My Dad Is a Superstar

Come on, they wrote that they are all in their thirties when they become baby daddies, and they both have daughters. You are very different. Come on, come on.

The writing is not bad, but the paragraphs are too long and not friendly enough for me who reads novels on my mobile phone. Can you change it and make the paragraph shorter? That would make it much more comfortable to read.

Safe Tao. . . Memes are not something that can be used casually. How dare you use memes casually when your novel is not popular at the beginning? There must be explanations where necessary! I read a few chapters. First of all, Pig's Foot is not very long, or there is no clue about Pig's Foot. With Golden Finger, it was just a move. Did you copy a song from the beginning? How dare you copy songs without even writing about the environment after your rebirth? In the first chapter, you can write about the environment. In the second chapter, you can write about memories or plans to save your father. You start copying songs directly. How do you deal with it in the later stage? Pig's Foot Father became popular all of a sudden, what's next? Continue to copy songs? If you walk too much at night, you will always encounter ghosts! Have you always had a grandpa? Pig's feet can be used to write children's songs! Pig's feet can be cute and express the precocious side of a child from a single-parent family, so take your time! Show off your talent, I don't know what to do with it in the future! Anyway, there was a problem in the early stage!