Wanjie Recipe

It was the first time I saw such a miserable author leaving a comment and whispered bb. After reading the first few pictures, I didn't even understand who the protagonist was and what he was trying to express. The character portrayal was flawed and didn't make me feel immersed. Reading novels is just YY entertainment. The boss should at least portray a personality for Pig's Feet first, so that people can feel immersed and then continue reading slowly. The jokes are used It's very abrupt. For example, when a funny person wakes up in a strange place and gets up with broken shoes (Destroying Evil), and you make him stand up expressionless and with resentment in his eyes, I don't have much to say. There are too many shortcomings so I won't give examples one by one. Let's treat it as a practice work. Watch and learn from other big guys. Come on, come on.

It's so deserted. Is this the dilemma that new writers face?😢

It's really miserable! !

I came in after reading the title of the book and was immediately persuaded to leave.

Although I say I saved, I'm actually better than many newbies. It would be a pity to give up like this.

. . . . It's deserted enough. I hope it's a two-dimensional one.

It turns out that there really is a starting point for a stand-alone version...