Seeking the Truth Begins with a Pocket Watch

It's too dramatic to use these well-known names as the protagonist's names, Su Youpeng? From the Little Tigers? Will he wear it into Huanzhugege? 😃

The fact is that for a reader with obvious preferences like me, I found it very uncomfortable to read your first chapter. I'm going to talk about a setting issue here. I'm not sure if you can understand it. However, this is a question that almost every author will face, that is, what is your character positioning? In the book, your male protagonist's parents were hit and killed by someone who ran a red light. In the end, he was able to get away with it by exploiting legal loopholes. To be honest, I am a law major. This is purely your unfounded imagination and has no legal basis at all. Secondly, the male protagonist's inner anger cannot be calmed down, and he is also terminally ill. However, I can't feel the feeling of despair and anger in the atmosphere described in your book. How do you describe it? You used a lot of the protagonist's inner monologue, but he was just helpless and angry. Pay attention to my wording. You took a character you set and deduced the anger and despair according to normal logic, and abruptly lowered the intensity of the emotion, turning it into helplessness and anger. Frustration and anger are often just complaints and a bad mood. But angry and desperate people can be extremely crazy and hysterical, and they can also trample everything in the world. But you didn't write that. You just wrote that he had leukemia but still didn't want to sell the house. So does a dying person have any unfulfilled wishes? His close relative died at the hands of others. Has he ever thought about revenge? How should he retaliate against them when he is extremely weak? And make the corrupting side of power public? While he was thinking about these questions, two girls saw such a handsome man and were about to strike up a conversation. But he saw a pair of eyes without any trace of living being shining with a vicious light like poisonous snakes. The two girls were stunned at the moment, and they didn't come back to their senses until the man disappeared into the street. Isn't this more reasonable? A desperate and angry protagonist needs two supporting characters to enhance his handsomeness? Or is it to highlight his inner determination and madness driven to death? Which is more important? If you have no sense of reality and three-dimensionality in the setting of your characters, it is naturally impossible for you to make the entire novel into one, because any character is just a tool for you to express and promote the plot, but it seems that you have never thought about whether the character itself has reached the standard of a "living person"? I didn't read the rest. At your request, I came over and wrote some nonsense. Don't take it to heart.

Haha, reward yourself😃

I discovered this book by accident, and I really think it's pretty good.

Come on, the content of Liangjian is very good.

After reading the first three chapters, my curiosity has been successfully aroused. The author has good skills.

Keep asking for updates, please update quickly, one chapter a day, this is too slow, not enough to read.

I came in based on the title of the book. It is very well written. I recommend it, collect it, support it, and cheers for the author.

Uncle Jiu and Tianlong are both poorly written, and the introduction doesn't feel very appealing.