Game of Thrones Revolution

I feel that the characters are not well developed and the plot is a bit strange. I can't tell what I want to express. Is it intentional to write such an obscure part, or is it because I didn't grasp it well, or maybe I was just having fun and didn't realize it?

He abandoned his daughter when he saw it. It was clear that Long Ma didn't want to get married, but he still gave her away. He wanted to break the cycle of reincarnation, so why not change Long Ma's fate by the way?

Is it too much to please yourself? What does God's perspective mean? The psychological activities of the characters are too simple to figure out, and the facial expressions are obvious. Written running account. What happened to Ranx? This kind of behavior still exists in Europe and the United States, and it is still legal in many developed countries. Can tg law also apply to the continent of Westeros? Create an invincible protagonist, do all kinds of cheats, but in the end, he is controlled and not allowed to be pushed evenly, and he is looking for death.

Why do those who write about Game of Thrones need to read the original novel to understand what the author wrote? There are also too many plots that the author himself imagined.

Another point, I feel that the author is just trying to please himself. I read Chapter 14 and the number of characters where the protagonist appears does not exceed 2,000 words.

When you are happy, make yourself happy and make people unable to understand it as the standard; when you are unhappy and make people lose your temper, the standard is as follows. Then why did you write a book? Why is the starting point recommended?

I just read one chapter. I don't know what you think. It feels very strange at the beginning. When you say your grades are not good, first look at what you have written. Before you talk about anything else,

It's obvious that it can be dismissed, but if you insist on asking for trouble, the protagonist may not be living in a dream.

The writing is so messy, I don't know what the central idea the author wants to express is.

If you give me a girl at the beginning, you may think you are not miserable enough.

The author's writing is good, and I can tell that I've read the original work, but your writing is still 95% the same as the main story... Brother, are you a fan? If you break away from the main story, you won't be able to write at all? Everyone who comes to see this subject wants to see the same background setting and different story lines...

I was stunned for a moment when I saw my sister being sent to me at the beginning, and then I realized... It's my biological sister.

I read the comments and all of them complained about the author's poor writing. My brother is awesome.

At the beginning, I sent my sister to Mawang and went to the Great Wall by myself without doing anything else. He planned to save Bran again, but Bran still fell down, became crippled, and lost his memory. Later, he went to the grassland to change his destiny. The strange thing is that he thought to himself that he had not decided whether to save the horse king or the dragon mother's son. It turned out that the witch was still playing tricks and injured the horse king and fell off his horse. The protagonist dressed up as a slave and did not know what he was doing. As a result, the horse king became a vegetative state and the sister lost her child. Change the title of the book: "Game of Thrones Text Version - The Non-Existent Protagonist"

I can guarantee that this book will be a hit. It is so complicated and difficult to understand. I think the author will lose money on this book.

I haven't read the original work, but I feel that some parts are similar to the TV series, with no changes. This is a poisonous point. What a pity. I hope the author can write a different story. Everything about plot inertia and destiny is all nonsense and laziness.

The author had better open a new account. Just because of this book, your account will be wasted.

The post I posted was eaten by the author. Isn't he afraid of diarrhea?

The plot arrangement felt strange, forced, and unnecessary. The writing is really good.

Does the author have a group? Can I contact you? I also write about Game of Thrones. I would like to ask you about the data of writing a book here. Can you tell me more? (My own guess: Er Si Yi Yi Yi Si Si Si Qi)

Game of Thrones, a little more serious

The plot is bullshit, but the writing is okay, right? And eunuchs