuch is a eunuch. I hope the author will have time to continue writing in the future. It's a very good novel. It's such a pity to have an appendix🌹