Quick Wear: Salted Fish, She Won by Lying Down

The language is too wordy and repetitive, and my writing skills need to be improved urgently.

It's so long-winded. I keep saying it over and over again. The last book was like this. I thought this one should be better. Alas.

Author, after all, we readers have at least nine years of compulsory education, right? I still have a little bit of understanding! There's no need to break it apart, crush it into pieces, and talk about it over and over again! Cheluglu talks too much. . .

There are too many third-person perspectives, and there is not much sense of immersion. It feels like writing a running account.

I was in a book shortage period, so I bought it through a three-day free trial using my Reading Voucher. I tried my best to read 50 chapters, but I couldn't stand it anymore. I'm really sorry.

I looked at the comment area and said long-windedly: I don't believe in evil Sure enough. . . People~ still have to listen to advice

This book is so long-winded that I can repeat one sentence three or five times.

Sit on the sofa and the author continues. I hope this one will not be as bad as the last one, or it may be a little more concise.

My writing skills are too poor. Eight out of ten sentences are explanations. I can't describe the character's action trajectory. I'm a complete novice and rely on the author's later explanation. What is this? Reading comprehension for primary school students?

I have never seen such rubbish writing. One sentence can be repeated. The flooding is too serious. The plot doesn't make sense. Expression skills are too poor.

Written by AI, the writing is terrible. Can't stand it.

The selection of materials is good, but the writing style is not very good. There are too many third-party things, the characters are also very thin, the heroine's character is also a bit problematic, a bit condescending. In the second story, the attitude towards Li Siniang who enters the palace is a bit subtle. The heroine's bottom line is lowered again and again, first secretly Help, and then decided not to help because of their greed. Watching Li Siniang sink step by step, to be honest, I think Li Siniang's family has problems, and the heroine also has problems. In this way, the heroine still seems to think that she is a good person, does not harm others, has a bottom line, and is kind to her third wife.

The author has written so many books, but his writing style is still the same as oral narration

The text is too watery and annoying to read! The originally good outline was ruined

After sweeping through the two worlds, I feel that Linlang is a fully equipped version of An Ran, with the boss wearing the reverse and full skills. Both of them are pretty good in terms of material selection. The disadvantage is that Linlang's traces of An Ran are too heavy. His behavior pattern is the same as that of An Ran. His thinking mode is also the same as worrying, and his mode of solving troubles is also Fu and monitoring... This is the biggest bug. I don't know if the author has noticed it (anyway, Kuaiwen persisted for more than 2,000 chapters, so it's not a big deal). The theme of the new article is "Xianyu lies down to win. The first world is a little better, but the second world is Lin Lang's endless worry. In fact, it is designed by Beng Xianyu's character. I think the author can change his thinking. Since it is lying down to win, then the main theme process is not It can be like this: Linlang arrives in the new world, Linlang avenges the original owner, and Linlang is eating, drinking and having fun happily (the process of eating, drinking and having fun is written in a spreadsheet, you can rewrite one in each world, for example, eating, changing the food every day to reincarnate into a human being) A foodie who is sought after by people, he drinks and researches new drinks for himself and then gains both fame and fortune. He plays and plays and becomes an Internet celebrity. He enjoys eating and drinking so much that he eats it himself. He loses his vest and gains a wave of fans.) Then he just doesn't do his job properly. Linlang inexplicably became the winner in life. She was obviously just eating, drinking and having fun, but others had a filter on her. They imagined all kinds of kindness in Linlang, and after careful consideration, they thought that the big boss had deep intentions. She just won the world. Secondly, the writing style is really weak. Try to be as concise as possible when describing the background of the world. Moreover, there is too little time to go to Linlang now, and too much ink is spent on other people. After all, Linlang is the protagonist and not a supporting role. Even if Linlang is just there, it is good to write about how she behaves ❤️

I'm going through the previous book. I still remember the first story about Hua Liubing and the general who couldn't sleep together. It was very well written. Now all the novels are no longer good, even the good ones written before.

The practice of this book is to update two chapters every day, but there were several times when only one chapter was updated that day. The next day I saw that the number of chapters was not right. I actually updated two chapters yesterday, but one chapter was not posted at all. But why didn't the author deal with it and repost it? Which website did the author first publish it on?

1: Che Zulu talks too much 2: Some short stories are too similar to the previous book

The quick version of this book is actually about changing the world to a different world, looking for people to fight with, and not writing about going out to play or seeing the scenery at all. It's all about buying a house, comparing, and running on money.

In this chapter, everyone admires strong men and fast people, so shouldn't everyone envy those with great strength? Why would a child who discovers the talent of strong power be maliciously named Wei Li Nu?

Sure enough, I couldn't hold on anymore. I was still thinking about what to say. In fact, I couldn't stand the third world anymore. In fact, I like every part of this novel. It's just the narrative that I can't stand. It's like talking to myself. It's unnecessary. It can be interspersed occasionally, like the dialogue between the heroine and her parents in the ancient time travel. It would be nice to have more situations... It's a pity. In fact, I think every world is quite good, but there are too many chapters and I really can't stand it 😭

Chapter 1544 Good luck 27 in a row

Chapter 1682 is also missing. I guess it won't be uploaded again. Doesn't the author never read comments? Do you not even check whether the previously uploaded chapters have been removed? And didn't the author's editor tell him that the content had been reviewed?

It's pretty good. I like the author's book very much. I don't find it verbose at all.

I can't do it anymore. The first story is that the rich girl is doing well as a salted fish. She wants to be an anchor. She is so rich and so powerful... Why not be an anchor...

Chapter 127 Business Marriage 3 is missing.