The Road to Immortality Is Long

The author's writing is a little weak, but the plot is okay. I sincerely recommend that the author pay more attention to the character's expressions, movements, and psychological processes. It's true, after reading the great author's article, I felt so embarrassed when the author wrote it like this. Also, I hope the author pays more attention to the creation of supporting characters. All the supporting characters are the same, and no matter how good the writing is, it will inevitably feel boring. But if the supporting characters are full, as long as the writing does not collapse, the protagonist will naturally become more outstanding. Just some suggestions, don't comment if you don't like them.

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1. The unusual things about the heroine are not without reason. You can use your imagination. 2. Although the golden finger is relatively thick, the effect is not very satisfactory 3. Regarding cp, I am sure that there is no male protagonist in this book 4. It is said that a strong woman is a strong woman, and the most annoying thing is to rely on men to become a strong woman! 5. Because I don't like cold-hearted heroines, I set up best friends and a warm sect. 6.. The heroine's opponent will not be stupid, and the geniuses of her generation will not be weak. There is no single standout scenario. 1. Reasons for creation: I have been watching the heroine cultivating immortality for three years. I read it every day when I have time, and when I see a shortage of books... I am often shocked by the heroine's various behaviors! Some of the settings are really weird and completely ruin your outlook. The heroine's character often does not match the description! Either the Holy Virgin White Lotus, or she is scheming, or she is cold-blooded, or she is a brainless idiot. . . 😒 There are many unreasonable points in the plot, which cannot be rounded off. Goldfinger is so powerful that she is the strongest heroine in the world! The enemies are all composed of weak minds and weak chickens. . . 😢 There are also many romance novels that are about cultivating immortality. The novel I want to read is about a female protagonist cultivating immortality, not romance... 😓 In addition, there are also many non-traditional romance novels about immortality, which do not take the usual path, such as the fairy brewer? Deception? I felt like I was being cheated on the inside. . . . . So, I finally decided to go into battle personally, write a traditional female protagonist cultivating fairy tales according to my own wishes, and try my best to eliminate minefields. 2. Creation difficulties: Because the baby is now six months old and I have to hold him all day long, which is a lot of trouble, so I have to hurry up and code while the baby is sleeping. However, as a newcomer, I didn't know that there was such a thing as saving a manuscript and then publishing it as a book. I published it as soon as I wrote it. . . I only heard that writing a novel requires an outline when I was in school, so I made an outline. Then I discovered today that it's better to have a detailed plan so that I don't get stuck too often. Then I realized that there is such a thing as a fine outline. . . Please forgive the author for being naive These reasons lead me to update one chapter per day at most! If the baby is sick or something happens, the update can only be stopped for a day or two. 3. My promise: When I write this novel, I don't just write it casually. I will definitely keep writing it without cheating. Each chapter is carefully written, not just to make up the word count or to cope with the situation. Because this is one of my wishes, to write a female-centered fairy tale that satisfies me in my life 4. My hope: I look forward to everyone's encouragement and suggestions, and I will make modifications as appropriate. My biggest wish is that more people can read the books I write This feeling of satisfaction is probably the same as going shopping and buying a bunch of favorite items. I believe girls can understand it🍀

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No matter what happens, it will eventually pass. I also faced many problems when I first started the book, and they will eventually pass. I returned to being single after I sent the contract materials. I had a quarrel with my family because of my studies and work, and I was unhappy with my friends because of the breakup. All in all, it was a very sad time, but now I can finally see the light of the day. No matter what happens, especially the things that make you feel broken, it will eventually pass, because that is not the normal state of life, come on!