Black Adam's Broken Wand

It's great. When I saw this book cut off in half, I felt that the author really deserved it. The protagonist has been swept away by the tide of the times from beginning to end, and is constantly being deceived, calculated, and forced. At the same time, many characters' actions and plots in the book do not have any logic, which makes people wonder what kind of state the author is writing in. I personally suggest that the author go to a detoxification center or a mental hospital for a few days, which may help improve the author's plot creation ability. This book started out very well, but it got worse and worse and more depressing as it went on. The protagonist was simply a loser. It is a miracle that so many chapters were serialized. I think the author is fully capable of writing a great novel. The author has good description ability and good worldview setting ability, but the author just likes to commit suicide and writes the plot in a mess. I think the author deserved this ending for this book.

The writing is good, but it feels like it is separated from the front and back. When the protagonist arrives in the North, he immediately starts over. It seems that the hole dug in the previous dozens of chapters is not going to be filled. The author probably doesn't have a story outline and can't continue to compile it as he writes.

Why is there no update today? 😒

This plot made me stupid. I cheated for a long time and got a lot of money. I also had hundreds of slaves who could fight. I just thought that I was going to start a magnificent road to lordship, but I ended up dead in a boat. Then a new power system came out. I couldn't understand the protagonist's behavior when the female subordinate died. It felt a bit excessive, and then after getting along for a period of time, you became friends with those people. ? ? ? , Your men, and the woman you were angry about are all dead. I don't know whether this attitude is realistic or unrealistic.

Looks good, he must be the author of Hall of the Dead and The Great Spirit Tide.

The following chapters are well planned, this book is worth looking forward to

The protagonist of this book is really a villain with no bottom line. He is the worst and most evil person in the book. He will do anything to achieve his goals. He wants to kill his father, kills people at will, and creates natural disasters. I wipe. The more I looked at it, the more disgusting it became. As a time traveler who is a flower grower, is it really okay to not stick to any bottom line?

It feels like the more I write, the more confusing it becomes. .

I have read all three books written by the author, and I feel that there are several common faults. First, there is very little description of the accumulation process of the protagonist. For example, this book only has a beginning, and the Knights of the Bloodsworn Deer will come to fruition immediately in the next chapter. Second, the level of the protagonist. The Hall of the Dead upgrades too slowly. The Great Spirit Tide and this Black Adam The upgrade is too fast, and the upgrade process is sometimes unclear and not clearly described. Third, the protagonist is often calculated or even controlled by others, and he can't help himself. This is not to my liking, but it is still a minor problem. I only hope that the author can read this comment of mine and correct some mistakes.

I also like the character of the protagonist very much. He is very decisive. Unlike most books nowadays, the protagonist is indecisive. To put it bluntly, he is a holy mother. He often smiles bitterly. There are not just one or two books where the protagonist often smiles bitterly. I don't know if he came from Qidian's bitter smile training class.

It's a bit hasty, but it's a pity. I hope the author can go well in the future, so that we can have the opportunity to see your work again.

The early stage is pretty good, a low-demon world. But starting from the gift of gold coins, the economic system collapsed directly. In the early stage, the gold coins seemed to be very valuable, but they turned out to be like running water. The team at the beginning died completely. The sea battle began, the power system also collapsed, demigods came out, and the parchment was still of some use. The swordsmanship and half-wizard skills that were learned with great difficulty in the early stage were instantly worthless~ The 350 soldiers, gold coins, subordinates, and mercenary group that were prepared in the early stage were all dead! I seriously doubt that the author has no outline and rarely comments on the book. However, this book has great potential, but it is really a pity!

The accumulation and power system in the first 50 chapters are directly overturned. It is seriously doubtful that there is no outline.

The doppelgänger was a failure, so I simply rewrote the apprenticeship stage and was convinced. It sounded like a good setting and writing it was like re-reading the first 100 chapters. The author loves to use names instead of pronouns, and he wants to read his name in every sentence later. Adam gets up, Adam brushes his teeth, Adam eats breakfast, Adam gets ready to go. Don't you think you're making a fool of yourself by doing this? Every time you want to add a new character, you have to spend 56 chapters to write his story separately. The problem is that each new character appears in a very different way, so that skipping their individual chapters will not affect the development of the main story at all.

It feels really good. Others think that always changing camps, all the previous accumulation is in vain, etc. I don't think there is any poison. I just regard these forces as a ladder for his strength to advance. Facts have proved that his strength has improved. What I think more is that the protagonist is decisive and will not be restrained by the seemingly huge base every time.

When I saw the so-called Thirteen Giants, I completely felt that the author had failed to write it. To be fair, it shouldn't have been done, but I was still very unhappy. Author, you have laid the groundwork for so many chapters, and then you tore them all up. You have eaten up all the low-magic settings you set up before. If the protagonist relies on a golden finger, forget it. In the end, you rely on something, bloodline, just write whatever comes to mind, right? . . . Not a knight knows how to breathe, but a soldier can, and witches all appear, and the ancestors setting is suddenly added. The church does not have much mysterious power, and it is necessary to test the medieval bloodletting method. Suddenly, a sky-breaking enemy setting appears. . . . It would be fine if they were all hidden in the darkness. There is another one who came out to establish a kingdom and engage in a battle between twins. Who knows how long this book will eat up its own settings. I really can't stand it.

I* updated it😰

I really want to tie it up in a small dark room and let it play non-stop. 😃

Then get ready to start a new book. This book is still a big improvement compared to the previous one. It just feels like it and the concept of the practice system is also good. That is, the plot logic is not very satisfactory.

The book was okay at first, but after working hard for a long time, all his men were dead except for himself, and in the end he was with the people who killed his men! Pit ratio

What I wrote before is indeed quite interesting. I couldn't watch it anymore after that.

The writing is difficult, the plot is tasteless, and it is a pity to abandon it.

👍It's actually over

Just a little less words, the great master Lao Bai

Broken? I don't know where I ended up writing this book. The title of the book is Black Adam's Broken Wand. I have both Black Adam and the wand, but I haven't seen the break yet.

Western god-level GPG games such as Baldur's Gate, Divinity Original Sin, and The Witcher all provide evil endings. It has extremely strict settings for the entire world. Everyone who has played it will say that it is a shame. I don't have the IQ to play hard-core games. I leave the novice village and wander directly to the boss's lair in the later stage. I harvest NPC experience at will like the protagonist of this article. It turns out that I have killed the key characters and my experience level in the later stage cannot keep up. I have to start over. They are all ready-made routines, readers will definitely buy them, and they have been tried and true. Really, why didn't you do some research before writing this kind of Western fantasy? The author said that the writing is good, I suggest you play these top games and have a deep understanding of why it is called a masterpiece!

Oh, I'm back🪖

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The protagonist has no charm, and the emotions are not well portrayed. Forgive me, I only watched a little bit and couldn't stand it anymore.

The starting point of the protagonist is too low! Moreover, there is no systematic study of occultism, and the learning is very complicated. What achievements will be made in the future?