Police Doctor Night Tour

Although the combination of police and doctors is old-fashioned, the system exchange is novel. After reading Chapter 35, tell me your current views. 1. Before Chapter 16 (or thereabouts), I was writing about surgery. There are many professional terms. The author is either engaged in medicine or has studied it carefully. Writing down the detailed medical knowledge of this kind of surgery can highlight the professionalism of the book, but most people don't understand it. The author spends a lot of time explaining medical knowledge, which is actually not very good. Just write a little bit. After all, this is a novel, and the plot still ranks first. 2. The writing style is lacking. I was writing about surgery earlier, which occupied a lot of medical knowledge. It was difficult to see or clearly feel the author's narrative description level, but when writing about the investigation, I could clearly feel the deficiency. First, the process of solving the case is written like a running account, and the language is somewhat straightforward and plain. For example, Jingye got ideas from the group and told Bai Qi, "After hearing this, Bai Qi was very excited: "That's great! Because of your judgment, you bought us a lot of time!" " Bai Qi said happily and turned to Bai Yixuan, "Go and investigate all the information about this great year. Soon, Bai Yixuan brought the information. " These words felt a bit colloquial and unremarkable The second thing is that the most important thing in the novel is that there is a conflict. Every time a problem is raised in the detective group, everyone solves it immediately and flatters the male protagonist. Not to mention that these are celebrities in the reasoning world. These behaviors are all OOC. This plot always appears and makes it seem that only the boss is responsible for solving the case, which is still boring. The third reason may be that the author likes certain words too much and always uses them poorly. For example, "report" appears several times in more than 20 chapters. Moreover, the two male protagonists are in a cooperative relationship. Is "report" inappropriate? But I think the part about the activities of criminals is very good. I think the writing style is also very good when writing stories in plot mode. Maybe the author paid too much attention to the system when writing the protagonist and ignored the protagonist's character activities. But in fact, the system is a cheat, but the protagonist is the center. 3. When I saw the previous surgery part, I thought it was a two-male protagonist. When writing about medicine, I mainly describe Jing Ye, and when writing about solving crimes, I mainly describe Bai Qi. Because of the system exchange, there will be some small plots between them getting along, and I think this setting is quite interesting. But when I saw the plot of solving the case, I found that only Jing Ye was written, and Bai Qi was only responsible for asking people to check the information. Maybe the author originally only wanted Jing Ye to be the male protagonist, and Bai Qi was just a supporting role, but this may not be so attractive. I think it is very good to write two male protagonists in this setting. No matter what kind of novel it is, the dialogue and exchange between the main and supporting characters or the two protagonists are very important in order to better reflect the character's personality. If you only describe one character, it will be too thin. 4. There may be something wrong with Baiqi Settings. As a captain of the police force, he must be capable. But in the first case, at least until Chapter 28, I couldn't see his excellence at all. When you encounter a case, you go to Jingye, and when you encounter difficulties, you go to Jingye. Why, you don't think anymore when you have a system? He said Zhao was the murderer, so you believed him? Even if you know he is right, at least think about it for yourself. Why do you believe and accept it so easily? People know the symptoms detected by your system, and they want to test them themselves. Why do you just go with the flow? This is really a big failure! The above is not enough, I hope the author can improve it. The setting of system exchange is really good. I still like it very much, but I hope the plot in the middle can be enriched. To be honest, if you write about the back-and-forth between prisoners and hijackers, or stories in plot mode, it can be described regardless of the language, environment, and action descriptions. Why do you pull your hips as soon as you get to the protagonist? Don't be limited by the cheating finger of the system You can't say that the whole book is like this without reading the rest. I believe that the author gets better and better as he writes, and I hope it will get better and better in the future!

I don't know anything else, but this introduction is absolutely top-notch (doge)

Where is Shennong? What were the results of the poison test? Speed ​​reporting. 😐😐

Not to mention other things, the introduction is great.

Introduction: I'm a good guy, I'm a good guy The author in the book review section hacks himself, I'm a good guy, too

I am a medical dog. I cannot comment on the overall quality of the book because I only read less than two chapters and stopped reading. The first two chapters are full of descriptions of medical terms and treatment methods and their details. However, in my opinion, it is more like the content that was cobbled together after consulting the information. It is not professional, but it will make people outside the profession look very high-level. But people in the profession look really miserable. Just a small personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. The following content may be very exciting. After all, I have already achieved good results. I still hope that the author will write more about what he is good at, and it is better to skip over what he is not good at.

，………！ Looking forward to more great works in the future

When I wrote this introduction, I just felt like shit 😂

Is the reason for the million-dollar reward the introduction? 😄😄😄

I really like the dual male protagonists! Come on↖(^ω^)↗Come on↖(^ω^)↗

Why do you think this introduction is so true? Low-key, low-key, our beauty has nowhere to go 😁😁😁

To be honest, this introduction is a bit hard to understand.

The author of the big brother is persistence + money + talent. This big brother wrote it in May, and persisted for five months without cutting it. He has perseverance. I hope Bai Yinmeng can make you change, and stick to it. Xiaopujie can only hold my hundreds of collections and dozens of fans drooling, envy!

The road has been broadened for you. With your introduction, I have read this book.

If you praise this book and how much you paid, send it to the group account, good brothers 🙂

To be able to write this kind of introduction, you need to be at least a sixth grade graduate.

Just this introduction, you must read it!

How many people can you repel with your introduction? I admire you.

Is your introduction just to gain popularity?

There are too many scientific names and it seems a bit hard, but it's worth reading on.

I don't care, just focus on this introduction. I will definitely go in and read it carefully.

This introduction, the author is really talented

The author also needs to add it to your bookshelf if you want to add it to your resume.

Chapter 2 is extremely poisonous. The memory is fully worth 100, and the main character, a doctor, is only 21. I wonder if more ordinary people have single-digit memories? Also, for such an important brain surgery, I would not talk about licking foreigners. Just the protagonist and the foreigner perform an operation, without the need for nurses, assistants, or anesthesiologists. Even if the protagonist doesn't understand surgery, he is called in to help?

After reading Chapter 15, I feel that no matter what book I start from now, as long as I spend money to recommend it, I will get a lot of votes.

If the first sentence of the introduction is not changed, many people will be discouraged

Here I am, actually I have read it before, the writing is pretty good, but it is a little difficult to read... To be honest... It is a little unfriendly. But the author is very attentive and the story is wonderful. I hope the author will persevere and finish telling the story without any eunuchs! What I want to see more...

I won't say whether it's poisonous or not, and I won't say whether it's good or not. Just this introduction, I'll read it first out of respect.

A wet ninja, a handsome and wet kind? When you click on the splash screen and see it's you, I'll send you a small ticket!

One of the coolest and most dazzling professions for men is the police and doctors... The author's writing style is unique, suspenseful, compact, and unusually logical. Reading your book is as precious as looking at a work of art.