Douluo Dalu: God-Tier Choices

Did the author read the original novel? The character awakens at age 6, and at age 12 they must go to Shrek Academy.

Haven't you read the original author's work? Don't you know that the awakening of a martial spirit occurs at age six?

Um, author, "drastic alteration" doesn't mean random changes, especially since your book's title clearly uses "Douluo Continent" as a gimmick to attract readers who like it. However, you've completely distorted "Douluo Continent" beyond recognition. It's not that you can't change it, but you need to change it in a way that readers can accept.

Good heavens, author, there's nothing wrong with you writing wish-fulfillment stories, and there's nothing wrong with whatever you write. But when did Douluo Continent change its name to Martial Soul Continent? When writing fanfiction, you should at least understand these basics, right? If you can't remember, can't you just look at the original work?

To find Shennong to test the poison? Sorry, you may have miscalculated; Shennong is already dead. I tore open the rift leading to the underworld and found the deceased Shennong. His eyes were bloodshot and he was foaming at the mouth. Even the glass stomach he used to test for poison had been completely corroded. When he saw me, he said tremblingly, "What the hell is this crap?"

He's already died from the poison. Whether it's a "cool" or not, I don't know, but this book is absolutely incredibly poisonous. Even with my superhuman constitution, I couldn't withstand it.

... So toxic! Xiao Wu calls him "brother" in one chapter, and it's got face-slapping and showing off all in one. The three choices are like forcing you to do the best. The supporting characters are all headless knights. It's unbelievable! It feels like I've been thrown back to where I started ten years ago.

If you were to write Douluo Continent using the style of Battle Through the Heavens, the first chapter would simply show that even though he's the clan leader's son, he's still a good-for-nothing, supposedly delicate and weak, so his talent must be terrible. And all the extras on the street would have a look of utter disdain...

I'll take all the virgins! Don't leave a single one behind! Especially Zhu Zhuqing, I like that mature, sophisticated type.

This book should be renamed "Wall-Mounted Choices".