Tailed Beast Sage in the Ninja World

I can't understand the author's desire to be criticized... But this book is still quite good and it suits my taste. Although it's not a big book, I still like the setting. I hope it doesn't become a eunuch... Otherwise it would be a pity. It's rare to find a novel that's even remotely to your liking🌹

This is the first time I give a reward, just to keep you going. At least there are people like me who can do my little bit.

Protagonist: It was clearly agreed that it would be three years, but three years later, another three years, and three years later, another three years, it was almost ten years, my father! If you don't come to pick me up, I'll be the Fourth Raikage. Orochimaru: Can you be nicer to me? Now I am the only one in the Ninja Village who knows your identity. I will delete your information when I go back, and you will be a member of Yunren Village for the rest of your life. I don't need to bother anymore. Protagonist: What do you want me to do? I remind myself every day that I am a Konoha person, do I even think about the Will of Fire when I dream? 😁

The character of the main character is a mess. If I have to describe it, I would be inappropriate as a human being.

Come on, the writing is very good, keep the quality, and be sure to order all of them when you put them on the shelves

Some places are too secondary, and the jokes are too deliberate. In my opinion, it is okay to make jokes, but it must be reasonable and natural. There are ideas for the concept and plot of this book, but the early and recent updates have gone too far. It feels like a child's self-pleasure. Of course, there are also advantages. The plot concept and different fighting methods such as magic and sword skills are relatively new themes. But in the early and mid-term, there were many places where I was diagnosed with secondary cancer. . Too embarrassing. I personally think that the protagonist Bai Si is either like Li Ping'an and Li Diao, rational and calm to the end, without any fancy passion or anything like that. Or just go completely funny and be a comedian to the end. Now, there are four different things.

The start was too bad, the subject matter is good, it's a pity, it's a pity.

The first one to see Orochimaru's son who traveled through time, and the subject matter is novel.

This book is considered my favorite Naruto fanfic. (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ The plot is good, there are no poisonous points, and the writing is very smooth. It will also be a miserable purchase. (Eh~...) But (personally jio's) it's not popular probably because the publicity is not enough. Next door Lan Bai knows, right? The one who writes about dungeon players, it's okay if you don't know it, the main thing is that he pys it so well, he has pygized dozens of books. Tiantian~ You should also learn from others! (Manual dog head) We support you (｡ò ∀ ó｡) I have given you all the votes, and they won't tear them apart like that arrogant netizen! So you don't need to update it anytime soon!                                                                                                                        (눈_눈) Highlight the key points! !

Come on, I hope I can finish it in my lifetime👍👍👍

Why hasn't it been updated yet? I've waited until 11 o'clock.

The author seems to have been pranked. The rating for searching this book on UC is only one point.

I don't know how many times I have regarded Bai Si as myself (◦˙▽˙◦)

The plot is confusing and the logic is speechless. First, let's talk about the protagonist transplanting the first-generation Senjutsu cells. The cells were eroded. The solution of transplanting the tailed beast seems to be funny. The first-generation cells are Yang attributes, so the first-generation Senjutsu cells are considered to be extremely yang. Wouldn't it be over after transplanting the Sharingan? The three magatama cannot be used as a kaleidoscope. Besides, you also specifically wrote about the protagonist's mental power. It's very strong, and also, first with Nagato and the others, then to Konoha, and even to Kumogakure, do you think all ninjas in the world are fools? I have never seen the protagonist as if he is on a sightseeing trip to Hokage. I wish I could directly interact with all the original characters. The protagonist is not a spy, and the Raikage is a fool for doing things here and there? I can't stand it anymore, so I gave up decisively.