
Traveling Through Another World with a Precision Pool
带着精准池子穿异界
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 601k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Otherworld Continent
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Sorry, I regarded this precision pool as a sperm pool. Is there any way I can be saved? I read this book wrong every time I see it. It seems that if you are destined, then read it.
This is the first time I have seen an author who is so aggressive
Let me tell you my own opinion. There are too many psychological activities and descriptions of the supporting characters kneeling and licking the protagonist. Although it is good for the word count, it makes readers uncomfortable. Moreover, because most people have a mentality that time travelers are superior to natives (most people who have read too many time travel books are like this), so when you wrote the book, you created a situation where all the characters kneel and lick the protagonist. In fact, this is not good, you don't Because he is the protagonist, it is natural for him to put his character first, but to find ways to highlight the protagonist from other aspects to make it more enjoyable. The result is the same, the process is different, and the look and feel are different. My mind is too messy and I may not express what I want to say clearly. I say goodbye. I wish the author's writing will get better and better. Your plot is actually good, but the description is not good.