It All Starts with Sekiro

Sekiro World is very well written, just follow it at your own pace and ignore the nonsense of those readers. There are a few main points that need to be mentioned. 1. As a copy of Sekiro World, just follow the background setting that you have decided on. It has been written so far. There is no need to be a wolf scholar for research. The background can be self-consistent on the basis of respecting the original work. Readers mainly watch the plot. 2. One shortcoming is that the Hirata family copy is a bit boring, but I have written it all and will correct it in the future. The introduction of fake Miko's love line is quite good, and it is not bad as a condiment for the story. Because you prefer invincible writing, you should introduce more emotional lines and integrate more characters in the next dungeon, so that the plot will not be so boring. 3. The next point is the direction of the plot in the real world. I am looking forward to this. If it is not handled well, it will probably lose points. In order to make the book write more, you should slow down the improvement of the protagonist's combat effectiveness. It is best to write some highlights in the real world, otherwise the lines you laid in reality will be basically useless. Of course, you should follow your outline. 4. Your idea of ​​Sekiro's background is pretty good, and it's great if it's self-consistent. By the way, I originally wanted to write a book in which a character travels through time and transforms into a miko, a girl transforms into a wolf, and a monster-punk style book. So I worked as a wolf scholar for a while, but Long Yin didn't think about the power of reincarnation. This is a good innovation. 5. I haven't seen any bad points so far. This refreshing and ambiguous style is very suitable for this kind of dungeon time travel story. Just keep this style and rhythm and continue to update.

After reading Chapter 17, I had the idea of ​​​​quitting. I skipped and read it and couldn't stand it anymore. Especially in Chapter 17, you were completely deceived into the group and it is easy to make people resist. If you are a stubborn person, you may directly regard you as your mortal enemy. Moreover, this kind of strong pull into the group setting is not in line with the Chinese power. They check the household registration of seven or eight people and carry out moral kidnapping. Is this the country in the author's eyes? The protagonist joins the group to protect the heroine, but both of them are tricked into joining. Isn't he afraid that he will be deceived by missions in the future? And how much sense of belonging will the people who join the group with this kind of moral kidnapping have? Although I like to see the protagonist serve the country, I don't want to see this kind of thing which is annoying. I hope the author can change it😰

It was okay at first, and the balance between reality and Sekiro was good. But then I refused to come out of Sekiro's world. I flipped through the table of contents and it didn't end long after the chapter was released, so I had to say goodbye. Unless you are also a Sekiro game fan, a book with such an imbalanced length is really hard to read. Although the author's writing is quite good and his writing style is very sophisticated, it's really unbearable to not get out of the game world all the time. This book is a pity

The description of the game content is not inferior to that of some veterans, but the reality is a bit weak.

On a whim, I wanted to search for a novel about only. I saw a book with over 300,000 words, which is yours. At first glance, I think you have three novels including this one. I thought you might not stop reading, but I clicked on your other two books to read them. It seems that they are all eunuchs. I heard from reviews that your book is pretty good. Let me ask you a question, author. Can you promise me that this book is not a prison sentence?

I recommend reading Chapter 17 to see how toxic this book is. Officials have actually begun to recruit young men. Tsk, tsk, tsk, they are setting back history by 100 years. The author here, young people are forced to join the supernatural department, their lives are disrupted, they are forced to face the danger of their lives, they are forced to accept the leadership of this bullshit leader, they are forced to go on missions, and they can still be happy to train actively for less than 9,000 yuan a month. In the real world, if you don't feel good about your job and leave your job, you will leave with less pay, you will leave your job far away from home, and you will leave if you have a girlfriend. Can't resign? If you don't let me go, can't I still work as a foreigner? As for the supernatural power obtained by recruiting strong men, if you put yourself in someone else's shoes, you will get less if you are forced to join. It is inevitable that you will not work as a laborer. If you have the opportunity to make arrangements for your family, it is inevitable to leave directly. If a leader feels wronged during a run-in, it is not impossible to stab him in the back when he leaves. Isn't it a ready-made example to delete the database and run away? Personal opinion: This agency has too many poisonous points. There are very few book lovers who like to be restrained and led, and few who like to flatter and point out where to hit. All book friends who can tolerate this will read officialdom articles. Legal speaking, you have superpowers and you may pose a certain threat to the country, so I want you to register. There is no problem at all. But as the author describes it, if you have superpowers, you have to use them for me. What is the truth behind this? This is a country? This is a gangster, ah, gangsters don't even dare to play like this. The state agencies will not and dare not directly recruit people like the protagonist who have extraordinary power and a mentality of ordinary citizens, which is unstable. My opinion is to modify this and only register. Or register as a non-staff member. Distribute optional additional tasks according to personal abilities and obtain benefits such as advanced medical resources, family protection, extraordinary items, training guidance, etc. Formal establishment can get more benefits, including food, housing, transportation, medical education and all-inclusive. Attract people through welfare attraction, feelings of family and country, logistical support, etc., Instead of tricking and abducting people. A good state agency is like a pyramid scheme.

The real world is a bit unnecessary, but the game world is well written. I feel that the real world is a bit redundant. The length could be smaller, or it would be okay if it was not written. Just a few suggestions.

It's still the same old routine, the aura recovers, the protagonist is discovered, joins the national department, gets taken seriously, and then it develops normally. Hey, does anyone have any novels about criminals? The protagonist should preferably be like a clown

If possible, write a little bit about Resident Evil or the Devil May Cry series

The plot of the dungeon is good, but the real plot is average. Good luck to the author＾0＾~

Chapter 17 is particularly poisonous, I recommend that people behind it not read it. Protagonist 2, an ordinary college student who has done nothing, is suddenly ordered to be punished. He only slaps a stick but does not give any dates. I have been thinking that eating too much all the time does not endanger national security. Even my family members have to be supervised in disguise 😰

∠(ᐛ∠)＿Airborne! I am the number one cute host!

Generally speaking, books with a female protagonist in the opening scene will be rejected in nine out of ten cases.

Please give me more cum! I just want to know if there is a readership!

I felt aggrieved after reading Chapter 20, so I scrolled through the comments section. I see that you all said that there is a setting in the future. If negative emotions are too great, they will become demons. Every awakened person is a time bomb. I just want to ask the author, a person who has two parents, a car, a house, a wife (girlfriend) and some assets, and is living a happy life is semi-forced to join an organization that may kill him at any time. Are you happy? OK, this person chose to join for the sake of his wife (family), turned around and went out, okay (face covering), and his wife (family) also came in for him. Okay (sigh), there's no way to quit, that's it. After that, I went to training. During the training, the ball was hit hard and I caught it with my hand. The bones in my hand were cracked. Do you think it hurts if the bones are cracked? Does it hurt? (Angry) If you are injured, you must be treated, right? When I went to the infirmary, the people in the infirmary said it was not a work-related injury and took out a bottle of repair fluid. I don't know how much the salary is, but a bottle of repair solution costs 2,000 yuan. A bottle of 50ml can be used seven or eight times. I would like to ask the author here, how many times should I train in a month? Those with poor talent and lack of proficiency will die in the mission within three months. There have been too many times, dragging my aching body and watching the money flowing out. I have a bad temper and recall all the previous grievances. I immediately turned into a demon and had to drag a few backers to death, especially the one who dragged me in before. I will feel uneasy until he dies.

You have to buy the training medicine yourself, after all, it is a state unit! No benefits at all? Are you just talking about feelings?

Sekiro is well written, and the real world is a little bit different. . .

It is obvious that this book will be read by many readers who are not members of a state agency. What's more, the beginning is a trick to recruit people. Is this how the state agency recruits people? After being reported, the book is gone.

Neglect of duty resulting in civilian casualties? Are you still playing the game after completing the mission next time? This kind of person is the biggest disaster, right? This kind of attitude of state agency personnel should have been put in court and sentenced to death a long time ago. There are problems with the character design throughout the book. He is the kind of person with very reactionary thoughts.

Reading the comment section, I was shocked. . The state recruits protagonists, and they don't get any benefits, and they pay for their own medical expenses when they get injured during the mission. Is this book written by an enemy? ? ? ? This is a professional black bar,,.

Chapter 16 was at least good, but in Chapter 17 I died of poison. To put it bluntly, it's not that the protagonist joining the country is bad, but the way of recruiting the protagonist is wrong and makes people disgusted. This directly integrates the protagonist's half-deception and half-threat. The country is so big, it's not like it can't survive without a protagonist. You can definitely register and report your whereabouts once a month, as long as you don't commit any crime. As for some people who say that awakened people should join the country and work hard for the country, otherwise the future will be like a time bomb. Isn't this a typical theory of the guilt of awakened people? Awakening is beyond one's control, just like you would say that every scientist who is proficient in high-energy physics will commit nuclear explosion crimes in the future. Besides, when the protagonist has just entered the happiest period of his life, you directly drag him to live a life with his head in his belt. Isn't this the same as the ancient people dragging them to the battlefield the day after they got married? It is said that it is to protect the home and the country, but in fact it is the most unethical thing. In fact, there is no need to be so embarrassed in the way of recruiting the protagonist to join the team. It can be just like hiring foreign aid: we don't have anything to do with you at ordinary times, but come and help us at critical moments. Wouldn't it be nice to do this? It's not offensive, but it can also create a sense of belonging for the protagonist. This is just my personal opinion, please don't spray it.

The content of this book is very good, but I couldn't read it. When I saw the end of the wolf chapter, I couldn't read it anymore because I just killed the cuckold man. How can I put it, it should be said that it was awkward to read. I felt that the author was very entangled in whether he had a male protagonist in the harem or a single female protagonist. The writing was very ambiguous. The male protagonist Dahai died 10,000 times in order to save his fan girl, and he also wanted to portray Ichiro. He was very successful in portraying him, but in the end there was Wu Zetian's Nankeyi Meng. So Ichiro and the others who turned into tentacles were still thinking about protecting Miko at the end of the wolf arc* but the male protagonist walked away? And the descendant who fainted on the dragon's horn ended without saying anything. I was dumbfounded. In the end, I had to bring out Mi Mei who turned into a weapon. Oh, and then in the chapter where I killed the cuckold man, I almost didn't see any interaction with the fan girl. Oh my God, the male protagonist died hundreds of times for the fan girl. It's not an exaggeration to say that it will be unforgettable, but it's gone? Then there is the emotional issue of the protagonist. If he was still an otaku before, in the wolf world, it can be said that the male protagonist's heart has been completely reshaped. It can also be seen that the bond between the male protagonist in the wolf world can be said to be the biggest. After all, the first time is unforgettable. As a result, the male protagonist ended the wolf chapter so indifferently or indifferently, and completely ignored the wolf world. At least Miko must be saved. What should I do with the souls of people like Isshin and the wolf-proof girl? Just ignore it all? How to put it, it's possible, but it's too cold, and I can't tell you that this is a protagonist who is willing to fight with Lao Gou to save his fan girl. At that time, I thought that the protagonist would at least have a small world. The alien base started, but the result was gone. Author, you wrote such a grand wolf background and even the map of Weiming City was Wu Zetian's Nankeyimeng, and then you ignored this world. I really didn't expect it. What's the matter? It's okay but I feel a little awkward. And then there's the reality chapter, eh. . . What can I say? The plot I read is very grand, including the settings of superpowers and demon transformation, but as expected, I couldn't get enough of the real-life part. The number of appearances of the heroine can be said to be lackluster from where I saw it. Simply put, it is not attractive enough. Compared with the fan girl who commits suicide for the hero, the plot impact is completely inferior. Orz. And because of the length, the characterization of the heroine, at least where I saw it, only established a heartless beautiful girl with a big stomach. To the point that it even gave me the feeling that the anti-wolf girl who was shot to death by the male protagonist before the game even started was very impactful. To put it simply, the main plot and outline of what I have seen so far are very good, but I personally always feel that there are some details and The follow-up is a bit twisted. This is how I feel after watching it now. I really can't follow it anymore because I am still thinking about Kuro who is waiting for the wolf to save him in the tentacle monster pile. Damn it, I get so angry just thinking about it. I'm *****! ! ! ! ! 😡😡😡😡😡😡 I can only say that the author's book is very good and touching, but I can't accept it! I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more and become a master soon. I will put this book on the bookshelf first and then. . . Let's talk about it then.

I can't count how many eunuch authors I have scolded in my life But I just can't bear to scold you Your description of the battle scenes is the most gorgeous, cool, and passionate battle scene I have ever seen in my life. I have been reading for six years. I have seen countless battle scenes, including one-hit ones, complicated ones, and luxurious and gorgeous ones. But when I saw your description of the battle scenes, I felt what the limits of human beings are. To be honest, you have risen to the level of faith in my heart. Every time I write an article, I try my best to imitate you, learn the depth of your thoughts and the excellence of your writing After a year, I will re-read the full text again. If you, the author, are unwilling to continue writing, I hope I can inherit your will. I will never let a treasure like you be buried!

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Thanks to Qidian for recommending the unfinished eunuch novel to me for the 13th time

I haven't watched Arknights since... I've never played this game before, and I'm not interested in it. Moreover, the plots after Sekiro and Back to Reality are quite good, so I don't want to watch the plot of Ark at all... And it doesn't seem to be over after all this time.

The whole book was excellent in every aspect, whether it was the writing or the CP, but it was so crazy that a very good book collapsed. What would have been a pretty good piece turned out. . . (ฅ••ฅ)The author is heartbroken and the readers are also sad.

Can the eunuch's books also be included in the daily guide?

Well, it's understandable that the world rejects the world, but if you reject the protagonist, it feels a bit retarded. It's like you have a bad relationship with the person upstairs and then you demolish the load-bearing wall of your home.

The Sekiro volume was so well written, but of course it fell apart later on. Author, can you come back and write an ending?