The Legend of Qin: The Daoist Sect's Grand-uncle Master

The early writing was so embarrassing. Why do such powerful people as Ying Zheng and Han Fei ask the protagonist for advice? I'm not telling you, I was so angry when Ying Zheng lowered himself and said that Taoism is the most important thing. Can the eldest brother stop being so childish? How can the character and IQ of an emperor through the ages be such a child's play? The various characters in the book have extremely low IQs, as if only the protagonist's opinion is what they need. They have no sense of autonomy at all. The more they think about it, the more they get angry and angry, and they give up. (I wonder if the author has read Youyou Da Qin? The characters and IQs of the characters in Qin Shi Mingyue are almost consistent with those in the original work. Neither the good guys nor the villains have lost their IQs, and their IQs are online throughout the whole process.)

Cultivation qualifications are very important, but the most important thing is understanding. In the Qin Dynasty, Mingyue Taoist followed Xiaomeng. The protagonist's character was too bad. Also, the author is a Taoist, not Taoist. Taoist practice is possible by relying on spiritual roots, but it is cultivation of immortality. Taoism thinks too much. Taoism talks about maintaining health and enlightening Tao, relying on understanding and fate.

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The neighbor next door picked up a sword to kill people at the age of four, went to the battlefield at the age of seven, commanded tens of thousands of troops at the age of ten, and became a king at the age of 12. When she was 12 years old, Xue Nu was 5 years old. She bought her directly to raise her Marrying a wife and marrying Nongyu, can you believe it

After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't stand it when it came to saving people. Give the life-saving elixir to the groom. Taoism does not mean that it is a waste of money. Those who can save lives in one breath must be rare . The hook of one elixir is obtained by Taoism in exchange for hundreds of lives and deaths, so just give it casually? Holy Mother, the IQ of pig's feet is not online, the supporting characters have no vitality and personality, the whole text is inconsistent and extremely poisonous, it's a pity the subject matter

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The plot after the protagonist left Tianzong was very strange and awkward. I read it slowly in the first few chapters. After Ying Zheng left, I started to pick up on it. In the end, I finished 30 chapters and finished it in 3 minutes. I always feel that the protagonist has been on the verge of obscurity in the early stage, useless. He neither knows how to use his own strength to do something, but also knows how to use his own power to do something, which makes his sense of leisure useless. As a result, Tian Heng died and Wuming died. In the later stage, all the powerful teammates died, and the burden became even greater. I led two pits by myself and was blocked by a trap. This plot design is designed. No wonder the author complains about poor performance all day long. Many people say that this is the reason why the plot is slow. If the plot is not smooth, of course it feels slow. For example, although the plot of "Lord of the Mysteries" progresses slowly, the plot is smooth and readers are also very comfortable watching it. So the author needs to improve the rationality and fluency of the plot, and the protagonist's IQ must also be improved.

After reading twenty chapters, I gave up decisively. This kind of plot of a loser pretending to be a slap in the face also appeared. Why not write urban novels and pay homage to my uncle? I have set it up but I can't accept being called that, poisonous! What else is there about Ning'er? Isn't it the original novel? I have to waste my time writing about a lolita. The pre-Qin schools of thought are all about dignity and status. Big brothers have come out. It's really disgusting to write about lolita. When writing about the Qin Dynasty, I didn't have a strong character to write an egg. 🙂 If you like to show off and slap people in the face, go write urban short stories.

I just read Chapter 30. The writing is really watery. The title of the novel is Taoist Master. He didn't show his composure when he should have, he didn't save people when he should, he just watched from the side, and he started to feel sorry for others when they died. . It's like I feel uncomfortable when writing online articles should be fun. I just want to maintain the original plot, spend a lot of time writing a supporting character, and then watch the supporting character die. . The author also asked why your grades have been poor recently and why you have no points. Some people will definitely say that I am a trainee and am not qualified to criticize. Sorry, I have only read Chapter 30 and I can't stand it anymore. Don't tell me that I will write something good later.