I Am Cultivating Immortality in the Human World

The writing is really good, I will always support it and update it soon!

Very exciting article, awesome! It doesn't feel procrastinating or aggressive, which is good.

Haha, I applaud the plot, the skills are so profound, I like it

Dad, I ask weakly, do you still have manuscripts saved?

I forgot which book I recommended, so I will read it patiently. But there are two things I can't stand. Firstly, in order to show that the little girl is lively and talkative, a lot of meaningless dialogue content is written, and the word count is too high; Secondly, at the beginning, I can feel that the male protagonist is very awesome, but his awesomeness is not reflected in the book at all. Simply put, it is not interesting enough. So when I read Chapters 4 and 5, I jumped directly to the next 20 chapters or so. The content didn't catch me, so I planned to give up. The writing style is indeed good, but for me, it is not attractive enough

There are a lot of typos, I hope the author can correct his attitude in writing the book

The heroine is so kind——, I feel sad 😭😭

I feel like the writing is a bit rushed. It reads in a hurry. The writing style is inconsistent with the character of the protagonist. Um. . It's hard to tell. Maybe it's a problem with my state of mind.