July Flowers

What is the flower of July? The small fins are red and the fins are red, and the brilliant golden sunflowers are. A meaningful and imaginative title is often the beginning of a book gaining readers. The first chapter at the beginning is a large page of scene layout and rendering. The scenery is described in extremely detail, just like poetry and painting. If you follow the author's mind, the beautiful scenery will be as bright as your eyes. After the scene description, there is the plot. The plot adopts montage technique and multi-line narrative. A mysterious portrait points directly to Xinghua Village, Yueyan Pavilion, and Tangmen. Many forces are undercurrent. What is the boy in the portrait? What are the major forces? Suspense abounds, and the transitions flow smoothly. The readers are curious and unsatisfied, so they continue reading quickly. A good beginning is half of a masterpiece. The author's style is more realistic, the writing is delicate, and it is deeply emotional. It can be seen that the author has a hidden dragon in his heart that pays tribute to the classics and creates them. Zhou Yi said: Don't use Qianlong, but Yuan Henryzhen will help you see the adults. If the author perseveres through the difficulties of newcomers, he will definitely achieve great success! My advice to the author is to pay attention to the content while also taking into account the form. Judging from the table of contents, the author lacks some awareness of chapter division, which may make readers think that the author is not serious enough. Then wouldn't all the hard work in the chapters be wasted? Also, if the plot wants to precipitate suspense, it needs to be told slowly and in detail, covering all aspects; do not overly push the plot, and there will be no scenery except for the description of the scenery. I wish the author will continue his efforts, achieve success, win the spring breeze in March and the peach blossoms in April!

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