Global Humanoid Elves

The setting is a good setting, but the plot is really retarded. The dragon attribute is unique to Chinese people, and it's not like the one that fills the streets. It's impossible for the embassy to ignore this alone. Plus the country is rich and powerful. Is it difficult to believe that the country is so? Are you thinking too stingy about the country? I also like the second dimension, but I really can't accept a protagonist who can't even believe in his own country and instead goes crazy to lick other countries.

It's so weird. It's a mixture of multiple systems, and it feels like there's all kinds of drama, and maybe there's something wrong with Pig's Feet's brain. All in all, I feel like this novel is very awkward to read.

The idea of ​​the book is good, but it has little to do with Pokémon. It would make sense if it were replaced by the story of the awakening of supernatural powers.

I feel very creative. If there are different worlds, the power of world rules can limit each world and create different stories.

Wow, the author is so creative, 🤓 let's give it a call

Jiangjiang bubbles again, gurgling

Earth? Cliff? Can't fly😁

It's beautiful, the author is very imaginative and has novel ideas

The protagonist was fucked but did not take revenge. After seeing the content behind this, I was not in the mood to continue reading. The protagonists who cannot avenge themselves are all happy.

There are too many elements, no explanation, and it's confusing to read.

Could it be that the incarnation of the protagonist in the introduction is Groudon (Gulaton) who has not returned home yet and has not read the book yet?

Congratulations, I have been chasing this book all the way back in the early days. To be honest, there were many people who criticized it and suggested it, but for me, it is enough that I like it. So, I hope the author will be clear-minded and not be induced by others. Suggestions can be adopted and absorbed, and discussions are also normal exchanges. As for trolls, just block them. Please remember that there is a group of people like us who silently support us.

1. It's about evolution. Be good at asking questions. Evolution is the highlight and needs to be well set. Most elves evolve when they reach a certain level. What about the real world? Evolution is the sublimation of life. In the anime, the change of form and the maturity of the mind are completed all at once, but in the real world, I do not recommend simple evolution. I think in reality we should not allow everyone to evolve universally. How can the leap of life be so simple? The mysterious point is that when the mind and body skills are highly powerful, they will leap forward. The winner will evolve, and the loser will fail or even die. In my personal opinion, Elf Soul is like a inheritance, so it can also be related during evolution. Thinking about this makes me feel inexplicably, for example, something that was very expensive before evolution but very powerful after evolution. After decades of training, just for that one evolution, the carp jumped over the dragon's gate and became an extraordinary person.

Brothers, what is your natal spirit?

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In the real world, the performance of attributes cannot be as clear as in the game. One is one, and two is two. The attributes are not so monotonous. In the previous article, I also used Sister Pao as an example. Electricity generates magnetism, and metals are manipulated by converting electrical properties into magnetism. Magneto can also imitate it, right? Superpowers are also very buggy in reality. Under the simplest and crudest way of understanding hypnosis, there are also telekinesis and the like, and you can also control objects to attack. And flying is also very strong in reality. If nothing else, I will ask you how infantry can defeat the air force. In the game, I think the real explanation for being immune to the ground is that it cannot defeat it. That's all I can think of at the moment, I'll think about the rest, and you can also use your imagination

The writing is quite innovative, but it is very depressing to watch. First of all, this is an era of extraordinary power. Everyone yearns for awakening, but resists and fears those who awaken. Well, how can I put it? Most of the author's animalistic characteristics are really speechless. It is better to change it to a combat display. Secondly, extraordinary people have extraordinary power and do not deserve the corresponding status. Various uses are prohibited, even if Good intentions, but the most deceptive thing is that the protagonist is fooled into acting like a fool. The purpose of the protagonist is to use the situation to obtain scarce resources. Is becoming a hero the purpose? Power belongs to oneself, and wealth and power come naturally. A Chinese is doing things to protect other countries, sacrificing himself for others. Is he still a person who has experienced taking the blame? In the end, the emotional line is really a bit inexplicable.

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After reading twenty chapters, I found that the worldview was poorly shaped, and the poisonous point is that it makes people uncomfortable. There is a sense of deliberately creating conflicts to make readers feel frustrated and want to create more excitement, but the writing is not enough and the feeling is not satisfying. I jumped around and looked at some more, and it was very confusing. . When his 731 College insulted China again, he immediately persuaded him to quit when he saw the papers with his English. He left a note to warn brothers like me not to waste time.

Even if the dragon type ice is weak, it does not mean that the air conditioner cannot be blown. Under normal circumstances, ice will appear at 0℃ and below. Whose air conditioner can make the room temperature reach that level? When people feel cold when going from 30℃ outdoors to 20℃ indoors, it is just because the heat loss rate increases and the pores shrink urgently to reduce heat dissipation. It is not really cold. I'm afraid the air conditioner is not useless. If you try to use it, get some fire extinguishers and you might end up on your knees.

Why the author is not popular? It's very simple. You can wear what you want. He even wore it in Japan and is still Chinese. It's so poisonous that most people ran away after seeing this.

It's too messy. It's okay to write a comprehensive comic, but there are too many things added, and the writing is very messy. Different people have their own poisonous weeds and fairy grasses, but you add them all in, which makes me feel like the fairy grass is mixed with Yoneda Kyou. To be honest, when I read the introduction, I basically felt that this book would be very exciting, but after reading the 50th chapter, I felt that there were too many poisonous points, and the author has not yet written the content that really attracted me to read this book.

To be honest, I read a lot of PM fanfics, and I can't say that your writing is the best, but I think your books are at least very comfortable to read and don't make people feel like they are insulting their IQ. There are fewer and fewer books to read, so keep up the good work 😁😁

To be fair, if there were no cheats in this book, the plug-ins would be just Rebirth and Soul of the Yuanlu Shark. It would be better if they were all original. I have never watched this anime, and I am confused. Sometimes it is inexplicable.

After reading Chapter 11, I have roughly read Chapter 20. It would be okay if this book was set in China, but if you were to read it in Japan, the world setting would be flawed. It feels like it is not fun at first, but you have to slowly improve your strength. I can't stand this kind of writing, and I don't like the character of the protagonist, who is withdrawn, but not vicious at all. You should think of writing Japanese anime. This is the starting point. This is China, not the kind of Japanese anime where the protagonist is frustrated and then grows up. This theme is novel, but the world setting and plot are too poor. If it were me, I would write the protagonist with a fierce personality, a bit like a novice novel. The protagonist always grows up slowly, and this character needs to be cultivated slowly. It is too slow, and it is not fun at all. For someone like me who writes overly and cheerfully, I can't stand the fact that the protagonist has to be frustrated on the one hand, and the protagonist has to grow up slowly on the other. I don't like this kind of writing the most.

1. Many people think this is a useless style. I don't know why everyone thinks so. It's just that the protagonist cannot be awakened at the beginning and then the protagonist's golden finger is revealed. In less than ten chapters, everyone knows that the protagonist has awakened the dragon attribute. Does this make it a useless style? I haven't seen the most classic thing about waste material flow, pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. The protagonist doesn't hide himself and beg to be stepped on. Just because everyone thinks it is a waste material flow from the beginning, it is a bit funny. 2. Many people think that the mayor or something at the beginning passed the blame to the protagonist, and that the protagonist was too useless for not resisting. I kind of want to laugh. You want a newly awakened person with no background to resist the mayor. Tell me how to resist. Are you stubborn? This is not Long Aotian. As soon as his body shook, others fell down and knelt down. If the author wrote like this, he would have no IQ. Some people say that the mayor is poisonous by passing the blame to the protagonist. Let me ask you, when you are about to be dismissed from office and even go to jail, a protagonist appears in front of you He is not a native of the country, has no background, awakens on his own, and his parents should be mysteriously missing, and why? It happens to be involved in this incident. Tell me, if you don't take the blame, who will take the blame? If you don't mention who will die for me if I die, right? Moreover, the Tianma family can also reach a tacit agreement with me to remain silent. Then I just need to cut the mess with a quick knife and be perfectly handsome. You are a little elementary school student and a foreign orphan. How can you fight with me? 3. Some people say that the protagonist should hate Wu Ming. First of all, this is a cute girl, and he has been helping you get rid of the crime and giving you training resources. Although you were in a little danger because of his mistake, you got through it safely. And there is also the mayor for comparison. Let me ask you, any normal person with a slight IQ should know whether Wu Ming is good or not. 4. The emotional scene is indeed a bit weak, but it has little impact, because the emotional line between Kuroyukihime and the pig head in the original work is very sudden, so it is acceptable to switch to the protagonist so quickly, and there is not much to say. Why I post this book review is because I hope new readers will not be discouraged by irresponsible book reviews, so I post this book review for everyone to take a look.

I can finally leave a comment. I want to ask how to put skills on the big milk tank.

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This is the most immersive elf fanfic I have ever seen! Because I have no interest in Pokémon! I've read several well-reviewed elf fanfics but I still can't find a sense of immersion! I've never played Pokemon! Bare knowledge from just watching a few theatrical versions! The boss in the chapter review can't even get a word in! The ability setting similar to that of a parasitic beast is quite interesting. The fighting scenes are also above par! The protagonist's worldview is neither world-weary nor cynical, and is a very realistic character. The progress of the plot is still very stable! A combination of multiple worlds! It's not an exaggeration to say it's a comic book world! According to my understanding, the ones that have appeared so far include "Sword Art Online", "Iron Castle", "Hero Academia + One Punch", and "Pokémon", the source of superpowers in the main world view It can be said that so many worlds are blended together without giving people a very abrupt feeling. All I can say is it's really great! Just look at the 200,000 words in the early stage and it's not too much to give him some food! It's still the reveal stage of the world line! Looking forward to the author's follow-up stories! I am still very optimistic about this book! ps: Because I have read several Pokémon fanfics! Lack of knowledge! And I'm not very interested in trainers. I haven't played the game either! Well! What I mean by this is that no one should tear me apart! ! As a newbie (///▽///)! ! ! I hope everyone will take care of me! Hey! Bye (*≧ω≦)

The author, I would like to ask if a girl awakens to a big milk tank or a lucky egg! How did she milk the cows and lay the eggs? 😰😰😰