Journey to the West: I Want to Live Forever

At the beginning, when I tried to persuade him to quit, the protagonist looked like a retarded person. He didn't have the slightest bit of defensiveness. It was so frustrating to watch.

This Taoist Zi Fang plotted against the protagonist with Zhao Qian, and the protagonist actually blamed himself and even felt severe pain in his heart because he killed this Taoist but could not save Zhao Qian. He was really speechless.

It's best to change the beginning, otherwise no one will read it.

The old woman Zhao Qian is a failure as the heroine. She has no magical powers and magic weapons in Journey to the West, which is even more irrelevant.

I don't understand. If you want to become an immortal and live forever, you will still be short of women? Talk about pursuing true love! Fart! Just licking the dog, no matter how hard you give, no matter how much you save people, but there are still some people who can write, such as Douluo and Dou Po. The heroine in Douluo and Dou Po is well written.

Is this book related to Journey to the West? ? ?

I just want to ask if you got the title of your book wrong?

Which dynasty was the Zhou Dynasty🤔

I want to know where the silver coins from the Zhou Dynasty came from, and where did the foreign officials come from?

I want to support you, but you can't. I verified it more than a dozen times but failed.

I'm being plotted all the time, my strength is almost immortal, my brain is as stupid as a pig's head.

How old is the author? His mind is immature and he has no experience.

I'll go, there's no heroine? ? ? Goodbye to you

After reading Chapter 7, I wonder how Li Yuan obtained the money and lived in an inn.

How did the protagonist bear the injustice?

There are so few comments. What's going on? Is it because it's poorly written, no one reads it, or is it for other reasons?