Douluo Dalu: God-Tier Choices

Has the author read the original work? The martial soul awakens at the age of 6 and goes to Shrek Academy at the age of 12.

Never read the original author? Don't you know that the martial soul awakens at the age of six?

Well, author, magic modification is not random modification, especially the title of your book is obviously based on Douluo Dalu as a gimmick to attract people who like Douluo Dalu. However, you have completely changed Douluo Dalu beyond recognition. It's not that you can't change it, but you have to write it in a way that readers can accept. Change the method, For example, in the second chapter, you wrote: There are nine states in the world where Yuchen is located. You can also write it like this. It will make people feel that Tang San wrote it wrong. To be honest, everyone knows that the world of Douluo Continent is not just those continents, but the gods rule countless planes. , And not just this Kyushu? Even if you want to write like this, you have to let the protagonist explore it by himself, let the protagonist think in a way of "Oh, it turns out that this world is very different from the Douluo world that he knew in his previous life. Nine continents have been discovered here, and there are three empires here. This is the awakening at the age of twelve. Maybe the author of the novel in the previous life accidentally received part of the information about the world and added his own ideas to write it. Of course it will not be completely correct. "I wrote it in a similar way, so I believe everyone can accept it. But if you write it directly in a set way, you may accept incompetence.

Wardian, the author, you are right to write cool articles, and you are right to write anything. But when did Douluo Continent change its name to Wuhun Continent? When writing a fanfic, you should at least understand the basics of the basics. If you can't remember, just take a look at the original work?

Ask Shennong to test the poison? Sorry, you may have miscalculated. Shennong is already dead. I tore open the crack leading to the netherworld and found the deceased Shennong. His eyes were bleeding and his mouth was foaming. Even the glass stomach he used to test the poison had been corroded. After seeing me, he tremblingly said: "What kind of thing is written on this horse?"

He has already died from the poison. I don't know whether it is a good or bad article. But this book is absolutely extremely poisonous. Even with my Shennong physique, I can't bear it.

. . . . It's so poisonous, Xiao Wu calls him brother in the first chapter, slaps you in the face and pretends to be the best. The three choices are like forcing you to be the best. The supporting characters are all headless horsemen. It's as if you have returned to the starting point ten years ago overnight. The most poisonous thing is that the protagonist really only knows how to pretend, and he completely chooses puppets. You can tell what to write just by looking at the title. This guy is so terrifying, he is actually a mutated martial spirit! ! ! , Long Wuhun learns the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms haha

Using the writing style of Dou Po Cang Qiong to write Douluo Dalu, what we see in the first chapter is what about the son of the patriarch, he is not a waste, he is delicate and frail, so his talent should be very poor. The sidekicks on the roadside all have contemptuous faces... This is a popular cool novel, in which the protagonist slaps someone in the face forcefully. First, there are various routines to suppress him (he is a waste, everyone has it written all over his face that the protagonist is a waste), and then the protagonist slaps him in the face. Twelve-year-old martial arts awakening is divided into levels, first level, second level, third level and fourth level. In the first chapter, a fourth-level genius appeared. It should be Xiao Ning of the Xiao family who should be defeated. Say all kinds of words to the protagonist that you are a waste, why are you a waste? 🤔, then the protagonist awakens the Qinglong martial spirit and slaps him in the face

Take all the girls~ Don't leave any of them~ Especially Zhu Zhuqing, I like this kind of royal sister style.

This book should be renamed Wall-hanging Selection