The Hidden Dragon of the Great Tang

Returning to the Ming Dynasty to be a tyrant; (Visiting)

Luckily, I didn't invest, otherwise it would have been a complete waste.

One monthly pass! Keep it up, author! 😡😡😡

I hope the author will pay more attention to detail when writing historical fiction and avoid inexplicably pulling the reader out of the story. Many descriptions from urban novels don't quite fit into historical settings! Also, avoid using too many modern words!

When I got to the part about killing Yang Kun, I dropped the book. How could a brigade commander dare to disobey orders on the eve of a major battle? How idiotic could he be? Besides, how could a small unit of a few hundred men possibly turn on their comrades? And these few hundred men had only been out of the battlefield for two months. Was camaraderie so worthless?

Just wondering, do you have muskets and cannons? If so, I'm outta here.

The protagonist constantly patches up the system, assisting the incompetent and foolish Emperor Xuanzong of Tang. The reading experience is poor, with too much wishful thinking and a slow-acting poison.

The way they address each other is off-putting; it's all a mess.

Author, it's Talas (pronounced da er sheng), not Talas. It seems you've written the whole war but still don't know the place name.

Dear author, have you read The Longest Day in Chang'an? You could check it out to spark some inspiration.