
John's Magical Journey
约翰的魔法之旅
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 313k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Modern Magic
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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119Chapters
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Long ReviewOrdinary People's Magical Journey
The introduction of this book feels very strange. Why? Other book introductions are either in the first person or the third person, or at least the second person. But here, it is from the author's personal perspective. Probably, what the author wants to express is that other books describe either geniuses or losers, so the protagonist in the book may also be an ordinary person, so this book was born. The plot begins when the protagonist John bids farewell to his father Edward. It takes five days to finally reach the destination, which is the doorstep of the person the protagonist is seeking refuge with during this trip - Uncle Hermann, his father's good friend. Unfortunately, after knocking on the door, I only saw a pretty good-looking girl with baby fat, and she was locked out of the door. Judging from the antagonistic scenes, this girl is probably the heroine. Looking further, we found that the girl is indeed the heroine, her name is Delia, she is the daughter of Uncle Hermann, and she has good cooking skills. She will soon embark on the path of studying with our protagonist John. There is a rivalry and interaction, and the next plot has to be carried out together. It can be said that it has created a lot of conditions for the emotional development of the heroine and the hero. I guess the ending will be HE. As for whether there is a harem, it depends on what our author means. We can only look forward to it~ In addition, if possible, I hope the author can pay more attention to the wording. I think it is because sometimes the coding is too tiring. Therefore, there is a lack of consideration in some places, and the rivalry between characters of the same sex is okay, and it is just a general idea how to write it, but the rivalry between men and women needs to be strengthened~ In short, I hope the author will continue to work hard~ Looking forward to the next direction of the protagonist John~
Hello everyone, I am the author
If you have any opinions, feel free to say so.
After reading Chapter 30, let me take a breath ('▽')
The solemn and elegant castle, the wonderful and gorgeous magic, the exotic and unique culture... John's world is simple and resolute, with a small and exciting spirit of chivalry. This book is suitable for reading when you are busy. It is not exciting, but it has its own brilliance. In short... It's magically fascinating. Only watching a little bit at a time, with (non-fat 🤥) snacks and drinks, and then engaging in a battle-like daily routine (homework)... Well, I just like this feeling. As for the writing problem, I may have found it unsatisfactory in the early stage, but I liked it more and more later on (perhaps because I am used to straight male descriptions). The visual sense is quite strong, and I really appreciate the author's details. The just-right narration even makes me happy about the integration between the work and me as a reader (the legendary resonance) - of course, there is a lot of room for improvement. Fighting!
Academy chapter is ready to begin
Suddenly I found that Joseph is more suitable to be the protagonist 😠. After entering the academy chapter, I will devote more space to describing the characters around the protagonist. I already have an outline of the general content after that, but how to write it is another matter. ∠(`ω´*)∠(`ω´*)∠(`ω´*) Yesterday I suddenly went crazy and coded nearly 8,000 words. The academy chapter is much easier to write than those magic exams, okay? In addition to thinking about all kinds of things, you also need to write poorly (๑ŏ ŏ๑) So! I plan to skip the midterm exam, and I will probably skip the final exam as well... It depends on the situation.
Among a bunch of cool and domineering book titles, it's rare to find a normal one
Everyone has something extraordinary, it's just that no one knows it. When someone completely describes everything about him, he is no longer ordinary.
Already collected, let's get together with the newlyweds~
Come on brother, lie in bed and read your book
Questions about the writing style of this book.
Although no one has criticized it yet, I have realized a problem, that is, this book is a Western fantasy, but it contains many words that are only found in China, such as common sayings and idioms. There is nothing I can do about it, after all, I am not a Westerner. So, that's it, it can't be changed. (Of course it's also because I'm lazy)
Come on, good job, write well, don't be a eunuch
😰. Regular start,.
My heart was a little shaken.
 ̄へ ̄: Originally, when I wrote this book, I hoped to record every bit of John, so each chapter would be written in more detail (actually, it was not). However, this has been criticized by many friends, that is, they cannot see the fun point, and books without fun will dissuade readers! ( ๑ŏ ŏ๑ ): So what do you want to see? Ordinary people's counterattack? The emotional life of ordinary people? Just look at how John chases Lydia. Ordinary people's pretentious journey? Or was it his life that I wanted to write about in the first place, and that's it? ( •̥́ˍ •̀ू ): Bah, no one answered anyway, so I just wrote it according to my own heart. \( ̄ ̄)/: Those book friends who have collected books, thank you!
The author said that although the novel is classified as fantasy, the overall style and writing style are actually biased toward light novels, including the use of emojis, which will be more in line with the tastes of light novel lovers. You can go to the light novel diandianquan and book lists for recommendations. Also, personally, I like this style of writing very much, like matcha cake.
It looks good, come on, the story is still very good
Praise justice! (Hhhhhhh)
Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Compared to the protagonist cheating all the way and sweeping across all directions, I actually want to see the protagonist grow up bit by bit. I have always believed that the essence of Western fantasy is fairy tales, and fairy tales are dull, but dull and beautiful But the author must also realize that refreshing writing is the main theme after all. Nowadays, few people can calm down and watch a person's growth, so no matter how good the quality of the novel is, the results may not be good. But as long as you keep writing, I'll support it.
What is your major?😏
Our group is no longer active.
Because enough is enough for ordinary people. Ordinary people no longer want to be ordinary people in their next life. So this is why novels about geniuses and losers are so popular.
The writing is a bit poor, making it sleepy and boring to read. The settings are okay, and the author has taken great care. Come on
I'm not in the mood to read this book. It's bland and not to my taste, but I still supported it because I want you to be the next me.
Why can't ordinary people become the protagonists? Because they have no shining points and cannot attract readers. When the book attracts readers, the protagonists are no longer ordinary people.