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It's not too bad, but there are a lot of bad sentences, and the comparison of the gap in technological levels is a bit exaggerated.

When I saw Chao Shen, I came in consciously.

The protagonist is mentally immature and makes people look like a fool in the back. Also, Aaron and Aaron are not comfortable to watch. This author is awesome😤

Come and hold your seat first, I'm the first one

It gives me a headache to watch, it's so confusing, what the hell is Aaron, fuck me, are you speaking in the third person?

Aaron Aaron's I really can't stand it anymore. And what is No. 1? Doesn't it even have a name? This book is suitable for reading with eyes closed

If you can't write a book, why bother writing the last paragraph of every chapter? Chapter 2 Let me repeat it again, if you write a book like this, no one will read it on any platform?

Congratulations! The author is great😊But then we have to spend money to buy it! No money😭😭😭

The protagonist's name is Chen Yilong. Don't Aaron Aaron write non-stop. When writing a novel, it is best to use a first name as the main character, so that it reads better.

To be fair, I suspect that you are using the word "A'long" to make up the word count. There is really no need for so many "A'long" words.

This book must have been written by a northerner. After eating the improved version of NZT48, I became so popular in the second grade.

What is the last name of the main character Aaron-Aniu-Ale-Ali?

I think you are going to finish and write that the country is not afraid of mythical beasts now that it is so strict.

After reading the beginning, the realistic description really persuaded me to give up, and I immediately lost interest in the rest of the story.

Try to finish 10 chapters of full-time, Super God, hurry up, and then go to Marvel in the middle. Stellar energy drives Lieyang and it is impossible to agree to teach the protagonist, so go to Marvel to get some energy to upgrade the divine body. If it is safe, it is actually not bad. Anyway, Rose knows the micro-wormhole transport technology. When the time comes, get some dark iron daggers (dark silver weapons are better). Marvel is basically invincible. , Just calculate it directly in the opponent's body. The brain calculation is basically cool with a dagger. Hulk is actually better at calculation. A mutant that can be created by pre-nuclear civilization will be directly sent to the surface of the star and basically evaporated. The same goes for Thor. As for magic, Doctor Strange has already explained that it is dark energy drive technology, but it is very rough and weird. The time stone shouldn't affect the protagonist. The protagonist is not from his universe. There is only the present, no past and future. When I think of this, I especially like Queen Keisha's words (Give me a minute to interpret this planet) and it explodes instantly!

Aaron, Aaron's, the more I read, the more upset I became, and I couldn't get through even one chapter.

To be honest, the early reading was a bit confusing, and I was inexplicably annoyed and gave up the book.

I'm neither big nor fat, so I can't play the leading role.

Nowadays, I rarely write about the super world and it is so long. Usually when I encounter this situation, I just jump over and start directly from the full-time master. I see that the first two worlds are originally worlds. You see! It's just that it was poorly written. It was poorly written before. Now it's hard to calm down and watch it. When I see these two, I have instinctive emotions and conflicts.

At the beginning of each chapter there is a paragraph from the previous chapter, which makes me a little irritated. . . If this book wasn't what I liked, I would have given up on it. Can you change it? Otherwise, it will be easy to persuade people to leave.

Let me be resurrected with full health and mana.

Why didn't you change the author's protagonist's name if you said it would be changed? If it can't be changed in the front, why can't it be changed in the back?