I Really Am a Winner in Life

I feel that if you look at the divorce process from another perspective, you will have a completely different view. The male protagonist is a shame and a great humiliation, while the female protagonist is escaping from the fire pit. 😥

Tell the truth! Author, what do you want to write about? This article is like a hodgepodge, which made me dizzy when I read it. When I read the introduction, I thought this article should be quite enjoyable. However, the content is like a wild horse running wild and I can't stop it. And there are so many jokes in each chapter that are so entertaining! It feels like this whole article has no structure, it's all scattered, as if it's osteoporosis!

I have read too many formulaic books, so it would be interesting to read a book that has always been a favorite. It's just that I don't know if I don't understand the world building or something, but it always feels so confusing. Is the heroine a kind person who has always been in this world? Did the second sister come from another world? The people above know that Third Sister was reborn, so how did she get reborn? Obviously the entire world needs to go backwards in time to be reborn, right? That Si You is an assistant of Tiandao, so why is he still within the rules of this world? Or someone from one of the major forces? He knows that the heroine has lived hundreds of lives, but he can still treat her like a child who doesn't understand anything? I only read a little bit, and there are quite a lot of logical bugs to be honest. I don't know if the author can fix them. For me, it's just fun and lively to watch, and I can't watch it with serious reasoning.

The era of Granny Shen [the first war between immortals and demons, natural disasters, Granny Shen became famous, and Shen Siyou became famous] → Granny Shen obtained godhood, discovered other planes, and the temple was established. Her main responsibility was to inspect the order and balance of all walks of life → Granny Shen met Saha and discovered the existence of the world from her mouth. The first life of Yunyao: Granny Shen discovered that Yunyao was interested in Yunyao and planned to train Yunyao → The second generation of Yaoyao: Granny Shen accepted Yaoyao as a disciple in advance to train Yaoyao, and Yaoyao was raised crooked and was bewitched by Saha to arrange the destruction of the world → Granny Shen found out that Yaoyao was deprived of her cultivation and her soul was scattered and thrown into reincarnation → Good people in all generations: Accumulate merit to avoid Zhu Yunyao being chopped into ashes because of the heavy murders committed by Yaoyao → Granny Shen found that the original second sister could not suppress the scene, so the other world chose Zhu Yunshi to exchange souls with the original second sister, and gave the third sister precognitive dreams. The original second sister's soul entered other worlds and reincarnated → Zhu Yunyao was born, and the plot officially began. 🔨 Because some things in the subsequent plot always have little cuties raising questions (suspected to be bugs/logical errors), so I have sorted out part of the timeline. The timeline of subsequent plots is in the plot. As for the protagonist group issue. Big brother and fourth sister are all original. The second sister was summoned from another world, and the third sister had a prophetic dream (she thought she was reborn.) The heroine's stage of being a good person for hundreds of generations: there is no modern world, mainly various ancient worlds, why do she die miserably → Because the sins she committed in her previous life will be chopped into pieces. About Shen Siyou: Mobile golden finger summoned beast. About the Temple: The Temple is rounded off to the same existence as the Customs. As to why the protagonists' parents died: because their parents want to be golden partners in other worlds.

I can't quite get the names and people of the protagonist right 😵. Also, I think the character of the heroine is incompatible with her IQ. After all, she is a good person and not a child. It's okay for her to be a child now, but she still needs to change it when she grows up. The heroine is a bit **

How should I put it, this should be the reason for the author's weak narrative ability. In short, I still don't know who the name is, how the fight happened, who started the fight, and the reason for the fight. This feeling of confusion is really uncomfortable!

The beginning is a bit too dark. God is so sorry to the Pig's Foot family. There are bad people all over the world, but the Pig's Foot family is the good guy. The whole world feels sorry for the pig's feet family! ! ! Ahhhhh I can't stand it anymore😱The article has been abandoned

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What a mess

To be honest, this subject matter is very imaginative, but there are many places that I am confused about. It is the kind of small plots and details that are innocuous when viewed alone, but taken together, it is a bit... For example, the author always adds various real-world jokes in the article. It is easy to do it once in a while, but it becomes really annoying when it is done more often. It's a bit annoying and very dramatic, especially when there is a square formation in the martial arts competition (probably called this) and it is written that the beast master commanded his spirit beast to jump to the Pure Land of Paradise, wdm, this is actually a very small point, but when I saw it, I really had a question mark on my face, and then there was a bet for people in the cultivation world to call daddy if they lost? ? Is this an ancient setting or a modern setting? ? ? ? (There are many points like this) The differences are really small points, but I personally really don't like excessive jokes and using a lot of people and things in the real world to make jokes in novels. It really feels inexplicably like being idle and trying to be clever. Of course, this is a personal highlight and personal preference. As for the plot and writing, I can definitely read it. It can pass the time when I am in a book shortage, but if it is a slightly more demanding and not a book shortage, I may not like it. At least now, it feels a bit "messy" to me, not that the relationship between the characters is messy, but in some settings, such as the heroine herself and the five brothers and sisters. They are all based on the protagonist's script, rebirth, apocalyptic time travel, counterattack, daughter of heaven, etc. At first, I thought this setting and imagination were okay, because I wanted to write that the heroine could rely on her brothers and sisters who had the protagonist's script to "win", and if she could use some skills, Goldfinger would be a relaxing novel that is not abusive But I saw that there is also a book-wearing girl? I was? ? ? ? And looking at the electronic music and other things written about it, I guessed that there is a system. Really, it is too messy. I don't know whether the author wants to write a long story or a short story. Anyway, now that I have read dozens of chapters, there are so many settings, and I feel that the author's writing style is not good enough to arrange all the characters in these settings. It just feels like It doesn't matter if you stuff them all in at once and then say this It's still a bit immature, because I didn't read it later. Maybe it's not impossible that the author's writing will become smoother and more beautiful later on It's just a personal opinion and personal preference. After all, everyone's reading experience is different.