Black Adam's Broken Wand

It's great. When I saw this book cut off in half, I felt that the author really deserved it. The protagonist has been swept away by the tide of the times from beginning to end, and is constantly being deceived, calculated, and forced. At the same time, many characters' actions and plots in the book do not have any logic, which makes people wonder what kind of state the author is writing in. I personally suggest that the author go to a detoxification center or a mental hospital for a few days, which may help improve the author's plot creation ability. This book started out very well, but it got worse and worse and more depressing as it went on. The protagonist was simply a loser. It is a miracle that so many chapters were serialized. I think the author is fully capable of writing a great novel. The author has good description ability and good worldview setting ability, but the author just likes to commit suicide and writes the plot in a mess. I think the author deserved this ending for this book.

This plot made me stupid. I cheated for a long time and got a lot of money. I also had hundreds of slaves who could fight. I just thought that I was going to start a magnificent road to lordship, but I ended up dead in a boat. Then a new power system came out. I couldn't understand the protagonist's behavior when the female subordinate died. It felt a bit excessive, and then after getting along for a period of time, you became friends with those people. ??? , Your men, and the woman you were angry about are all dead. I don't know whether this attitude is realistic or unrealistic.

Looks good, he must be the author of Hall of the Dead and The Great Spirit Tide.

The following chapters are well planned, this book is worth looking forward to

The protagonist of this book is really a villain with no bottom line. He is the worst and most evil person in the book. He will do anything to achieve his goals. He wants to kill his father, kills people at will, and creates natural disasters. I wipe. The more I looked at it, the more disgusting it became. As a time traveler who is a flower grower, is it really okay to not stick to any bottom line?

It feels like the more I write, the more confusing it becomes. .

I have read all three books written by the author, and I feel that there are several common faults. First, there is very little description of the accumulation process of the protagonist. For example, this book only has a beginning, and the Knights of the Bloodsworn Deer will come to fruition immediately in the next chapter. Second, the level of the protagonist. The Hall of the Dead upgrades too slowly. The Great Spirit Tide and this Black Adam The upgrade is too fast, and the upgrade process is sometimes unclear and not clearly described. Third, the protagonist is often calculated or even controlled by others, and he can't help himself. This is not to my liking, but it is still a minor problem. I only hope that the author can read this comment of mine and correct some mistakes.

It's a bit hasty, but it's a pity. I hope the author can go well in the future, so that we can have the opportunity to see your work again.

I also like the character of the protagonist very much. He is very decisive. Unlike most books nowadays, the protagonist is indecisive. To put it bluntly, he is a holy mother. He often smiles bitterly. There are not just one or two books where the protagonist often smiles bitterly. I don't know if he came from Qidian's bitter smile training class.

The early stage is pretty good, a low-demon world. But starting from the gift of gold coins, the economic system collapsed directly. In the early stage, the gold coins seemed to be very valuable, but they turned out to be like running water. The team at the beginning died completely. The sea battle began, the power system also collapsed, demigods came out, and the parchment was still of some use. The swordsmanship and half-wizard skills that were learned with great difficulty in the early stage were instantly worthless~ The 350 soldiers, gold coins, subordinates, and mercenary group that were prepared in the early stage were all dead! I seriously doubt that the author has no outline and rarely comments on the book. However, this book has great potential, but it is really a pity!