The Superman of Marvel

The main character is mentally retarded. Give me some time. I'm not good enough and can't write what I want. It makes the main character look a bit silly. Let me write another 100,000 words. Give me some patience. I am slowly figuring out how to write! Thanks! The writing is so poor and I am very anxious! I can't let you look at me like you ate shit. I have been reading novels for almost ten years, so I know how you feel. But it was really the first time I wrote it, and what I was thinking changed after I wrote it. I was also very painful. I will try my best to avoid the problems you mentioned. Take your time and change it little by little! Thank you to everyone who reads this book. There are also typos, it was written on a mobile phone, I will pay attention to it

This is my first time writing a book, so there will definitely be a lot of bugs. If you have any comments, please share them here. I will read them and make corrections if I can. Also, gentlemen, please be gentle and don't give me a bad blow.

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I just got off work and wrote two chapters in a stumbling manner. I couldn't even finish it! Writing a book is so hard! I envy those who write such beautiful books!

I'm surprised, are all novels written like this now? I have an older sister, and I get bullied by her all day long, and yet I still don't get angry. It's called affection, and I feel bad. Do you have masochistic tendencies? Don't say anything about a good relationship. You can still feel confident about stealing your money and spend it, but you can cry just because you say it. It's disgusting.

Is the heroine invisible? ? Bus, this one

Come on, let me explain it to the author. Dachao has a super brain, but just like a computer, it only starts up when it wants to use it. It is usually shut down, and when it is shut down, its IQ is zero, haha😄, I can't explain it anymore.

Not only has the mind and IQ of a 5-year-old become 5-year-old, but he has also become a 5-year-old! The narrative is a bit slow, and my sister is very annoyed. I can't figure out why many authors write some disgusting supporting characters? Are you afraid that your book will become popular? Also, the day his sister found out about his ability, he promised to go to Africa with his sister in the next few days to strengthen her. Didn't you just say after beating the robber that you weren't going to force anyone? So why should Wakanda strengthen your sister? Big face? You don't need to read any further to know that the protagonist will either be a holy mother or a troubled mother in the future!

Author, you Superman writing is okay 🙂 Feilu next door wrote that Superman traveled to the Super Seminary and was a Silver Super, but he didn't beat Morgana and was injured (although I didn't expect that Morgana's strength of less than 1,000 tons hurt Bai Yin Chao 😒) and there are a lot of super gods in the comments talking about beating Superman.

In the second chapter, I saw the chapter about stealing money and persuaded me to quit.