Song of the Sea

The circle leader has written a book? Come and leave a footprint

Briefly talk about the advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are less nonsense, smooth plot, and fast advancement of the main plot. The disadvantage is that the plot is not exciting enough. The characterization is a bit thin. The fighting isn't exciting enough. Features are relatively few. Let me tell you the reason: The reason why the plot is not ups and downs enough is probably because there is little foreshadowing and little atmosphere. I suggest that you use some suspenseful twists and contrasting techniques. The reason why the image of the characters is not clear enough is because there is less daily writing. There is not enough character development. Of course, this is only Chapter 10, and it may be too early to say this. After all, it is a bit difficult to lay out the wonderful characters in Chapter 10, so I suggest: 1. The characters in the early stage can be more facial-shaped. 2. A little more daily. 3. You can usually observe familiar people and unfamiliar people around you, and see how to describe the expressions, movements, and demeanor of familiar people; for unfamiliar people, can you practice how to use the shortest words to portray more distinctive character traits? Lu Xun is a master in this area. You can review his description of characters. The reasons why the fighting is not exciting enough: 1. Use a little foreshadowing and contrast to create a little atmosphere, and don't be too straight. 2. Refer to Jin Yong Gulong's description of the fighting surface. 3. It is recommended to watch more short videos of fighting movie clips and practice summarizing them in words. 4. It is recommended to read books on traditional Chinese medicine, especially acupuncture, meridians and the like, to open up more imagination.

Why doesn't the protagonist's name just change to Shen Lang?

I've read more than 200 chapters in a single game and still persist... I admire it.

Ah, what a pity, the investment period has passed ( .ớ ₃ờ)Pel

I am the first, dear, remember, your first time is with me.

I haven't read enough after reading four chapters and adding wedges... 😠 This kind of writing style... It would be great if it can be updated daily 😰