King's Landing Star Road

I watched some of them, and I felt that the fighting scenes were not clearly written, nor did they have a thrilling feeling. And it's a bit confusing, I read the first 20 chapters. I just didn't understand that arena match. The first 20 chapters I read felt inconsistent. It feels like I'm stuck one after another, just writing whatever comes to my mind, without any continuity. It caused a bit of confusion up front. (´･ᆺ･`) I feel that the first 20 chapters are more exciting and smooth. It was probably when the protagonist drugged those nutritional supplements. Then I felt like my brain couldn't react after reading such a long section. It is recommended that you divide it into more sections. Sometimes I don't know who is talking. ⊙ω⊙ Then I read the previous one and felt that there was a lot of nonsense. For example, the following paragraph: [A Hui walked out and saw Jun Yuyan, with a bit of anger, a bit of unwillingness, and a bit of awe flashing in his eyes. In the end, he just smiled unnaturally and walked towards the ring. ] Didn't you say it flashed by? This flash is a bit too much, and a bit fast. (๑• . •๑) There is a lot of nonsense like this, but it can be described clearly and intuitively in just a few words. But I always feel that I can't grasp it and the description is not clear. This is a common mistake novice authors make. (´･ω･`) It may be more or less like this before. I haven't looked at the back yet, maybe it will be better later. (◔◡◔) However, the setting of this article is quite interesting, and the author has a lot of imagination. It feels good to be exposed to interstellar literature for the first time. ~(￣▽￣~)~ In many places, the author may want to express the more complex emotions. It may be because the writing style is not enough and he is a newcomer and did not write well. (｡･ω･｡) But the author, please come on! (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ So far, the layout of this book is quite large. There is a lot of room for improvement. ´･ᴗ･` The advantage is that the structure is large, and the disadvantage is that the structure is large. Because the pattern is so large, it is difficult to write. But you can take your time and don't rush. ´◡` Finally, no cp is supported. ٩(ˊˋ*)و~ Such a handsome heroine must not be beaten by some big pig's hoof. (๑`･ᴗ･´๑)

The writing style is 4.9 (Out of 5). The old bookworm is very picky about writing style. The writing style of this novel is not wordy, which is good. The plot score is 4.9 (Out of 5). I have read relatively few interstellar novels. I personally like the plot of a woman disguising herself as a man without any censorship. This novel is occasionally humorous. When I saw the heroine dragging the insect emperor to the black hole, I was brought to tears and my heart was shocked. Finally, I hope that the heroine will never reveal her gender, or just retire like this, and will always exist in the dreams of thousands of girls in it, and in my heart. Of course, this is purely personal. Summary: 5 points of praise! ! No rebuttal will be accepted (beep quietly) 😃

A very imaginative and engaging science fiction novel!

I feel that the flashback at the beginning is very well written, and it breaks out of the routines of many enjoyable novels, but at the same time there are some logical problems. After that, the upgrade flow is quite satisfactory. Overall, it is good, but apart from the beginning, there is nothing particularly outstanding.

The writing is great, please cheer for Bo (ง •̀_•́)ง and ask for Bo Wu cp again

Come and sign in, everyone~ Let me see how crazy I am 😂😂

In fact, it doesn't matter whether there is a male protagonist or not. It depends on the plot and the author's writing ability. Otherwise, adding a male protagonist will just be a headache. After all, this is a science fiction category, and it will not stand up if it is written as a sweet novel.

Hahahahaha, now more people like to watch movies without male protagonists than those who like to watch romance movies. So there is no need to worry. ^ω^ I saw the words "no cp". Before my brain could react, my hand clicked to save it. (*＾ワ＾*)

I think it's getting more and more interesting. I have a lot of imagination.

There is no cp party coming to occupy the building, please come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The story is interesting, the pace is tight, and it makes people full of expectations. Big boost for the author!

Why does it feel like the author is more attentive to the portrayal of the supporting characters than the protagonist? Is it a bit overwhelming?

Actually... I've been having a problem. Does the heroine look like that kind of muscular man? He still looks like a muscular but tall and handsome guy. I'm a little confused, because I saw the heroine's muscles mentioned before, so I thought maybe the heroine is a muscular man. (||๐_๐)

I read dozens of chapters in one go. Generally speaking, it is good. A few parts feel that it is not rigorous enough. I feel that the heroine's development path is quite smooth? It seems like a cool article but it doesn't feel satisfying enough. Is the villain's power too mythical?

It's better to leave the longer memories of the characters in the extra chapter. I'll just briefly touch on some of the content, like the content of the letter left by Kiko. . . . .

April ticket! Isn't this too tragic? If you haven't read the book, come and take a look.

... The introduction was written wrong, it was "it"

I finished reading with more than 100 chapters left, and suddenly I thought about it. This book is finished. I wonder if the next book will be a post-apocalyptic novel where a woman disguises herself as a man? It is also without cp😁😁

Finished? Sprinkle flowers, sprinkle flowers😁

The flashback writing method used in this book is a great interstellar novel I hope everyone will continue to read it Support the original version (the author is great)