My Father Is Long Aotian

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A gentleman's swamp mermaid (

I really want to read the story of his freshman year when his dad traveled through time and brought the fish to another world (॑꒳ ॑)

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I can't stand it when my father is dead. I have a glass heart Tell me if my father is still alive I can't stand it. I can't stand it with a glass heart

People who want to read this book need to have a lot of poison resistance. Anyway, I can't stand a chapter of this book even with the poison resistance level of the dark text.                                                                                                                                                                                                                      _____The poison-testing beast test for poison is completed.

I still hope the author can write it well. The previous illustrated book ended too suddenly, and I didn't eat much candy. I feel like I could have written more interesting stories.

It's so strange, I read dozens of chapters in one go even though I didn't know that I barely understood it 😰

Now I have the system in my freshman year, but I don't seem to see those common cheats (such as adding points to task flow, etc.) And I am curious about what kind of help I will give in the future (I am a fast reader, please correct me if I have omitted anything 😄)

My personal opinion is that the current progress is more than forty chapters Advantages: 1. The character has a distinct personality. If you say a name, I will immediately have a word to describe it, and there will be no confusion 2. The plot is smooth, there is no feeling that the previous and previous plots are not connected, and the foreshadowing can be seen in the later chapters. Currently on the second map, I am personally very curious about the plot after that 3. The main plot is clear. The protagonist can see the goal, and the plot in the future is also obvious Disadvantages It is too light, especially the modal words "Na" and "N" in the front. Especially the word "Na" really makes me feel lighter as soon as I write it... Also, maybe because the author works hard on writing in his free time, sometimes he may not pay much attention to the word choice. Maybe it's because I've watched a lot of animations, and sometimes I feel that way when writing my first reaction, but Chinese people's speaking habits are different, so reading it a few times will feel a bit awkward and strange, but this is not a big problem, mainly because I have too many things to do () In short, I will always read what the author wrote. Chase! The most important thing! Author, you must remember that readers are jealous! Never change the outline according to readers' suggestions!!! There are many authors who changed a plot because of readers' requests and then collapsed. I think there should be someone who insists on writing at this level. In the end, these are all my words. There may be other people who have other ideas but haven't said them out. Just a "suggestion"! Don't care too much! Starting from today, I will give you two recommendation tickets every day! Come on, come on!

I don't go online often, so this author is more in line with my taste. He already has a completed novel. I'm done chasing it too. I particularly like the heroine in that novel. Originally, this author also had a collection of imaginative works, but it may have been removed from the shelves for some reason. That one is also very interesting. I think his story structure is in-depth and more original than a pure novel. It is not easy to write brilliantly and people cannot follow the general routine, but this is also the joy of reading and reading. Of course, I can't ask others to be the same as me, but people with similar brains are still worth recommending.