Pokemon: Fusing Divine Pets

Is this writing a running account? Is the plot too casual? Just say a few words to someone and give you something, and it's all what the protagonist wants. And there is no interaction with the elves at all. What type is your novel? Is it a battle? But the battle in the novel is a turn-based game. You hit me and I will hit you. Funny? I watched it for a long time and I didn't laugh (maybe it's because I'm too funny). This is my opinion about the author, please don't say it. You go ahead.

The protagonist regards the elves as tools for his pretense. He combines several elves into one, and the others are dead. This is the same as raising gu, sacrificing the others and leaving only the strongest one, and the main content is garbage.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Just don't overturn, there are not so many people who can become gods in one book 😡

You have no love for elves, you only think of them as tools

It's a bit toxic, mainly in the following aspects: 1. Look at some details. For example, the protagonist Sakamoto of Team Rocket should be familiar with the plot, right? But in the plot, there will be some inexplicable things. Like a newcomer, it's okay to say that it's been a long time and you have forgotten some things, such as the giant dragon and Uncle Carp King. Do you know the plot or not? 2. There are no setbacks in the world of the protagonist. For example, if I lack a skill, well, someone will come and chat with me later, and I will give you a particularly precious skill. In the game, we have to work hard to catch elves to exchange props, complete tasks and get skills. Even if we give some away, it is just for the convenience of the player. Are you giving them all away? Xiaozhi also experienced the frustration of Pikachu fighting Thunderchu. How far do you think you can go in life without setbacks? Refer to Xiaomao 3. I am basically not familiar with the knowledge of elves. The moon elf evolves to get the moon stone. I also want to see what you eat from Kira. 4. The plot feels like a game, with various props in the game, but it is also an animated plot, which is very inconsistent. 5. The plot description is not rich enough, it feels like running water. No wonder it ends so soon, because it would have been too much if it didn't end.

From the moment I decided to use "synthesis" to write Pokémon articles, this article was destined not to be popular. Most of the readers looking for Pokémon articles care about the bond between the protagonist and the Pokémon. What we are going to see is a real elf world. It's not an emotionless protagonist who pretends to be cool. This kind of setting is impossible to succeed here. Don't blame it for not being familiar with it because it has just been transferred to the site. It is the problem of the author and the article itself. Using elves as tools won't work here.

The protagonist should have a better wife in the future, lolita are all perverts!

There is a problem with this setting. Reiterating the speech of the protagonist in the first chapter, it can be concluded that the protagonist knows a lot of advanced elf knowledge and knows Xiaozhi. The Rockets character also mentioned some plots and Lillie, etc., Which shows that he has watched many animations, but when it comes to the plot, such as the giant dragon or the cruise ship incident, the protagonist has no idea about it, which is very inconsistent.

Chapter 1: Persuading someone to quit: A 20-year-old does something that only a 3-year-old would do

The author's handling of characters is really bad. There are a lot of characters with no practical significance in these 100 chapters. It feels purely disgusting. Even though it was meant as foreshadowing, I didn't handle it well. I was so embarrassed that I almost gave up the book several times. Take Banmu as an example, a super boss was written by the author like a gangster leader. Nourishing Qi Kung Fu is not like a normal person at all, but like a giant baby. The protagonist's ability to deal with interpersonal relationships has also been ruined by the author. Is this a provocation to call Nazis "aunty" when he sees her? It's so embarrassing that there's nothing to say about it, and the author didn't get the character of the protagonist right. In the early days, he was a miser who used elves as tools, but now he's become a brainless scapegoat?