The Legend of the Demon Cat Hongdou

Well, I thought about it again, I may be almost finished. It's about 300,000 yuan. From now on, I can read the book and give my dear readers votes and all kinds of fancy comments, waiting for me!

Short review: The content is not smart enough, there are too many dialogues, too little emotion, and the sense of substitution is not enough. Book title: "The Legend of Demon Cat Hongdou" Author: Shuangsheng Liuli Commentator: If there is no trace of beauty Introduction: I heard that the Yin and Yang Eyes, the most precious treasure on Demon Cat Island, are gone, and the thief was unfortunately struck by lightning while running away and fell under the yew tree. The yin and yang eyes were activated by lightning and fled to the world. The island owner took away one of the thief's souls and asked her to go to the world to retrieve the treasure. Suddenly a bright light flashed in front of the thief's eyes, and he appeared on a foggy sea, starting a treasure hunt. Book review: The book uses everyone's life to unfold the abilities and growth of the protagonist Hongdou. This method is very suitable for sudden inspiration and movie-like experience. If you like this part, you can watch it, if you don't like it, you can skip it without missing too much. The author's writing style is relatively immature and his writing style is lively. Personally, I felt that some of the plots were not polished very well. They were straight forward without many details, so one thing passed quickly, was very dull, and did not leave a big impression. According to the author's style, it is suggested that the novel can be a little more unrestrained. Although Hongdou is a demon and does not understand human emotions, human feelings and humanity can be highlighted a little more when writing from a human perspective. And it seems that the content of the book is basically dialogue, without any description of the scene, environment or people around you. It is like talking to the NPC in the game. After talking, it feels like, okay, let's go. I think this may need to be improved. 🤔 For example, when it comes to selecting saints in the city to serve "gods", I think I can write more about it. We can talk about the origin of choosing a saint, how the city lords and big families sacrificed their daughters in order to gain more benefits, and whether the people who cheered and gave flowers at the saint ceremony knew what the saint did. This way, spreading out can bring out more humanity. And Hongdou is still young, so she will feel sad for these things, which can pave the way for the future. When Hongdou is in the same situation, she will stick to her true feelings or she has become accustomed to it. This gives Hongdou a growth process. Also, I feel that Susie's demotion is also a point with great room for development. Is it just a small punishment from God, or is it a small stumbling block? As well as Hongdou, as a little demon, she should have the intuition when facing danger, and she felt disappointed when she thought that she went to a magnificent cave but it was just a cave full of spider silk. These emotional fluctuations need to be carefully considered. For example, after Hongdou flew to the awning boat, I could tell that she was happy not just because the text said she was happy, but when I saw her happy and reminisced about that feeling, looking forward to how she would fly in the future and what she could do, I realized that she really liked the feeling of flying. Since the author is writing a book for the first time, he can accumulate more experience and see other people's thoughts, stimulate his own thinking, and grow up with Hongdou.

I don't know what to say! Let me give you a split!

I found that it would be better to build a building.

Well, I don't know if anyone has discovered that I buried a hidden clue. Xiaowan's attitude towards Hongdou has changed, and the names of subsequent chapters have also changed. In fact, going out to find medicine from them should be the second volume, but I was too lazy to break it down, haha ​​🤓

Liuli, here I come. I wonder what will happen to Liuyun and Linglong? Looking forward to

Like little Susie, I silently hid in the corner and prayed silently.

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Come and see Hongdou, the writing is getting better and better, the writing is delicate and the characters are interesting.