Realistic Pets Are Coming

Did you abandon the transition to the front in the middle? It still feels a bit messy, but overall the writing is okay. . Let me list the questions below~ After the wild wolf boss is killed, the description of the protagonist's subsequent behavior is a bit unreasonable. Anyway, when people finally kill the boss, they will touch the corpse or something. The data perspective is the golden finger of the protagonist, or does everyone have it, or everyone has his or her own talent, but the protagonist's talent is very rare There is also the transition part of the plot. After the plot of the wolf, he picked up an orangutan and went home, and the things that should be clearly written later were not written (clearly describe the changes in the orangutan and the reason why the slime turned into an egg). There is no beginning or end, and it jumps directly to the plot of the invasion of the later dimension, which is puzzling Of course. . Maybe the author also has reasons that are difficult to explain. If the chapter has been deleted, please make a note later. If the application is not returned, you can open another chapter and briefly outline the plot. In order to make it easier for readers to understand the author's story, thank you for your hard work 😃

No wonder no one is watching. Every time there is a fight, the pet runs away and the owner comes in. Is this a beast-control novel? Isn't this a royal novel? ? Just change the name, call it Reality Pet Online Master

I read the last chapter of this novel in one sitting and am very much looking forward to the subsequent plot. Come on!

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

After reading Chapter 40, I summarized the shortcomings 1. There is no distinction between priority and pet flow. Don't always write about people 2. The power system is unclear and the hierarchical relationship is not written. What is the relationship between ordinary and elite? Three, there is a golden finger but I can't use it Four, there is no way to upgrade pets, it's all blurry Five, it's basically daily life, there is no thrill of upgrading, no sense of satisfaction.

It's written in a mess. Goldfinger doesn't need to look for pets with good qualifications to find resources. Such a powerful ability is completely useless. Is this a pet novel or an alien war novel? They all reflect people. I don't see anything outstanding about pets. The adventure in the alien world is not just pretending to be an official on Earth. Luo Liba is completely off track.

The power system in the book is a bit confusing. I hope the author can unify it or list it in a single chapter. Finally, the author hopes not to be a eunuch.

I almost thought I was reading a pirated novel. All kinds of nonsensical typos, repeated sentences, too many words and too few words, which greatly affects the reading experience. Please be careful, the author 😡

After seeing Chapter 22, I don't want to read it if I join the official list. Personally, I think it might be better to join the official list.

It feels pretty good, it's my favorite type, but can you check it out? There are a lot of sentences that don't make sense and typos. I'm not complaining, there are so many.

Such a miserable result, Liuzhao

I like Dada's works, and I hope everyone will update more and create better content. I also hope to collect a lot of my work "Spiritual Master Volume".

What has real-life interaction is actually ar... What major manufacturers are doing now is MR... VR actually existed in the 1980s. It is now used because mass production costs are low and some people do content development. It is really not a high-end thing...

I really regret it. Fortunately, I found out before it was too late. I have read this novel several times, but I always thought it was not good because of the title. This time, I saw this book again, and with the intention of giving it a try, I found that I couldn't stop reading. The plot is concise and clear, with not many words, and it is very exciting. I hope the author will work harder and update more

Mainly in Chapter 89, where the alien beasts also have their own cities, I was a little confused and felt that pets were just like humans. The mainstream of this type of article should be about pets upgrading, and the protagonist catching pets and fighting, but it still hasn't been shown in chapters 80 and 90. I have a small opinion.

I saw it, and I read more than 100 chapters in Jiemen. I found that if I still press start to write, I will be very tired, and now I can't continue.

The author's writing is still relatively immature. Come on.

There are so many missing words and it's hard to read. Also, talent, how are the levels divided? It feels so confusing.

Brother, after these 50 or so pictures, you went too far off topic. Your outline is awesome.

Is there anything wrong with writing about people in pet novels? Isn't petting someone a pet?

I can't stand it anymore.

One question I would like to mention is that if the protagonist uses modern military items and weapons, he should need some training, otherwise it would be difficult to imagine someone who has not been trained to use them very well.