Start with Swallowing

Author, can you please stop being so exaggerated when writing your article? Anything big is a desperate situation, anything is a chance, and if something happens or nothing happens, it will be extremely this or that. If you exaggerate too much, readers will think your book is boring! I found that there were quite a lot of people watching at the front, but less and less people at the back, and I couldn't even see the comments. You'd better sort out the content before writing, otherwise you'll be in trouble if no one reads it later. The subject matter is very good and attractive. Don't destroy the Great Wall. Wouldn't it be nice to interact more with readers? If you look at the top-ranked books, regardless of the content and writing style, those authors will just bubble up and interact in the comment area when they have nothing to do. If you talk often, you will give readers the feeling that you are very responsible for this book. You are writing this book very seriously, so when you read it, you will not worry that you will become a eunuch, and you will feel free to subscribe. After all, many people are not willing to waste their monthly tickets and starting points on a book that may be a eunuch.

Come on! I support you! Just keep going, it's very well written.

Be more rigorous. Some things are like this before, but they change later.

What kind of golden elixir, Yuanying Yuanshen, what kind of immortal saint, what kind of heavenly king, everyone vomited when they saw it, no one wants to see it. One more thing, the three books and systems of Journey to the West and Fengshen are different and should not be confused together. In Taoism, Lao Tzu and others are the supreme gods. What is Hongjun?

If it's not enough, please read more. I like this book very much.

Reading is just for entertainment. Is it so bitter and resentful? It would be nice to switch the two worlds and upgrade, otherwise the entire family would be destroyed, and I would lose all my mood.

It's too poisonous, it started to poison from chapter 11, the evil star, and also forced to sensationalize

Starting from a perfect world, it looks just as good! ! !

Book reviews are just for experience!

A good book is better than blue.

Don't watch it anymore, the main character is not ruthless enough, his 6th brother is so bad, he didn't kill him in vain in the end

I have three wives and a few more to prepare. The protagonist in the latest chapter dies and the book will be finished tomorrow 🤓

It looks a bit messy and uncomfortable😭😭

It's still a good read. If you want to read a novel, you can read it according to your IQ. Isn't reading novels just to satisfy the empty spirit? It's better not to read it if it's so serious. Please update it quickly. Author, Shuangwen, update it quickly and the pace should be fast. The content can be exaggerated or awesome. Come on, order them all when they are released.

I've read Chapter 14 and I can't stand it anymore. Why don't you write about Swallowing Starry Sky? We must create a rubbish Dahong world, with family fighting, pretentiousness and slaps in the face, rubbish, farewell

After reading it, all those who devoured it are old bookworms

It's so embarrassing. I can't shed tears when my family in the main world is wiped out. But if someone I've known for a few days dies in another world, I'll burst into tears.

I suggest you write more about Swallowing Starry Sky. There are many fans who want to read Swallowing Starry Sky at Qidian, but there are very few who can surpass Luo Feng.

Why is there no review for such a good book?

The more I write about it, the worse it gets. I can no longer watch Lord Snow Eagle. The protagonist is like a toy that can be played with casually. As he plays with it, he becomes detached. Even people who don't know what they want can become detached.

To be honest, I can't write about Devouring World properly. I have to have a big red world pop up. Every time you go to that world, I skip it directly. Just click on the destruction over there and concentrate on writing Devouring World. I don't know how much the score of this book will increase. Do you also want you to write Luo Feng's emotional line? Isn't it enough to just go there? You have to make other people interested in you, and then give a girl to Luo Feng. Do you have a serious disease in your heart? I don't know why other readers don't mention it? Maybe most of the starting points are gay. Anyway, I read the comments of other books, pig's feet are given to girls, and there are people talking and laughing in the comment area, and they say it's a good gift. Is it because the world has changed or I can't keep up with the times

Reading this book, you can see the difference between the author and the great master. When writing about Swallowing Starry Sky, he used other people's routines to write it. But when he wrote about the main world, it was full of poisonous points. It was all about pretending to be a slap in the face.

Chapter 38: When calculating punching power, the upper part is written as 140,000 kilograms, and the lower part becomes 14,000kg (a zero is missing).

Is my prehistoric innate spiritual treasure so weak? Is it on the same level as the swallowed treasure?

It's getting watery. He can even kill the strongest person in the universe. The universe group still dared to form a coalition to kill, and it was still the master of the universe who sent him. What kind of logic is this? I know you can kill me, and then we form a team and line up to kill you? Returning to the Supreme Council of the Human Race, a group of venerables shouted to hand over the person who could kill the strongest man in the universe. Where did you get the courage? It really made me sick. There's no logic at all, it's just a forced word count. Goodbye

Is this fan writing pretty good?

The protagonist is really a fw, Venerable Luo Feng can kill the Lord of the Universe. The protagonist has more opportunities than Luo Feng, and the secret method is countless times stronger than Luo Feng. There are piles of various treasures, and he has trained three major clones. The genetic level before immortality is even more perfect. The core setting of the World Lord is still ten light years, becoming immortal should be more powerful, and the laws are still fully comprehended. As a result, killing a Venerable has so many nonsense, and the Lord of the Universe cannot be killed. It is really a waste. In summary, under the author's perfect control, the protagonist who should be extremely brave and dominate the world has become a ten-on-one fw. So the question is, is the fw the protagonist or the author?

I have written so many words, why does it still sound like a mentally retarded article? I will be asked to quit before the 20th chapter.

The more I write, the worse it gets, and the more I read, the more I get bored. The character's level of strength has improved but his thoughts remain stuck, and his lack of moral integrity makes people look ridiculous. Come on

I can't stand it for more than 30 chapters. The protagonist has such a soft character and despairs at every turn. How can such a person become a strong person? Successful people in any field are not strong-minded. Not giving up until death is not enough. Not giving up until death is enough. You, the protagonist, are pessimistic when encountering setbacks and despair at every turn. You are more ordinary than ordinary people.