The Lord of the Rings from Game of Thrones

As you can see from the introduction, the protagonist cannot pick up the Yalang sword at all. He picks up the Yalang sword forcibly and does not let the protagonist transform. It is just a fantasy before becoming a fallen knight.

🙂 The Fellowship of Lord of the Rings, 130,000 words long, but Hora was not seen, and only one of the White Walkers related to mysterious powers was killed. The rest are all about the love, hate and power struggle in Game of Thrones. The total number of words about the protagonist using the power of the Knight of the Ring is unknown. The three words "illegitimate child" add up to so many...

To be honest, there's nothing cool about it. Yalang, to be honest, I have only seen a few flashing pictures, which should last more than 10 seconds. I have seen them on Douyin. Also, I think I watched a little bit of it when I was a kid. To be honest, I think this is a complete game. To be honest, in a world with low magic, there are always only five or six people with a population of two to three billion who have something to do with magic. As a result, if you say supernatural discrimination, it can be considered extraordinary. The result was that he looked like a wandering knight lying on the street. To be honest, there is nothing impressive about it, including your transformation. I feel like you are not a very good writer, but you can't write novels for beginners. No pretense, no narrative. It feels like opening a northern map and acting as a blank slate for yourself. A ghost will transform you and pretend to be a little bitch. The result is that you have transformed like a wandering knight, wearing armor is not shocking at all. I came in after reading the introduction, brother.

Shennong, the protagonist doesn't know the plot

I thought it was the one from Lord of the Rings.

This protagonist is like a fool who doesn't know the plot at all

I think the focus of this book is on "Knights of the Ring" rather than "Game of Thrones", right?

The title of your novel is very deceptive. I thought it was Lord of the Rings, but it turned out to be a niche audience.

I would like to make a suggestion: the supporting characters revolve around the protagonist, and the protagonist pursues the main plot, not the other way around. As for the heroine, you are not in a romance novel, so don't think the heroine is important. She is just an ordinary person and cannot bear the narrative task. There is no need to add drama all the time. Don't focus the plot on her.

I originally thought I was going to use Game of Thrones as a springboard and then change dungeons, but looking at the latest chapter, I don't know when Game of Thrones will end or it will be Game of Thrones with the Knight of the Ring skin 😒

Let's go to the next world, otherwise fewer and fewer people will watch it.

I feel like I chose the wrong topic. Yalang emphasizes the individual, while Game of Thrones focuses more on group portraits. The protagonist's starting strength is too strong. You can basically play Game of Thrones alone. The plot seems like a giant playing house with a group of babies.

There are too few updates, and it's best to change the setting. A hook like this that is not very powerful and has so many restrictions makes people uncomfortable. You are writing a fanfic, and everyone reads novels for fun. Nowadays, no one likes to read this setting that overwhelms the protagonist. I have never read Yalang, but I almost gave up reading the book as soon as this ghost setting came out.

There were quite a lot of controversies in the previous book, I hope this one can be better written, come on✊

Author, what you write about Game of Thrones is nothing, just random writing here. I can see it. You have no main plot at all, and you don't even know what you want to write. You confused Robert and asked him to go offline. Then there was Dragon Mother, who suddenly returned after a few chapters. Then there was the confusing plot to fight the Night King and pretend to be pretentious. You can't write this novel. You just wrote whatever you thought of. It can be said that you are writing randomly.

Triple treason per head of House Lannister. The Lannister you wrote actually continued to be the Warden of the West after Casterly Rock was destroyed. Can you make up a reason?

And the Golden Knight at the beginning, let alone, even if the steel level does not change, it is not something that someone without special abilities can deal with.

Not recommended, speed running is a waste of time

Didn't you write a book? Why is there such a low-level error?

The author's writing style is good, but there are some doubts after reading one volume. There are some problems with some settings and plot design, which will most likely affect the content arrangement of subsequent volumes. First of all, the protagonist gets married too early, which blocks many plot directions in subsequent copies. I originally thought that the protagonist's marriage to that woman was a temporary solution, but I didn't expect that the lie would eventually come true. Moreover, the protagonist has to return to the world of A Song of Ice and Fire. Everything that can be written there has been written, so what else can he do when he goes back? Secondly, the author is a little too obsessed with presenting the complete content of the original work, and has forcibly transformed the journey that followed the protagonist into a group portrait, causing the protagonist to become invisible later on. This not only takes a long time, but also brings another problem. The protagonist has a limited lifespan. If you write each world for four, five or six years, the handsome young man will go straight to the middle-aged uncle. Finally, the protagonist has an obvious protagonist aura of the fang type. Because there are no restrictions from the usual rules of the Knights of the Ring, the protagonist can use the power of the fang relatively easily, and the golden fang must maintain his strength and cannot lose. This makes Yalang's originally tense battle become more or less a kind of mechanical deity. Once the armor is worn, he becomes invincible. We should add more combat methods of the protagonist's human body and rely less on armor to reduce this sense of dissonance.

I remember there was a meme that said: "A second creation that respects the original work too much is not a second creation."

Isn't it the Supreme Lord of the Rings

I don't quite understand the brain circuit of the author's left and right brains interacting with each other. He said that he would not choose a wife from a big family, but ended up marrying a lion girl born to Cersei Jaime. Why is the Lannister Lion family not a big family? You say you won't participate in political struggles, but getting a wife is the biggest political risk. Why didn't you say you won't participate in politics when you drew your sword to kill Robert for this woman? Robert was forced to recognize this unrelated princess, why didn't he say that he would participate in politics? Such double standards? It is said that the little rose is not helpful to the protagonist, but the lion girl is helpful? The Lion family is besieged by the six kingdoms that the protagonist is trying to conquer, and is about to become a remnant of the seven kingdoms. What's the point of marrying her? It's better to marry Little Rose and Er Sha. You are marrying into a big family anyway. Little Rose knows everything, has soldiers, generals, and money to help you take care of the territory and win the hearts of the people. Old Rose has seen the protagonist's ability and prevents Little Rose from rushing to grab the position of queen. The two idiots in the north are closest to your territory and can use Winterfell to help you and eliminate the alienation from Robert Ed. In the end, marrying a Leo woman, the source of all evil, was really the biggest failure.

If you write about a personal female character like this, you must accept it, otherwise it will be too toxic to abandon the book. As for the data you said about the previous book, there are many possibilities, such as the poor word count, the plot being too slow, the writing not being liked, etc. It is by no means a simple harem.

The author's last book, Yaro, is very good, but this one is actually a bit unreadable. The author's first Kamen Rider novel is also very good, but the last Kamen Rider novel is also a bit unsatisfactory. However, the author's several Ultra Travel novels are very good, so I suggest that the author can write more Ultra novels. The works from the perspective of Ultraman may be more attractive than other similar works 😄

The heroine Mythra is also good, she is a good girl

I've watched this book Yalang several times, and I have to wait slowly here.

When I was searching for books recently, I found that quite a lot of novels with Western backgrounds have protagonists named Leon and Levis, which really bothered me 😥. I really don't understand whether it's to save trouble or something. Of course it's not against this book, but I just couldn't help but complain about this type of name again.

If you write Game of Thrones slowly, you can expand it. According to your initial ideas, you will write very well. However, later in Game of Thrones, you basically write everything in one piece. It is tiring to read. We all know that the protagonist is basically in a semi-invincible state in Game of Thrones, so what I prefer to watch is the unfolding of things.

One more question, is this a single heroine or multiple heroines?