Sword Master of Order

It was put on the shelf too quickly and it didn't look cool enough.

Please stop writing emotional dramas. No matter how good your writing skills are, you can't stand this kind of approach. Like your current situation, the protagonist saves life, and then the heroine repays the favor. There are only two suitable ways to do it. One is that this is insignificant to the protagonist. With the help of the relationship between strong and weak and the relationship between repaying kindness and being repaid, the hierarchy is completely established, and there is no equality. The second one is that the female protagonist is stronger than the male protagonist, the male protagonist desperately saves the female protagonist, and then the female protagonist gets promoted like a boss. Allow the desperate reasons to benefit. Like you currently, the heroine is basically useless and is still a tsundere, and then the protagonist makes various efforts to persuade her to quit. Oh, yes, there is also the tsundere aspect. Tsundere is a trait that, if you want to describe it as cute, it means that it is far more coquettish than arrogant, which is basically equivalent to being cute. Either the heroine is very useful, she helps the protagonist after she is proud, and she pays a lot of money. Like this heroine, she is useless and yet she is still arrogant every day. . . See for yourself what the effect is →_→

In fact, as an author, you have to believe in yourself and write according to your own plan without being disturbed by other things. Originally, your first deposit was over a million, so just keep writing. But if you have to rewrite it and your plan is completely messed up, you will definitely not be able to write. I hope I can write well this time, keep up the good work and look up to you.

If you dare to do it again you will be dead, just wait to change your vest😤😤😤

Hurry up and update it, the last one will be gone as soon as you keep it.

I would like to express my personal opinion. After reading the latest update, I am 10% dissatisfied. Both the male protagonist and the female protagonist are a bit brainless. The heroine Emilia is very unlikeable and has no regard for the fact that she is the matron and housekeeper of the hero's wife's family. Just for some cosmetics and a small profit, the male protagonist was sold, and those benefits were added to the story. The background of the novel is that the upper class in the Middle Ages were aristocrats. The bloodline that maintains family relationships. Although this is nominally a borrowed seed without inheritance rights, the bloodline is there. If the family becomes weak in the future, or something happens, can you guarantee that others will not use this bloodline to take a bite of you? Moreover, this period is still a special period of taking sides. Announcement of the borrowed seed at this time without any discussion with the male protagonist is equivalent to directly pulling the male protagonist onto someone else's chariot. Doesn't the heroine have this awareness? I remember that the heroine is from a noble family. Has what she learned in her original family been eaten? I really want to ask the author if he is afraid that the male protagonist will be too strong and put someone around him that will slow down the progress. Or maybe the heroine wants to take revenge for the destruction of her family. The most intolerable thing is that the male protagonist is complacent about having his seed borrowed. What is there to be happy about? Is there a shortage of women around the male protagonist? Aren't there female prisoners of war? Find them to vent your physical desires. If you like a noble person, why don't you go to a neighboring country to find a female noble? The value of force is no problem! Moreover, the sky is high and the emperor is far away, so there are no hidden dangers. The rabbit hasn't eaten the grass on the edge of the nest yet. This should be the most intolerable part. You are being treated as a bargaining chip, without ever asking yourself what you mean. It's like when you don't want to eat a certain kind of food during a meal, someone forcefully feeds it into your mouth, and while doing so, they say it's good for you. And this person is still your wife. I really want to ask the author about the sanity and caution of the protagonist. We readers want to read organized and logical novels, not this kind of novice Long Aotian Mary Sue. This routine has long been outdated. I know that authors have to work and write novels, which is very hard. I am also willing to spend money to subscribe to novels to provide the author with reasons and motivation to write, but what I want is not perfunctory or brainless. If the author needs to think about the plot, or feels tired and needs a rest, you can leave a note asking for leave and leave it to the readers. I don't know, but I understand and am very happy to wish you a blessing. I hope you can bring us better and more interesting novels.

She gets married out of nowhere and is poisoned to death. The protagonist is like a child. He does whatever he wants and abandons the book. I was originally looking forward to the plot of the royal capital. I can only say that the author's plot is reasonable.

I don't like Emilia myself, it smells like a Mary Sue. His family was destroyed, he was captured, and he met a handsome, powerful, noble, infatuated, pure and enlightened master with a bright future. He became a maid and then a housekeeper. She seduces the master and becomes the mistress. The old servant returns and the family status becomes more stable. Her husband is a virgin and she is bent on kneeling and licking her, giving up her status as a more noble and beautiful female aristocrat. My husband is famous all over the world and has a lot of money. A group of female nobles who were previously out of reach now kneel down and lick me. Now I think Emilia is a pig's trotters. Now she arranges for others to borrow seeds from pig's trotters. I don't care whether the person borrowing seeds is a rich woman or a king. I think this is an insult to men. She probably treats pig's trotters as a licking dog. We discussed it all without leaking any words, so she can only give up first. Goodbye!

The author acted like he had never seen a woman before, so he gave up and wasted my subscription.

Another person who sees a beautiful woman as his ancestor, and his enemies are all smart, and he doesn't even know how to use a better honey trap.

Why did the gods in the sky die by the sword? What did the gods do?

It's enough to see Lord Feng. From now on, the protagonist will be written as a pig. It's nothing interesting and disgusting to death.

Whether it's this Sword Master or the previous one, The Year of the Sword Master, I was poisoned by the author's emotional drama. I can't write but I just have to write. That's enough😓. The poor performance is understandable. So many people have made suggestions. The author covers his ears and eyes. He just doesn't read and doesn't listen. Where there were pitfalls in the previous book, there are still pitfalls in this book. I'm speechless╯╰

I hope it can reduce the childish plot where the protagonist is always being cheated. Others write these intrigues because they are excellent. You are better off writing other chapters that are bland and overly plotted, because you can't see the growth of the protagonist or deal with it. Only other people's calculations and the protagonist's helplessness are led by the nose!

Can't you write without belittling Taoism? You are so awesome, why haven't I seen you fooling around with something? Are you pretending to be yourself? Can't you write well? Do you have to belittle something that has been trampled on for thousands of years to show that you are superior? Do you want to be so good that you are still a street kid now?

After reading the comment section, someone made a suggestion: kill the heroine, then resurrect his wife for more than ten chapters, and then forget about her.

It's very well written. Just these four words. If you want to talk about problems, there are them. Personally, the heroine is very uncomfortable.

I really can't swallow the poison of several apprentices. The author's own description of the character of several male apprentices gives people a very bad feeling. He really conveys his own destiny. Not a single novice village was created, and the main character was just like Sanqing.

Wow, it's really poisonous. Didn't this Emilia really travel through time? I won't complain about her relationship with the protagonist, but picking her feet? Are you still grabbing snacks with your hands that are picking at your feet? Oh my god, who did the author put into this? Is this the character of the eldest lady? Will the species mutate if we relax? To be honest, after reading so much Western fantasy, I really gained some knowledge. Sister, are you so stable before you even gave birth to a child? Regardless of the image, are more than ten years of aristocratic education really just a passing cloud and drifting away in the wind? Is this really something a noble lady can do? The sense of violation is too serious

Before the knighthood, it was a rare good book. I read it in one sitting, but after the knighthood, it was hard to read. It can be said that these are two books, one with a score of 9 or above and the other with a failing grade. To be honest, I'm a little disappointed that the protagonist's character is so different. In the early stage, in order to survive, he was good to everyone, pretended to be a child, didn't "invent" too many things, and knew how to hide it, which shows that the protagonist is wise and resourceful. Later, I felt that he was just a fool.

I haven't read this book yet, but I recommend reading Rebirth of Japan with Swords first, it is indeed written with intelligence.

Now the first 50 pictures that must have a female protagonist can basically be discarded. The emotions are not well written, and there are still many female protagonists.

Please don't write about female protagonists anymore. In your Sword Master book, it was just because the female protagonist danced that it made me want to vomit. The rest is okay. Don't write about female protagonists in others. What's interesting about women? Embellishment or no unnecessary ambiguity.

It can be said that the writing style of your Juggernaut is excellent. Except that it seems that you are not very good at writing emotional and family lines, there are no other problems.

Hahaha, he is really a eunuch. . . It's such a pity. The first part of this book is really good. It tells a super immersive story about how a time traveler grows up and accumulates abilities in the early stage. But in the middle stage, he falls into a trap as soon as he enters the world. . The character quickly collapsed. . Pity

Sure! 666Those who scold the heroine? For example, your wife often invites women to your home for you to sleep with, but you don't want to? Made, if I am extremely happy~_~, what do you think?

Oriental martial arts are transformed into Xianxia with Western game skills. The political background is the same as that of a bandit who takes over the mountain and becomes the king. Whether a captive maid or a noble lady, the etiquette of birth is gone. Do you want to make a revolution or what?

It's a bit short, but it's finished anyway. I suggest the author not to write about religion. The great pope who was behind the scenes was banned for being suspected of religion.

Just by looking at it, I accidentally finished the book! ! ! !

There aren't any good light novels at the moment, and my personal opinion is that I can write about anything except Western fantasy backgrounds.