Across the Heavens Chat Group

Everything written here has been defiled. After ascension,

You attacked Kesha even though you knew Feng Yun Wuji was from the human race and you killed Feng Yun Wuji. To put it bluntly, you are a traitor to the human race.

Author, do your best! Anyway, I've watched most of it, so I won't tell you how watery you are. Just assume that there is a problem with your strength system arrangement. And when you finish writing it, it's like writing a running account. I think you should read the compositions written by others. You segmented a bad batch. Author, you are still too young. The writing is really not that good. No matter what you think. That's what I thought anyway.

What kind of stuff are you writing about? The power system is messed up, forcibly lowering or enhancing the strength of some characters.

Not interesting. To be honest, wherever you see Feng Yun Wuji. Seriously, I wish I were the manager of this starting point, or the boss or something like that. The first one banned this author. Kesha, the protagonist, is not even worthy of carrying Feng Yun Wuji's shoes. Do you know, what is the meaning of the protagonist's existence? What is the existence of others' Fengyun Wuji, can you compare it? It is simply an embarrassment to humanity and an utter embarrassment to the sanity of an adult.

There are too many long paragraphs and it looks very laborious.

Damn it, it's too pitiful. In the Super Seminary, Reina is a gene and has a relationship with the sun god, and the sun is banned as you say? The genes of super gods sound like science at best, but they sound like rubbish at worst, and are not as good as Superman at all.

I won't be happy if you don't complain! Leng Feng, a special soldier, has a second level? Gilgamesh is only halfway to level three? He is a demigod after all. And Xiongba is actually at level 3, why the hell is Poseidon only at level 4? I'm afraid I haven't seen the setting of Saint Seiya.

The author stopped writing. After reading the first chapter, you knew the book was finished.

I couldn't stand it anymore after more than ten chapters. I felt that the protagonist was mentally retarded. He was obviously the leader of the chat group but his strength was so low, yet he just liked to seek death. If I were a second-level or third-level person in the chat group, I would find a way to test the protagonist, or assassinate, or use other means to kill the protagonist. See if you can get the position of group leader or management. It feels like the people inside don't have any scheming, and are as straightforward and reckless as children. Anyway, there is no cunning and cunning in the original work. They are almost like simple children. If it were me, I would find a way to test a garbage group leader who has not reached the first level. I also want to know why those strong people with levels 34 and 45 did not raise objections and let a first-level garbage directly become the group leader. You must know that some strong people may be simple-minded and attack the protagonist directly. I feel that the characters in this novel are relatively innocent and simple anyway, unlike other novels I have read where all those people have deep thoughts. I have watched Infinite Streaming or System Streaming chat group streams. One of the people in the chat group is Ying Zheng in Qin Shiming Yue. He is really deep-minded and cunning. He is not as cunning as Ying Zheng in Qin Shizhong in other novels. He has a violent personality and does not have so much scheming and rationality. He does not have the grandeur, wisdom, and majesty of the real Qin Shihuang. This level and class feel unreliable at all, too rubbish. The strength of Holy Kesha is only more than level 4 and the strength of the combined stage or Mahayana stage in cultivation. First, it is not expressed, and love is excessively devalued. Secondly, it excessively forcibly elevates other worlds. It feels a little like lifting a small ping-pong ball to a planet, or to the size of the solar system. Not rigorous and reasonable at all. Like Ye Wen, he practices the martial arts style, and the realms are divided into light realm, dark realm, transformation realm, elixir realm, hard realm, and seeing the gods are not bad. Normally, Ye Wen's cultivation level should be in the Dark Realm, and if he reaches the sky, it is only in the Transformation Realm. The God-Seeing Immortality in the Guoshu style is equivalent to a grand master in the Ancient Martial Arts style. Comparison of the realms of ancient martial arts and the level of immortality, [Acquired, innate, master, (the Qi refining period in immortality)] [Grand master, heavenly being (only in the low or medium martial arts world can break the void) (equal to the foundation building in immortality)] [Martial Arts Golden Pill (the elixir-forming stage in cultivating immortality, or Golden Pill stage)] [Martial Dao Yin Shen, or Yang Shen (equal to the Nascent Soul stage in cultivating immortality)] [Martial Dao Yuan Shen (and the Transformation Stage in cultivating immortality)]... ... And Ye Wen is just a strong person in the dark realm or the transformation realm. Not even one price. But now that he has become a third-level powerhouse, he has improved countless times. He has been directly promoted from a mortal to the Nascent Soul Stage, or the Divine Transformation Stage. It is already very unreasonable, and the protagonist is also relatively rubbish. I need to find a way to strengthen my qualifications and improve my cultivation.

The writing is messy! ? How many people can understand! ! ! Author... Have you graduated from elementary school? Even the running account writing method is better than yours! ! ! You have finished writing it yourself and you can understand it yourself! The preface does not match the postscript! Bullshit

One sentence, I know your future, so I fought me off, extremely poisonous,,,

I am a master of poison and have never heard of his opponent. I was lucky enough to read this book today and felt that I was a frog in the well.

Queen Keisha was beaten to atoms. They can all be resurrected. He was almost killed by these few blows from Destruction. Is there any mistake? The system is too chaotic.

It was too messy. The writing of Resident Evil was a mess. In the end, it became a one-man show for the protagonist. He reaped the benefits alone and left the other group members with nothing. It looked too ugly. None of the bullshit tasks were clearly written. It ended hastily.

Tell me how to report this book

When someone beats your wife, you still go out and help others? You are only allowed to hit those around the protagonist and the protagonist is not allowed to fight back, right? This is Zhutianliu... Just kill as many as you want. Different ways don't work together. Is it wrong for the protagonist to vent his anger on his wife?

After reading more than ten chapters, I saw that my head hurts, I don't understand the language, and I can't travel to the world of other group members, but what the hell is it that I can activate skills from a distance? I don't understand, what's the difference between it and someone traveling through time? The difference is that the person is not in that plane, so how do you put the skills there? One time, Di Xin and Ying Zheng were fighting each other across the plane, and then the protagonist was also trying to fight Tony... Before writing the novel, he had to raise his IQ. There are countless other bugs. I suggest the author read the original novel and understand it before writing the character. It felt like Sun Wukong, who had been suppressed by the Wuzhi Mountain for 500 years, was accelerated by 100 by the protagonist and then died of old age.

The beginning is too messy. Who would believe that this is not something the author used to entertain himself?

Why kill Fengyun Wuji? The protagonist really doesn't deserve to be a human being

In Arrival of Heavens, the angel A chases the crocodile Thornton and cuts a large canyon with one sword. I feel that Keisha in this group is not as strong as A chase in the anime. In the anime, the queen is integrated into the universe. With this strength, she is only a fourth-level high-level and cannot beat Uchiha Madara. Haha, Liang Bing can kill Kaguya, the God of Naruto, without any pressure. You Kesha's shameless strength scares me to death.