Hogwarts Days

The protagonist is a 60-year-old wizard, but when the author later wrote it, he completely described it as a shy and sullen little boy. There are also contradictions in some places in the book, such as how could someone who had studied at Hogwarts not know how to get to Diagon Alley instead ask "Excuse me". It is said that he is a staff member of some department of the Ministry of Magic, but after traveling through time and space, he can only make a living by shining shoes. In summary, it has no characteristics. The protagonist is not extremely intelligent, and there is almost no pleasure brought about by foresight. The characters are also very ordinary. If you want to see the boss reborn and show off, you can leave.

The character creation is very poor, the writing power is not enough, and there are all kinds of inconsistencies in the writing. I want to portray absolute reason without emotions, but in reality it is childlike and childish. I want to write a cold story like a confession of killing a sister, but in reality it is still childish. The only saving grace is that this isn't a crappy spectacled Hermione redhead story....

Double wear? I think I will kneel down. .