Polar Night Player

This book is still worth reading... The writing is also good... The plot is okay... But it always feels short of meaning... So I gave it up...😥😥😥

I think it's a pretty good book. It reads very smoothly, and there are no characters with brainless villains or low IQs. It's pretty good.

Ming Xu is actually the heroine? ! Shouldn't it be that person?

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What does this novel say? Still very good. But there are a few minor issues that dissuade me. First of all, it is a little too depressing after three or four hundred chapters. This kind of depression is the mismatch between the protagonist's strength and the situation he faces in the general background. To put it simply, the protagonist can only watch big events happen most of the time, and it is difficult to directly participate in them to change the general trend. This feeling is honestly quite weak when I read it. There is also the strength of the protagonist. Although subjectively it has grown very quickly, the timeline is too tight. In less than a year, major events that far exceed the strength of the protagonist have occurred one after another, so that the strength of the protagonist is obviously not weak, but it always makes people feel very powerless. What about the female characters? The author probably wanted to write a one-liner based on the situation. But, in many cases, there are too many female characters related to the protagonist. The protagonist and many female characters have an awkward feeling of being ambiguous but not ambiguous. The main reason is that the protagonist has always been innocent in the plot, but the author always designs many female characters intentionally or unintentionally to connect with the protagonist. But it conflicts greatly with the general trend of single-line heroines, which feels bad. It always gives me a "scumbag" feeling that the protagonist accidentally flirts with a girl and then ignores it. And for many female characters, if the follow-up is easy for passers-by, I feel unhappy. Let the protagonist admit them, there are many people criticizing the so-called stallion harem. In fact, the harem has never been a vulgar thing? If the character description is still excellent, what if I want it? Not a big summary. Save yourself the trouble of thinking about some pretty good female characters and other passers-by.

Just write whatever comes to mind. I hope the author can arrange a suitable ending for Fei Yujing. This "appropriate" does not mean a happy end, but an ending that is logical, consistent with the character, and meets the requirements of the plot. Whether it is cleaning up the character, joining the harem, getting the punishment he deserves, being killed by the male protagonist, or committing suicide, in short, the character must be perfected, from beginning to end. Because this character is like a thorn, deeply embedded in the plot of this book. It is neither too important nor unimportant. It has always maintained a sense of existence that is neither good nor bad. Therefore, for the sake of readers' viewing experience, it is recommended that the author arrange the ending of this character in a more appropriate and reasonable manner, so as to make up for the inconsistency of this character's position in the plot as much as possible. Because the existence of this character is so "wonderful", we cannot say that she is not good. She does play a role in promoting the plot, but not too much. It is indeed one of the driving forces that attract people to watch, but it is not a positive expectation, but makes people react and see what other disgusting things she can do. And this character obviously has a lot of room for improvement, such as yandere (strengthening the love for the male protagonist), darkening (strengthening the depraved side), villain (improving the motivation and charisma of ambition) and many other development routes, but every aspect is nondescript, the love is not deep, the blackness is not thorough, and as an ambitious person without enough motivation and charisma, he feels like a clown. This kind of uncanny characterization makes this character very uncomfortable. I would like to make a complaint here. I feel that this character is the author's private property when writing the book. Does the author have a soft spot for this kind of "goddess that I missed at the beginning"? I think this character can be compared to the heroines in "The Dark Lord", a book I like very much. They all have elements such as yandere, ambition, possessiveness, and blackness. In "Dark Devil", Lily (yes, she has the same name as her mother) is a yandere queen who kills, brainwashes, conducts human experiments, slaughters her own race, and kills her father for the sake of the male protagonist. In order to compete for the male protagonist, she can kill other harems. Finally, she plans to become a god, brainwash the male protagonist, and then put the two of them in the divine domain to let themselves go. Chasing for an eternal happy life is extremely crazy; Fiona, the witch, can sacrifice people for the male protagonist, and finally sacrifices her reproductive capacity to the evil god in order to kill Lily in exchange for strength; Princess Avalon (the name has been forgotten for so long), she can betray her own brother, team mates, and country for the male protagonist. None of these heroines are good at all. They are all ambitious, possessive, with strange brain circuits and vicious methods. However, they do not make people feel disgusted when reading, but have a unique charm. It's because their characters are very pure, and the core of their characters is only one [love for Kurono]. Because it is pure enough, because the starting point is as simple as love, no matter how sinful they are, they are all manifestations of love, and they can satisfy readers who watch the male protagonist. I really like the word "purity" used by hot dog people, although I am not a hot dog person. Because reality is always complicated, the so-called pure love in the book almost does not exist in reality. To put it bluntly, marriage is just two people living together. There is no oath of love, and it will not be earth-shattering. There are countless interests and interpersonal considerations in it. That's why we depict this fantasy purity in various works of art. The same applies to other aspects, so we can make a formula: under certain conditions, character purity = character charm (of course, handling complex elements properly is also one of the ways to create excellent characters). Reality is complicated enough. Can you please stop us from engaging in such disturbing things when we relax and read novels? This is the downfall of Fei Yujing's character. She is too real. She loves the male protagonist, but she is more ambitious and very real. She wanted power, so she made countless calculations, but she failed to see clearly the unrealistic nature of her position and goals, and ended up acting like a clown. This kind of person is so common in reality that it's so common that it's disgusting. She broke up with the male protagonist, but they were still inseparable. She said that she no longer had normal human feelings, but she had another idea in her heart, but there was a dirty trick on her hands. After she succeeded, she felt lost, giving people a very disgusting feeling of indecision. In short, the elements are too complex and confusing, too close to reality, so the artistic sense of being a novel character is missing. In fact, a disgusting character does not mean that the character is a failure. For example, the alchemist who made his daughter and dog into a synthetic beast in "Metal Steel" is disgusting, right? So what if he was cut out of the plot? Do you feel that the plot is not that interesting? This is a typical example. The character can be disgusting or unattractive, but it must be suitable. The appearance of this alchemist is an important turning point in the mental journey of the Elric brothers. It is the beginning of their true understanding of the darkness of the national alchemist. It is indispensable for the advancement of the plot and the improvement of the protagonist's character. The role of Fei Yujing is not suitable, very neither good nor bad. The boss role includes parents, the family alliance, and maybe the five kings. The partner role is Ji Ye, the heroine is Mingxu, and if there is a harem, there are also Micha, No. 1, Etc. What is her position? Boss? There's a gap in strength and style. Old enemies who love and kill each other? The relationship between the two was broken and disconnected, and there was no deep bond between enemies and friends. Harem? What she did was too outrageous and disgusting to be included in the harem. To sum it up, it's like a fish bone in the throat, which makes people feel sick. We might as well imagine an unimagined path: a world without Fei Yujing. The male protagonist failed the college entrance examination in his previous life. In order to cure his sister's illness, he decided to enter the dark underworld and became a gangster and a terrorist. He was eventually arrested. His sister committed suicide and the male protagonist drank bullets in despair. Before his death, he swore: If there is an afterlife, I will not embark on this road of despair. I will save everything. Then he traveled through time and started running for his sister. Later, his sister was taken away by the Bai family. The male protagonist had no choice but to take the risk and join Ji Ye, during which he formed a bond with the female protagonist Mingxu. Later, during the adventure, he gradually came into contact with the darkness of the world, the mystery of his life experience, and various secrets. Then he decided to protect the human camp for the sake of human civilization, his sister and his wife. The plot follows this way and can be divided into a single female main plot or a harem plot according to different people's tastes. Doesn't this book look a lot less poisonous? However, this character has already been written, and it is impossible to delete it like this. I also like this book very much, and I hope the author can arrange this character well.

After reading the first chapter, I am familiar with the suicide time travel. . . . . The familiar patient sister is smart and smart. . . . . A familiar childhood sweetheart marries another woman

The writing on the technical subject is okay, but the routines are really old, and there are places where they are a little bit toxic.

This book is quite good, probably from the third chapter onwards. It feels like King of Eternal Night, but the early stage is too routine and can poison 80% of people.

The beginning of the useless game is boring. It gives the impression of being in the 3rd stage of Dou Zhiliu.

Why is no one watching? It feels pretty good. It is similar to the previous "Eternal Night King", and I think this type of novel is quite interesting. (Although I don't have money to read the original version now, I will make up for it when the school starts. Come on, author!)

After catching up on the latest chapter, I realized that this book is the only online novel I have followed. The subject matter attracted me from the beginning, and what attracted me even more later was the bond between the characters. The author's outline should be clear, with many previous characters appearing. The front part is also very interesting, and I don't think it's too toxic. Reading about Li wanting to build the Great Mechanical Wall at the frontier and the birth of the New Polar Night are my favorite parts. I can understand the bond between Mingxu and Li Xiang very well, and the foreshadowing in many chapters makes me feel that they are soul mates. The more I write, the better it gets. I beg you all to read the latest chapter, it's really good. Please reward me a little, I hope the author can write better and better.

After reading the first chapter, the author's writing is good, but the plot is really flawed. The mysterious and confident girlfriend, your talent is not top-notch, where did you get the confidence to regret the marriage, the other family is still your family's backer, the inexplicable sister, knowing that her brother is talented, does not tell her, but she is not going into a pit of fire. She enjoys herself and leaves her brother to suffer.

I have finished reading the first episode. In fact, what most old readers want to read now is unconventional and enjoyable. This book, at least in the early stages, is very cliché and sad. . . A mature man is reborn, and he keeps saying that he no longer has the problems of his middle school years. Some details do seem to be okay, but at the end of the first episode, these two pictures are a forced middle school? Girls have sacrificed so much for you, but if you have difficulties and want to see your sister, you can't just tell the girl directly? Thank you for your sacrifice for me. I must leave now for my sister. We are destined in this life, and we will work together for the rest of our lives. If we are not destined in this life, we will repay you in the next life. Is it difficult? Moreover, it's okay if you are a complete second grader. The routine of ten years ago was that the male protagonist did not know how much the female protagonist had paid, and various misunderstandings were later reversed. Fortunately, this book is "mature" and the male protagonist already knows how much the female protagonist has paid. . . . .

The writing is very good, but there are really too many old routines, and they are still old routines that run through the main line. I thought it was good before, but now I feel quite childish as I get older.       ，，，，， For example, if the sister leaves for a big family, she feels that there is no need to give charity to the protagonist. However, in fact, the protagonist may die because of this, or waste his life. Normal people would not choose this, not to mention that this is actually insignificant help to her. If the sister is a very controlling person, It's pretty much the setting that he can't become stronger on his own and is not worthy of being an elder brother. They have been dependent on each other for so many years, and they may never see each other again after leaving this time. Although he has the ability, he doesn't want to help a group at the end. From a secular perspective, it is not an exaggeration to say that he is just a white-eyed wolf. With money and power, he has forgotten his brother. Overall, this novel is quite interesting, but I am just a layman, and from a secular perspective, many things seem a bit intriguing.

I feel like the writing is great. This book deserves to be crowned a god. I feel like the author is very talented in writing situations and scenes, which makes people feel very involved. I haven't seen such a well-written novel in a long time! I hope the author will keep at it! Bring readers more interesting novels. I've ordered them all, so feel free to do whatever you want!

I finished reading the first volume and died from poison. Goodbye everyone! The beautiful examiner just looks down on you. The sickly sister with a broken leg. The protagonist has an extraordinary life experience that no one knows about, and no one knows about it. I vomited. What about you?

The book is very good, it reminds me of many old books by old authors, and even has a bit of a dragon flavor. However, there is one plot that I can understand but cannot accept. Why does the male protagonist's sister know that the high-level bloodline of the Bai family needs to be awakened multiple times? She obviously thought of her brother, the male protagonist, after knowing this, but chose not to say it. Why don't you tell me? If I tell her, my brother can be with her and have a better starting point and resources. When I saw this plot, I felt bad. I wanted to give up the book for a while, but I couldn't resist.

Why is the book good but still no one reads it? I think there are several reasons. The beginning is cliché and illogical. My sister is talented and my brother must be discarded? Although there is an explanation later. But the biggest difference between reading online articles and buying paper books is that reading online articles can stop losses (and lose readers' patience) Mysterious power system and family relationships The former does not have accurate standards, which makes many data flow readers uncomfortable. This kind of people are not originally focused on the plot but watching the protagonist's power progress with game players. The latter simply made me understand what it means to do whatever you want without anyone watching. Brother and sister, mother and son, cousins. Although the author wants to present a "god" who does not pay attention to ethics. But this is too... I suggest you put it into a yy novel The last and more important issue is that there is no climax in Slow Heat. The book doesn't talk about abusing the master, it's just too clear-cut. Just asking when this book will be finished, will the witch be reincarnated?

I couldn't watch it from the beginning. The world has changed, but the characters and relationships have remained the same

The subject matter is good, but I can't bring myself to recall the past. I was engaged by the protagonist's childhood sweetheart to someone else in exchange for a college notice. Farewell fellow Taoists

I feel that the writing style of this book is above average, but the subject matter tends to be depressing. To put it bluntly, it is not refreshing enough and makes people anxious.

I like novels like The King of Evernight

It's a pity that the writing and plot arrangement is still online, but it's not popular. Thank you to the author for your hard work.

"Humanity Continent" is too difficult for newcomers! Please support me.

Why isn't it popular? It's really well written. Although it has flaws, it's still pretty good.

This book by the author has entered the free reading zone. . .

It's wonderful, the plot constructed by the author is very rich, and it reads very smoothly. The character descriptions are just right; the branch lines and main lines change naturally and are interlocking. In addition to this book, I am also following "The Monk Family" and read more than a thousand chapters in one go! There is a shortage of books. Do you have any good book recommendations?

The main plot is okay. There are too many descriptions of women's bodies, and the emotional descriptions are a bit like the male version of Mary Sue. All women have to like the male protagonist, and the setting of the male protagonist's unclear rejection is so disgusting.

It looks great. Does the author have any new books?