Howling West Wind

Emmmmm The following is purely my personal opinion... If there is any misunderstanding, please forgive me... I... I will never say that I actually read less than ten chapters😭I don't have time Okay, let's talk about the key points There are no bad points in visual inspection (for me), which is good for a new author Keep it up The plot direction... I think it's very good, but of course you still have to watch the follow-up plot... Keep it up For formatting... I just saw someone in the book circle saying that your formatting is not good, but I think it's okay. It still depends on personal feelings. Try reading it and make your own choice (ps. Maybe you had accepted his opinion and revised it when I read it) The writing style is not bad, not bad, and can be read smoothly (ps. Maybe I have read too much jelly grass recently, which makes me feel this way about all books😂) If you have any suggestions... Emmmm, I personally think the protagonist can describe more when he practices "sword" After all, it is about fighting😂😂 By the way, the fighting should not be too bloody, be careful of 404😜 Overall, it is a good new book, keep up the hard work

The advantage of being unconventional is that it doesn't stick to the stereotypes, it is convenient to express imagination, and it can also avoid certain sensitive risks. Just like the last time the book "Iron Hooves on the Mountains and Seas" was blocked because it accidentally included a political commissar, it was labeled as a political commissar, a liar, and a liar. But the most fearful thing about being ostentatious is that it is frivolous, has no place to focus, lacks historical precipitation and cultural heritage, is somewhat ungrounded, and will inevitably become a piece of writing. The nomadic background depicted by the author can be seen to have the shadow of Mongolia and Qiang people. But on the contrary, the characteristics are not so distinctive.

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Where did this great Virgin come from? The enemy who killed your parents ten years ago, the enemy who killed your subordinates ten minutes ago, and the enemy who almost killed you just now, stopped bleeding and was released?

Thirteen, happy Mid-Autumn Festival🌹🌹

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Congratulations on finishing this book (｡◝ᴗ◜｡)

Congratulations on the successful completion of this book, looking forward to the new work!

My book is finished, so there is no need to vote to each other, but I will vote for you every day, come on↖(^ω^)↗

I thought you, 80 fans, would be miserable enough, but there is a guy next door with 10 fans, and more than 800 chapters.

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