It All Begins with Sekiro

Chapter 17 is particularly poisonous, I recommend that people behind it not read it. Protagonist 2, an ordinary college student who has done nothing, is suddenly ordered to be punished. He only slaps a stick but does not give any dates. I have been thinking that eating too much all the time does not endanger national security. Even my family members have to be supervised in disguise 😰

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Sekiro World is very well written, just follow it at your own pace and ignore the nonsense of those readers. There are a few main points that need to be mentioned. 1. As a copy of Sekiro World, just follow the background setting that you have decided on. It has been written so far. There is no need to be a wolf scholar for research. The background can be self-consistent on the basis of respecting the original work. Readers mainly watch the plot. 2. One shortcoming is that the Hirata family copy is a bit boring, but I have written it all and will correct it in the future. The introduction of fake Miko's love line is quite good, and it is not bad as a condiment for the story. Because you prefer invincible writing, you should introduce more emotional lines and integrate more characters in the next dungeon, so that the plot will not be so boring. 3. The next point is the direction of the plot in the real world. I am looking forward to this. If it is not handled well, it will probably lose points. In order to make the book write more, you should slow down the improvement of the protagonist's combat effectiveness. It is best to write some highlights in the real world, otherwise the lines you laid in reality will be basically useless. Of course, you should follow your outline. 4. Your idea of ​​Sekiro's background is pretty good, and it's great if it's self-consistent. By the way, I originally wanted to write a book in which a character travels through time and transforms into a miko, a girl transforms into a wolf, and a monster-punk style book. So I worked as a wolf scholar for a while, but Long Yin didn't think about the power of reincarnation. This is a good innovation. 5. I haven't seen any bad points so far. This refreshing and ambiguous style is very suitable for this kind of dungeon time travel story. Just keep this style and rhythm and continue to update.

Generally speaking, books with a female protagonist in the opening scene will be rejected in nine out of ten cases.

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I felt aggrieved after reading Chapter 20, so I scrolled through the comments section. I see that you all said that there is a setting in the future. If negative emotions are too great, they will become demons. Every awakened person is a time bomb. I just want to ask the author, a person who has two parents, a car, a house, a wife (girlfriend) and some assets, and is living a happy life is semi-forced to join an organization that may kill him at any time. Are you happy? OK, this person chose to join for the sake of his wife (family), turned around and went out, okay (face covering), and his wife (family) also came in for him. Okay (sigh), there's no way to quit, that's it. After that, I went to training. During the training, the ball was hit hard and I caught it with my hand. The bones in my hand were cracked. Do you think it hurts if the bones are cracked? Does it hurt? (Angry) If you are injured, you must be treated, right? When I went to the infirmary, the people in the infirmary said it was not a work-related injury and took out a bottle of repair fluid. I don't know how much the salary is, but a bottle of repair solution costs 2,000 yuan. A bottle of 50ml can be used seven or eight times. I would like to ask the author here, how many times should I train in a month? Those with poor talent and lack of proficiency will die in the mission within three months. There have been too many times, dragging my aching body and watching the money flowing out. I have a bad temper and recall all the previous grievances. I immediately turned into a demon and had to drag a few backers to death, especially the one who dragged me in before. I will feel uneasy until he dies.

You have to buy the training medicine yourself, after all, it is a state unit! No benefits at all? Are you just talking about feelings?

Sekiro is well written, and the real world is a little bit different. . .

It is obvious that this book will be read by many readers who are not members of a state agency. What's more, the beginning is a trick to recruit people. Is this how the state agency recruits people? After being reported, the book is gone.

Neglect of duty resulting in civilian casualties? Are you still playing the game after completing the mission next time? This kind of person is the biggest disaster, right? This kind of attitude of state agency personnel should have been put in court and sentenced to death a long time ago. There are problems with the character design throughout the book. He is the kind of person with very reactionary thoughts.