The Laid-Back Life of a Star

Dear guests, could you stop for a moment and give me some writing advice for this book? Thank you 😊!

There are several chapters that are under seal and are being unsealed.

It's not toxic after Chapter 38. If you are interested, you can read it.

Compared with those entertainment novels that start blaming the sky and the earth at the 50th chapter, it is really conscientious. It is very relaxing and comfortable to read. Please update it soon.

The first few pictures are not good at writing, but you can still read them later.

Monthly tickets have been provided. This is my first time commenting. I don't know what it is like to add finesse.

I have read more than 30 chapters... I really can't stand it any longer. The protagonist's performance is really shady. The person who wrote the book has no high emotional intelligence. The female characters are written in a very petty style... Not to mention that the author used a poisonous snake to force the drama... He said that the snake venom should be sucked with the mouth. Just suck it with your mouth... An old Chinese medicine doctor came and called Mr. Zhou... Since the article is about the urban entertainment industry, it should be in line with the speaking habits of modern people... I know martial arts, and then I can do everything. I am very good at chopping and cutting... It's really embarrassing to watch

Toxic or highly toxic. I came to see the "leisurely" life, not to see you pretending to be slapped in the face. I came to see the protagonist interact with others to relax. It was not to see you pretending to be cool all by yourself, and you pretended to be so stiff. It made me feel embarrassed and cancerous. Others see your poor pretense every day, and you still call 666 like a fool. Your book is "The Leisure Life of Longing for Life", not "Missing My Life" "Live a Pretending Life" I read these chapters and I can probably summarize it: You sing in interviews and others shout 666. You light fires and others shout 666 You practice martial arts and others shout 666. You kill wild boars and others shout 666. You compete with others and others shout 666... In short, the summary is that you are pretending to be cool and others shout 666. There is no interaction at all. The whole process is describing how awesome the protagonist is13

The poison test is completed. Read 10 chapters. ①Title, author, your title makes me think that you are an undercover agent sent by the enemy station. If you hadn't clicked it and taken a look, you would have realized that the protagonist is not some reborn god and devil, the richest man in the world, and I would have thought you were an enemy spy who broke into our side. ②Writing style. It feels like the writing is like a running account, and the article is dry (I'm not trying to make you watery). I didn't get used to it at first, but it got better later. ③Golden finger. An old-fashioned but practical popularity draw. But what is the whole national martial arts for? It was developed so early. Are there going to be fantasy elements later? ④ It's just a matter of using the longing for life to attract popularity, but if you say in front of Mr. He that the protagonist's original gardenia blossoms is a bit ruinous to the popularity, after all, there are many Mr. He fans attracted by the longing for life. No matter how you write it, you will be scolded. ⑤ It's a bit outrageous that a newcomer who has never even appeared on the screen before has become a permanent guest. It can be written that after the protagonist appears once, the program team will recruit him to be a permanent guest because of the ratings. ⑥I feel like the author is a fake fan. The three old fans of Longing have gone, leaving Tianba behind. The dogs are not just Little H, but there are also pots and pans!

Chapter 182: A 180-meter person weighs 120 pounds. How skinny is that? A martial arts practitioner, a muscular man? ? ? ? ?