Marrying the Villain System

I really don't like the heroine, she's so pretentious and rude, I wanted to pursue it, but after watching a few pictures, I really can't stand it. She has no IQ at all, and she's holding her back. He was almost discovered, and he lost his temper after being saved by others. I really don't understand. I posted this comment for the first time because of the good subject matter and the hero, but the heroine set up to destroy it. I feel bad.

The setting of this book is good. Read a few chapters. I can't stand the heroine's character. Probably because he is involved in the entertainment industry. He is 28 years old, and he pouts and tuts at the male protagonist, who is several years younger than him and has a really bad temper. How much older is the male protagonist's mother than the female protagonist? Even if you don't respect the old and love the young. The hero's mother cares about you. When asked what's wrong, the heroine replied like this: I'm injured and can't see. And eye rolls and stuff. Well. There was originally a shortage of books. I want to pursue it. But I really don't like the heroine's character. Besides. Any mother would be furious if she saw a woman sleeping in her underage son's bed. What did the heroine do?

The heroine was not written well. . . . Just don't want the heroine in the beginning

I really don't like the heroine's previous character at all, it feels a bit pretentious, and a person who was in the entertainment industry in her previous life should not have the heroine's personality, so I hope the author will try his best to write some plots to let the heroine adjust her personality (this is just my mind, if the author feels bad, the author can omit it)

Originally, it seemed that the heroine was carefree and wanton, and she relied on her golden finger to cultivate immortality. It was quite good, but it turned out that golden finger was not unique, so forget it. There were also ex-boyfriends and ex-best friends, and she became more and more suave. It had a proper sense of shojo comics.

Number of words read: 10w+ Initial rating: 82 (super awesome and beautiful!) 🦉 Quail's words: This is the first time in a long time that I have read more than 40 chapters in one go without writing a single word. I read it again today before writing this book review. The beauty of this book is more than 82 points, but as a refreshing/sweet article, this is almost the highest score I can give. I really don't understand why the score of this book is like this... As a mature, self-contained and smooth novel, I believe the author will have his own ideas and persistence. As a reviewer, I am really afraid that my comments will affect the author's unique imagination and style. The following comments are based on the fact that all writing methods, regardless of right or wrong, have good and bad aspects, and I analyze them from the bad aspects. I hope the author will stick to his own attitude in the face of my comments ~ Come on💪 🦉Overall comment: I can do system tasks instead of cultivating immortals! 🦉Plot summary: Lu Qihuai is a big star, who accidentally traveled to a world of immortals and possessed the system; accidentally picked up a dark horse protagonist, and set a task to help the protagonist become a martial arts master and marry the villain. With the help of Lu Qihuai, the protagonist rose to five levels in a month, slapped the bad guy in the face, and successfully joined the Wutian Sect. 🦉Power system: I have always felt that the power system is a very important thing for immortality novels. If there is a bug in it, it will make people feel ridiculous. The author's power system is not very rigorous, which is reflected in two aspects: 1. The way the characters achieve breakthroughs is relatively vague. Whether it is the protagonist reshaping his spiritual roots, breaking through the fourth level, or rising to the seventh level bit by bit, the process seems too random. In comparison, the heroine's upgrade seems to be traceable and much more reasonable. 2. Sense of balance. What I'm not used to is that the power system in the early stage of a game like Battle Through the Sky seems to be very clear. The further you go, the more you feel that the people you meet in the early stage are incompetent and novices are fighting each other. There is a hint of this trend in this article, so the author should be cautious. I have read an article before that said that the power of immortals is limited, and in the end they will only become immortals if they reach the sky. However, the power of fantasy can be infinite, but the balance between power and world view must be grasped in the process. The author's ultimate goal is to become a martial arts master, and he must also pay attention to the power system not to collapse. Also, isn't Lu Qihuai's level 8 supposed to be equivalent to the eighth level? Why is he so powerful after becoming an alchemist? Also, shouldn't alchemy masters be able to level up? Why do you feel like Lu Qihuai will directly gain full-level status? ? And then he said he was very powerful but couldn't transform into a big fire sparrow? For a while, there were a lot of sect disciples building foundations, and for a while, the two elders seemed to be very powerful in building foundations, which was a bit blurry. 3. Differences between levels. In the early stage, the male protagonist cannot beat level 2 at level 4, but in the later stage, level 7 can beat level 9. This difference is actually unreasonable. After all, cultivating immortals and upgrading becomes more difficult the further you go. 🦉Highlights: 1. Vivid system. Because the author has not read much about the system, I think this system is quite cute, at least much cuter than Siri. 2. The writing and plot settings are very smooth. The author put a lot of thought (I think, maybe not) into making every small incident naturally connected, allowing the reader to read many, many chapters without even realizing it. 3. Interesting little details and wonderful ideas. The author's description of the profession (alchemist), the transformation of the alchemist, hair dyeing, the little golden bird, etc. Are all very cute and delicate, and Mu Tianling is also very cute. The fan dance and the snake gloves are quite interesting (maybe it's because I haven't seen the world before) 4. Very smooth and post-modern interaction. The heroine is a star who has no airs and is rather funny, a bit like Zhang Tianai in "The Princess's Promotion". Whether it is her interaction with the system or with other people, she is full of modern joy and rationality. Others also have the rationality of the ancients. This is really one of the rare and logical works I have seen recently. 5. It's cool and dense. Just like playing online games yourself, the upgrade tasks for both the male and female protagonists are very clear, and the feedback is quick and intensive. In addition, the character interaction is very naughty and looks very enjoyable. And there seems to be signs of a sweet love between the heroine and the hero! 🦉Improvement suggestions: 1 . Carefully consider the power system and world structure to avoid bug crashes. 2. Try to let the supporting characters burst out with vitality instead of becoming cannon fodder. 3. Try to delay gratification and write a more enjoyable plot.

It feels like the heroine talks, leans in, or "has nothing to do with me." It doesn't matter when you don't pay attention, but it gives you a headache once you pay attention.

The big book is very good. I will save it. Come on! By the way, I would like to recommend my work "Zhu Xian Liu"!

A eunuch. . 😅

I actually don't think there is any author who doesn't like the characters he writes, because everyone has a different opinion on everything, so I think reading books can make more people like the characters in the books.