Let Go of Fengshen and Let Me Come

I am considered a new reader of Qidian. I have always read physical books before, and I came across this book by the author accidentally. When I first started reading it, I thought it was average, but I had nothing to do, so I continued reading. It's almost sixty chapters now. I feel that the author is really attentive and making progress little by little. Each little foreshadowing begins to dig holes for the great cause of becoming a god. The writing style is average at first, and will get better in the later stages. There is progress. I have bought a physical book of Mortal before, and I felt that the pace was too slow at the beginning. It only got better after 500,000 or 600,000 words. I hope the author can continue to work hard. I will continue to follow up, not asking for speed, I just hope to tell this story better and better. I am not an old bookworm for more than ten years. I haven't read many books. Anyway, I think they are very good. Keep up the good work. Also, I support Feng Yuan and Shi Ji. Feng Yuan, remember Shi Ji's warning and don't mess with women! ! ! ! !

There are some minor issues with the handling of some details in this book (I had a feeling when I was reading it, but I forgot to give specific examples, so I will just talk about my feelings in general terms). The problems are not serious but very trivial, which has caused many people in Qidian to abandon the book one after another because of the so-called poisonous points. Although I can't understand this idea at all (even with The Legend of the Condor Heroes and Dragon Knight, there are no people who hate this plot and don't continue to read it). I don't know how to solve this problem. If I know it, I'll write my own book. Maybe I'll handle it myself if I write too much. After talking about the shortcomings and then talking about the good points, the reason why I can keep reading is that the author's writing style or the concepts expressed are very good and positive, but the specifics are not very clear. But I believe that the author of every book will give it a soul. The soul of this book feels fresh and natural. To put it more abstractly, it is like a spring breeze. This is what I like very much. Even if there are other flaws, I still feel very comfortable after watching it. I don't feel like I have been brainwashed and invaded by weird ideas, nausea, etc. To summarize, the author created a very interesting soul for this book with what he wanted to express. However, due to the lack of some details, unclear explanations, or poor handling of some places, etc., These made people feel scratched and felt that something was wrong, and it felt that it was a little different from what they wanted to see. Therefore, there are some flaws in the appearance of this book. This is so uncomfortable, okay~_~Interesting soul + Grandma Qiao's appearance, emmmm, at least she's not a bitch. Although I feel like I can stand up and talk without pain in my back, I still hope that the author can persevere and slowly hone his skills. He may not be as talented as those great masters, but his growth is like PS. It's still good to make a photo of Grandma Qiao's appearance. Uncut jade will always shine, as long as you keep polishing it

Emmmm The writing is a bit poor, but it's still okay to enter as a disciple of Shiji. Your writing is a bit fluent, and the combat description is a bit weak. I need to practice my new work. Come on. The writing is refined, and there is a problem that it is easy to jump while reading. You can write an outline first, and then write some stories. Write slowly, come on

It's okay, I hope it will be updated stably

Is this book a comic book with a two-dimensional silly and joyful style of making random comments?

The Great Desolation Stream starts from the Buddhist version, which borrows from Fengshen Journey to the West, but the characters are all orthodox. Hongjun is dedicated to the prehistoric world, and there is no good and evil in the Three Qing Dynasties. The two sages of the West are focused on the prehistoric west, and Nuwa is still respected by people. I don't know since when, the author of the prehistoric novels finalized the characters in it. Tongtian is good, primitive is bad, and I am good or bad. The main reason is that Nuwa, the empress of the Tang and Tang Dynasties, actually became a daughter-in-law, and she will not let Daji go in Fengshen. . . Although Xianxia is not like martial arts, which pays most attention to chivalry, there is also a word for chivalry, which is as good as water, virtuous, and enlightenment. The protagonist is an ordinary person, with selfishness, cowardice, and evil in human nature. Only when he has washed away his glory, gone through hardships, and can distinguish right from wrong can he truly grow, not his level of cultivation. Below the saints are all ants, and above the saints there is no good or evil! This book may have many problems, but I have tried to avoid them. Like most novel authors, I work hard to write well. I will basically make a summary every ten to five chapters to prevent it from falling apart. I will also work hard on each map, conceiving first and then drawing the map. These records are in the group, mainly to prevent writing collapse. I have no writing talent, and there may not be other authors who work hard. I just try my best to achieve the final presentation. . . It's up to the readers, but no matter what, please respect everyone. Thank you lovely readers. . . Comparison

I must be a fake girl. . . I actually like reading novels written by men. The author's ideas are very novel and the writing is very interesting. Please continue to follow up and update soon!

Let me tell you that Nezha deserves to die.

Finished it in one go, it's really beautiful. I haven't read such an interesting Fengshen novel in a long time. The story is getting more and more exciting. It may be a bit dull at the beginning, but as I write it later, it becomes more and more attractive. From the plot to the writing, it becomes more and more beautiful. The author would like to thank you for updating! Little expectation, yah yah yah.

Suddenly I remembered Ji Chang's last words and planned to trick Lao Jiang. His last words probably meant: Ji Fa! You cannot defeat Zhou and you cannot do anything disloyal to the Lord, but you must listen to your father-in-law and serve him accordingly. Lao Jiang is here to complete the surname Zhou Fazhou! You have been gossiping all your life, wouldn't you know? When the time comes to defeat Zhou successfully, his son will become the lord of the world. If he fails to defeat Zhou, he will be young and ignorant and bewitched by Lao Jiang...😁

I know it even if you don't spoil it Can the heroine die Small money to support (we are iron roosters) Keep writing yours Come on

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I finished reading a good book, but it was a bit confusing in some places. I didn't know what the main character was going to do a few times.

The plot is incoherent and abrupt, and it always goes on for a long time inexplicably. The level is also not clear. A magic weapon can kill the big monster beyond the level. Have you ever thought that you don't have enough magic power?

After reading three chapters, since the protagonist has traveled through time, he shouldn't have his memory sealed.

Can't you change your name to something more normal after traveling through time? Is it so difficult for authors nowadays to come up with nicer names?

Hurry up and write the next book. I want to invest in it!

You've put up with all the poisonous points in the past, right? When I was about 120 chapters, I had two lists of gods? Are you kidding me?

Looking forward to the author's next book. Anyway, for me, this book is at least a source of food.

I hope the protagonist can be less clever. I often see the protagonist going undercover everywhere. It's very tiring. Strength is the most important thing.

Gold always shines, recommended from the book list. It's very well written, keep it up! ! !

The garbage protagonist can cultivate immortality. Who wants to go back to modern times and live for decades? What's the point? After becoming an immortal for thousands of years, he will return to modern times.

This introduction is so familiar😂😂😂

The three sects of Fengshen have not yet begun. Are they one family? Will Tongtian's disciple be revealed to his true form? The saint's face is gone, has Deng Lun run away? Still eaten by a wolf, the pig's feet are still a bit greedy for Master's body,**

The protagonist just wants to be a little person who eats and waits to die.

Write a book: I am bound to the Gods of Journey to the West by Sun Wukong

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

Reminds me of another book in which the protagonist is Shi Ji