Create Super Fantasy

​ It's interesting at the beginning, but after a few dozen chapters it becomes very boring, and it's all poorly written stuff. Moreover, the author's writing power is limited and he has not written any new tricks... This seems to be an endless cycle. Many authors are similar. They start off brilliantly, but then return to the same old plot as they go on. Another point is: the characters written by current authors will not grow in other aspects except for their strength. When they first appear, they are a young person who is mentally and physically immature. After living for decades or hundreds of years, their behavior is still the same, unchanged.      ''''……！ After all, when writing a book now, as long as one is at home, connected to the Internet, and drinking happy water, all the information is available. If you can't find it online, you can also turn to the vast number of readers for help. But this was not possible before the development of the Internet. I had to run around by myself. If I could, I would ride a large parallel-bar bicycle. If I could not, I would rely on two legs to visit everywhere and ask questions. For some important materials, you have to ask for help and build relationships. So in this process, the author is growing, and so are the characters in the book.

Well, I have to admit, this is the first book that I haven't given up on until I reached the level of helmsman. I really took over the book without realizing it. Forgive me, it's my first time, I'm a little excited 😁😁😁 Bookworms like us now pay equal attention to the title and introduction of the book. Think about it, when Shuhuang was looking for books in the bookstore, he always went through the titles of the books, read the introductions of the ones he was more interested in, and read the content of the ones that looked good. Then, that's it, I can't leave here. . . . . . . . To be honest, this is the first time I have seen the concept of this book, and I am quite interested in it. The plot concept is also very good, and it is very enjoyable to read. Of course, having said so much, I am very tired from typing, so the author needs to forgive me. No matter what, I gave you my first time, and you have to be responsible——————add some semen, but not too much 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 Also let me have a taste of semen. . Uh uh uh. . . No, it's because of the extra finesse. . . . . . . . . Peat, this sentence sounds so so. . . . . . Um. . You're so angry Stop talking and give me some cum😭😭

I got into it after reading the introduction, and have been following it for a while. The latest plots after entering Gaowu always felt cliched. Pretentiousness and slaps in the face were too cliche. Too many words were used to describe the supporting characters looking down on the protagonist and then being slapped in the face. After watching too much, it became less enjoyable. The villains are so mindless, they all look like Long Aotian. Moreover, every time the crisis of the Five Phoenixes was solved by Lu Fan, the villain was solved by chopping up melons and vegetables. In the big crisis, there was no follow-up villain until the protagonist was upgraded. Long Aotian continued to look down on the male protagonist. Even Ni Yu was looked down upon when he participated in the alchemy competition. After all, it was the only world of high martial arts in Xuanwutian. It was difficult to achieve high martial arts in Xuanwutian. As a result, the villain was very brainless and looked down upon him, and then was slapped in the face. After watching this kind of plot too much, I always feel like I have collapsed, but it is not as exciting as when I first started to get into the game. I really like Lu Fan, and I also like this setting, but the same slap-in-the-face scenes are really bad and lack the passion from the beginning.

In my personal opinion, from the beginning to the middle, the author's plot arrangement of the story is very interesting, creating a world of high martial arts, and the supporting characters are very vivid. Whether it is the Overlord or the Human Emperor, the descriptions are as detailed as possible, but like many fantasy, it is really bad now. First of all, there is the issue of combat power. Not to mention the discrepancy between the self-created realm and the original realm of the protagonist in the author's novel, which can easily lead to confusion in combat power. The Yanjiu and the like written by the author are all like idiots. Millions of coalition forces in the two worlds were wiped out. When they went to snatch the Dao Yun of the two worlds, the opponent actually thought that the Five Phoenixes were nothing more than this. The background is those holy places that have been passed down for thousands of years. They all have no eyesight and brains? I just added in the previous article that the Tao aggregates can only be produced by enlightenment. Why will the world be destroyed and collapse if those Tao aggregates generated by enlightenment are robbed? It is better to keep using the original setting of Zhongwu, and end up contradicting itself. The protagonist feels pressured by the last Xianxu II or above, so why did the Wuhuang people who went to snatch Dao Yun easily defeat a strong Xianxu I? Everyone enjoys sex? The confusion of combat power is the biggest flaw of this book. The villain's lack of brains is the biggest shortcoming of this book. The author does not add the difference in combat power in the upper world. This book will fail sooner or later. Young Master Lu's strength is already above Yan 3. The immortals in the major worlds actually think that more people can have an effect? So is it more powerful when there are more people, or is it more powerful when there are different realms in Xiansu? The leapfrog battle is not explained clearly. It is understandable that the protagonist has a cheat, but the appearance of the Overlord and others is very abrupt. The soul and soul are united to kill the immortals. How can such a world be promoted to Yan Qi? Does this mean that there must be more people to upgrade the world? Yansi's routines will probably remain the same. This book is just garbage as it is written now.

To be honest, the subject matter of Lao Li's book is still very good, but the content in it is really difficult to evaluate. The most poisonous point is to forcefully pretend to be pretentious. Such a good subject matter can be a god if you write it well. I always feel that it was ruined by your writing. In fact, it is not as good as Dreaming.

I don't want to say much. I have only read 36 chapters. I don't know what the author will do next. Judging from the beginning, it is a good book. I don't know how much it is considered a rant. I just want to write down my views on the early stage. 1: Why can I see Chapter 36: The article is well-conceived and has a bit of a game otherworld feel. There are not many novels that can depict otherworlds in a rounded way. This book is well written and has a sense of immersion and is comfortable to read. The characters and settings are more in line with the public's taste, so I read this part. 2: What makes me unable to read is the character and image. It's a bit abrupt and has no sense of hierarchy. For example, the protagonist, the author seems to want to create an image of Master Tianji. You can refer to the image of the proud Ninth Layer Mo Tianji and the emperor Li Qiye. However, because the protagonist is set as a soul traveler, he also has some modern people's thoughts and subsequent conflicts, especially when he is pretending to be a slap in the face. It gives people a feeling that (I am pretending to show you) the highlight is to show someone, rather than, I am pretending, I am a 6, you are all younger brothers, this feeling. I don't know if everyone can understand it. Or maybe it's because I read a novel called Lan Ke Qi Yuan a few days ago, in which the protagonist has a similar personality (I also discarded this one, and I won't go into the reasons), and this was handled well. Like sister Ning, Yiyue. There are some gaps between the description of the work and the appearance. The former can be added with more sensitivity (wisdom), and the latter can also be added with more quirky qualities, which will make it look much better. The plot gives people a sense of unnecessary moaning, and is touching with its subtleties, as follows It is well written, the protagonist's father (actually a little flawed), and Ni'er. I believe readers can understand the difference. The above is only for reference by book friends. After all, I haven't read 1% of it yet, so I just make a lot of mistakes here. It is indeed a bit one-sided. Book friends who have read the entire article can also comment in the comments. I just want to write a book review so that more book-hungry friends can read.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง I see a lot of people are complaining, but the author doesn't need to pay attention to it. Now this novel is on its way to becoming a god. If I continue writing for a while, I will definitely become a god. Many people will not understand it. I won't tell you why. I read it on WeChat Reading recently. I didn't expect that the starting point would be so chaotic. The author just insists on being himself. Don't worry about those who have ulterior motives. You can tell who is an old fan and who is here to take advantage of it. This novel must be a masterpiece. Everyone's character is too distinct. There is no specific protagonist in this novel, because the entire Five Phoenix World is the protagonist. They grow up with Lu Ping'an, and from scratch, one protagonist after another appears. Everyone is really "alive". No one here is independent from the outside. They are all connected heart to heart, and no one is always invincible. They are also flesh and blood. At special times, special people will stand up and some will sacrifice for them. Everyone is growing, we are waiting for the day when you become a three-star star😊

The author visually couldn't write anymore, and he didn't know where to go after Lu Fan, so Lu Jiulian appeared. Do it again. But what you write next can easily turn readers away.

In the early stage, Zhuzi Baijia wrote very well, but after the Little Emperor, it began to become unstable, especially the part about pulling the bald donkey and the underworld before entering Tianyuan. It always gives people the feeling that the outline has not been written yet.

I feel that the protagonist has no majesty. Things like immortality should be obtained through begging, right? It feels like the protagonist is begging people to accept his spiritual energy. If you believe it, just leave. Yes or no? Our world doesn't even have low-level martial arts, yet a lot of people believe in immortals and Buddhas?

There must be no eunuchs. I still want to read more than a thousand chapters. Thank you very much, the author 😭

In the behind-the-scenes series, this kind of martial arts-to-fantasy book is also rare, and the writing and plot are not supported, so it still has a certain appeal to readers who like this kind of book. But after looking at it, I still felt that this book was missing some flavor. Since you want to upgrade the dimension, you must have a good circulation system. Simply improving the combat power value is a bit boring. For a complete world of fantasy or fairy tales: elixir, hexagram, talisman and weapon are indispensable. The elixirs, magic weapons and the like in the book are only briefly mentioned, all focusing on cultivation and fighting. What's more, the protagonist's thoughts are about the whole world, a prosperous scene where hundreds of schools of thought contend. Since the exercises are modified based on martial arts, why not modify other ones? I feel that the plot is starting to feel a bit too much, because this novel has fallen into a strange circle. There is no aura in the martial arts world and the protagonist needs to invest aura. Aura requires the protagonist's own cultivation aura to be strong enough. The improvement of the protagonist's cultivation requires other people to reach a certain level before they can get a commission. The number of people who become monks is small. That is, the number of monks is small. From a macro perspective, how many people actually become monks? So if the number of people is small, the improvement of the protagonist's cultivation is slow. It is this strange development that limits the development speed of this book Although I know that the author wants to limit the speed of the protagonist's improvement. But this is the behind-the-scenes writing, nothing else. The protagonist's setting should be similar to that of a god, driving everything behind the scenes. Why should we restrict him? The theme should be the battle between heroes of this era. Just sit in Bai Yujing and watch the world, and move the world forward. Another problem arises. The protagonist's purpose is to make Bai Yujing a transcendent force. What is detachment? To put it bluntly, it means being aloof and having nothing to do with yourself. It is also a force that seems to be absent, but Bai Yujing in the book is too high-profile. I think the detached forces should be those that live behind the scenes rather than being in the limelight. Of course this is just my idea, but the detachment in the author's heart is not the detachment in my heart. I hope the author can break away from the original thinking, increase the number of people practicing, and have the secret recipe of the Dan 'gua' array and 'talisman' in the secret realm. Let those sects not only obtain it from the secret realm, but also refine their own elixirs and weapons. The last and most important point is that I found that the people who practice Buddhism are all powerful and powerful people with a good background and status. But you didn't think about the group of people with the largest population and the highest potential in the world - grassroots civilians. The secret realms created by the protagonist are all opportunities created for the upper class people, and civilians have no chance or ability to access them. Be broad-minded and don't be too high. Pay more attention to the poor people at the bottom. After all, you know about grassroots counterattacks. Create some small hidden secrets for those who are destined to get them. In short, most of the problems stem from the protagonist's inability to keep up, and it feels like the author has over-restricted the game. That's it, apart from these minor flaws, I still like this book very much.

More and more like a super online game rather than a super fantasy

After reading Chapter 20... The plot is a bit cliche. It seems like I have read it in some book...😅

They are all ruthless people, and those who have cultivated to a certain level are all bosses. They are ruthless to themselves and even more ruthless to their enemies. I like the arrogant and upright Confucian in the early stage the most. He is really a mortal, comparable to the gods. Unfortunately, he died too early and did not see the contention of a hundred schools of thought later.

Are there any recommendations for similar novels? The author is too short and I don't have any**

This book is well written, well conceived, and has a good setting. But the writing collapsed, and the layout became smaller and smaller. Because the layout was large enough, it was not comprehensive and did not give people a sense of involvement. Moreover, the author made a stupid mistake, which is multi-line narrative. Multi-line narratives are very common, but usually you finish one paragraph and then write another. In this book, you write two sentences to directly change to the next thing, and then write two more sentences and then change again. One chapter can switch back and forth twice. The sense of substitution is gone, but it still feels messy! In general, the writing is good, but it is really annoying to read. It would be a shame not to read a good book, and I can't stand it anymore.

It ended inexplicably, and I was quite confused when I saw it, but to be honest, the quality is very, very, very good.

There is a conjecture that the protagonist is actually the reincarnation of the ancient emperor, and the system is something like the origin of the universe. An unsolvable crisis occurred in ancient times, so I chose to start over.

The ending was a bit rushed and anticlimactic. I hope the author can write better in his next novel. Come on! ! !

As soon as I saw Tang Yimo sneaking up on the evil-eyed demon to open his eight meridians under the cover of the immortals, he immediately thought of me, Emperor Kai, and automatically made it up in his mind. So the scene was too hot, wasn't it!!!

Has the saint changed so much all at once? This is too fast. I feel that it is reasonable to have at least a few hundred chapters to pave the way to sainthood.

Not bad, no big bugs

Wudiliu No Heroine's Cool Article, one of my fully ordered works, is very beautiful! The protagonist is straightforward and responsible for the layout in the background. The writing style is humorous, and various Douyin buzzwords are used smoothly. And many of the descriptions are like anime, very graphic. This author is a master at breaking chapters. If you are following up on updates, you will feel like you are about to die every time he breaks a chapter. Several of his other novels are also very interesting. The protagonists do not mess around with men and women. I like them very much.

It's pretty! Why are so many people so picky? I think this book is very interesting. 😁

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There is an error in Chapter 410 when the protagonist divides his dragon energy into eight. The black dragon dies and turns into luck, which is the destiny of the country. In fact, there are only seven. I also saw several (✪▽✪) typos in the chapters. For example, there is a chapter where "always" is typed as "grandmaster".

I don't know what happens next, but the first forty chapters*****