I'll Be the Sect Leader

Doesn't the author know that erasure is a taboo in system writing? . . Aren't you afraid of running into the street? Any weird punishment is fine, but it must not be erasure.

This person named Feng Yun is very problematic. If I were the protagonist, I would definitely tell him to get lost. People who speak freely will cause trouble sooner or later. Write it down quickly.

There are not many readers for this book because you describe the characters according to traditional novels, which are too traditional and have no levels. Most readers are now accustomed to the messy hierarchical model of nature, nurture, and soul. They have forgotten that traditional storytelling, even the novels of Jin Yong and Gu Long, also have certain levels of distinction. Or maybe I'm not used to it.

I gave up the book, and the skills I drew still have an expiration date.

Abandoned the book, the skills I drew still have an expiration date, so I won't read anymore.

I really don't understand why they accept each other as their disciples when they have already defeated them all. If we really want to raise the number of people, we might as well find a few orphans or accept a few trainee disciples.

Why did you add a time travel in front? Does the protagonist look like a time traveler at all? How is it different from the original character? There is no sense of conflict in the middle

A few personal suggestions. After reading dozens of pictures, I think you can change the settings a little: 1. For example, if you draw martial arts, you can set it so that you can draw it once a day. Whatever you draw, you can use this martial arts on that day and reset it the next day. 2. The points earned by completing tasks can be used to draw martial arts, such as 10,000, etc. This kind of martial arts can be learned, and can be upgraded by training or using points. 3. It is also suggested that you should not be too good at martial arts at the beginning. Unless you follow the invincible style, you will know the Nine Yin Manual and the Dugu Nine Swords, and you will feel invincible.

It's finished, so I won't give away the monthly pass (づ ●─● )づ

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