A Grand Adventure Through the Martial Arts Worlds

Well, everyone, tell me about the world you want to see. I'll suppress the protagonist's strength and take my time.

This book is suitable for newbies. A bookworm like me who is more than ten years old can't stand it. I feel that the protagonist is just a hammer and a hammer. At least there must be a main thread to connect the protagonist's things in the world. Don't be so messy when reading. Also, if you write about a girl, you have to stop it. If you want to enter a harem, you should not have girl plots. Well, in fact, it is hard to agree with everyone. For example, newbies like single heroines or no heroines, old bookworms like harems, newbies like heroes of pleasure and revenge, old bookworms like scheming, newbies like to fight monsters and upgrades, old bookworms like daily life...

If the author wants to write poems in the book, you can come to me. I don't have much time or thought to delve deeply into my feelings because I am working, so I almost have no inspiration to write poems now. I can help the author write poems, and I can practice my skills at the same time.

It's not like the river flows into the sea, I eat my mobile phone

As a woman, Jiang Mei actually admires three wives and four concubines. I admire her!

In fact, I was a little disappointed when I first read this book, because Jiang Mei clearly said that she wanted to write science fiction, and I was fully looking forward to reading a different science fiction novel. However, it is still martial arts. Not counting "Supreme", this is the third one, and it still has the same routine - traveling through different worlds. But after reading it, I still accepted it to a certain extent - after all, it has been written that I have to accept it even if I don't accept it (just kidding). This book is somewhat out of the mold of the previous two books: Yang Yi has been pushing all the way and having fun, and is basically invincible no matter which small world he goes to (although Ling Donglai is powerful, he ends hastily at a glance); Li Xiake has some setbacks and struggles, but he is still reckless and happy most of the time, and for some reason, he always feels that he does not have the same sense of fun as the Third Prince; Not to mention Yang Xian, he is almost invincible after he leaves the mountain (seems to be only twelve years old). Can you believe it? Now that Yang Xingzhou is here, there is finally a difference. Although we can still see the shadows of the "predecessors" who are nosy, love to fight against injustice, and are generous and heroic, his background determines that he cannot be reckless all the way. So he will be cowardly when he should be cowardly, and he will be crazy when he should be crazy. In order to defeat the opponent, he would spit, sprinkle lime, poison, and sneak attacks... He could use any despicable means. He is not afraid of losing face, he can use his brains, and he will kill whoever he wants when he gets the chance, regardless of whether you die in peace and in peace. He is cunning and can pretend to be a woman in order to kill enemies, and he can make up stories in order to learn skills. But he is not annoying because he has a bottom line - and he is very tall (much taller than Lord Wei). He can use tricks but will not use unscrupulous means. He acts like a villain, but he can be considered a gentleman. This is a very interesting character. I hope Jiang Mei can maintain this characteristic and not write it off. If the protagonists in your novels all follow the same mold, it will make people aesthetically tired and they will fall into a rut and be unable to extricate themselves.

Seeing the clouds and rain, I lost my taste instantly. Come on, although the yellow martial arts involves the spiritual level, in fact, the destructive power is just that, and it is definitely not considered a high level of martial arts. The protagonist's hundreds of years of skill was crushed by Pang Ban? Basic personal attribute: Body, Qi and Shen. Even if the mental strength is not as good as Pang Ban, there is no need to pass both physical and Qi?

I don't like this book. The author has too many personal things. I see that he wants to kill Ling Tuisi and degrade Ding Dian into a bad guy. He stands on a moral high ground and talks about how chic, heroic and righteous he is. At the end of the day, it's about killing people and grabbing treasures. In fact, when you enter the martial arts world, it is normal to fight and kill. If you don't kill, you will be killed. If you can't keep the treasure, you will be killed. But it's meaningless for you to belittle Ding Dian. What's the reason? "I don't think he looks like a hero. He is not a good person. Just kill him?" I vomited, really. Ding Dian never thought about being a hero. He was miserable enough. He was hunted down, fell in love with a woman he shouldn't love, imprisoned himself in a cell, and hid his secret. He was worthy of others. I don't like it, and I don't like it. I don't agree with the author's "Xia", the above.

My monthly ticket and recommended ticket are given to me. Can I get a boost?

I've finally caught up with the progress, and frankly speaking, the last few chapters haven't been a problem. Personally, I think there are two problems. One is the writing style. The writing of "Traveling Gold" is like a golden book, the writing of "Traveling Ancient Dragon" is like ancient dragon, and the writing of "Traveling Huang Yi" is like Huang Yi recently. This is an advantage in the early stages, but it becomes problematic if you look at it too much. Each writing method has a specific audience. Jin Yong is thick and steady, but the details are not enough, and it is a bit chatty for those who don't like it; Gu Long's philosophy is too strong, and it can't help but appear neurotic to those who don't like it; Huang Yiwang's writing style is obvious. If you exclude the plot and only look at the style, Huang Yi first and then Jin Gu are more eye-catching, while Huang Yi later is closer to water injection. The second is the overall setting. The protagonist has not found his own path yet. In the golden book, he could force himself to spend time to become a master; in the ancient book of heavy meaning, insufficient qualifications are not enough, failure to practice means failure to practice, and incomprehension means failure to understand. It is more credible to say that he can practice to the level of Ah Fei, Fu Hongxue, Jing Wuming, but it is a bit far-fetched to practice to the level of Shen Lang and Wang Lianhua; and in Huang Yi, his combat power is close to collapse. Huang Yi has a saying of "spiritual cultivation". In many cases, the momentum bonus is very sufficient, which is a must for masters. If the spirit declines, no one may be able to beat him. Most of the protagonists have the same mental state as Yan Fei. Not to mention Pang Ban, I don't believe that he can fight Li Ruohai and survive. If you want to insist that Yang Xingzhou can crush Pang Banlang and Fanyun Liruohai who have martial arts without martial arts, there must be a reasonable logic (exquisite moves, strong internal power, weakened by poison, mental frustration, damaged soul, high level of the time traveler, etc.). Personally, I feel that there is something lacking in the setting of the combat power system, which has led to the current bottleneck. If this problem is not solved, the combat power of the next small world will directly collapse.